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"Patriots of Honor" Set [INCOMPLETE] NEW CARD ADDED 7/6


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This is a brand new set that is in the making.
It may not be my best set of cards because I have been absent from YCM
for a few weeks. Well here they go.
[img]http://img394.imageshack.us/img394/4233/24796ut4.jpg[/img]
[img]http://img61.imageshack.us/img61/9522/24796ae7.jpg[/img]
[img]http://img366.imageshack.us/img366/3024/24796at5.jpg[/img]
All of these images are made by Ultramanzeta.
http://ultramanzeta.deviantart.com/art/The-Patriot-36762343
http://ultramanzeta.deviantart.com/art/The-Patriot-Sporty-Look-36762322
http://ultramanzeta.deviantart.com/art/The-Patriot-Red-Costume-36762259
[img]http://img360.imageshack.us/img360/8937/24796xd1.jpg[/img]
Image by Carlos2013
http://carlos2013.deviantart.com/art/Elephant-Tank-BM-85405083
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It's nice to see you again D-Vader, but guys, instead of having a discussion about the colours of the clothes, you could maybe start rating the cards themselves^.^

The effects seem quite balanced to me, but I detected a few OCG errors like "in its name" and "increase its ATK" instead of "Attack" in the first card, "the opponent's monster's ATK and DEF" (which I suppose must be a typo) and "removed" which should not be capitalized.

Other than that, I did notice the slight differences regarding the colours of the guys on the cards, but I think you could have tried to add a background to the images, or ask someone to do so, because they look a bit plain this way. The picture you used for the "Tank of Honor" is not bad, but it doesn't really look Yugioh-like.

On a whole these are some balanced cards, but you should only work on the uniqueness of the pictures and effects you use and maybe sharpen your OCG a bit.

6.5/10^.^

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