RickiMinaj Posted July 3, 2008 Report Share Posted July 3, 2008 usually, i do hate and sad poemsso i'll do a happy love one today, so im inverting it. But the tittle means more if you can figure it out ^^ [align=center]I'm looking at your faceWith the beauty unseenI could feel my heart shakeand my eyes widened Looking at your face made see love They made me see truthfulnessThey made me see heaven in hellThen made me see Light in the dark But all that went to wasteBecause it is you i care aboutNot your possessions or moneyNor your looks or beuty But what makes you a wholeYOur kindness and loveyour sweetness and smileI would speand eternity with you [/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Star Posted July 3, 2008 Report Share Posted July 3, 2008 That's a really nice poem. It seems like you put a lot of thought into it. I really like the poem. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted July 3, 2008 Report Share Posted July 3, 2008 minus the rather abunndent spelling errors (ignore the one i just made) the poem is rather nice ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucas Maximus Posted July 3, 2008 Report Share Posted July 3, 2008 Nice poem. I can see you have put thought into it. Good job, gphaku. =] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted July 3, 2008 Report Share Posted July 3, 2008 A nice warm nostalgic smile came across my face when I read this. Thank you :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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