danieldoo Posted July 5, 2008 Report Share Posted July 5, 2008 pack 1------------------------------ pack 2---------------- pack 3--------------------------- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
saintslashgeorge666 Posted July 5, 2008 Report Share Posted July 5, 2008 It is Palutena, and Pala-Troops, Pit is an angel, not a fairy, OCG and grammar are very poor, everything is either over or underpowered, i give it a 1/5. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
danieldoo Posted July 5, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 5, 2008 It is Palutena' date=' and Pala-Troops, Pit is an angel, not a fairy, OCG and grammar are very poor, everything is either over or underpowered, i give it a 1/5.[/quote']couldnt remember so i put that stuffpit i wasnt even going to put fairy or angel i just put that thereocg i did my bestgrammar?and i thought i did a good job Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
saintslashgeorge666 Posted July 5, 2008 Report Share Posted July 5, 2008 It is Palutena' date=' and Pala-Troops, Pit is an angel, not a fairy, OCG and grammar are very poor, everything is either over or underpowered, i give it a 1/5.[/quote']couldnt remember so i put that stuffpit i wasnt even going to put fairy or angel i just put that thereocg i did my bestgrammar?and i thought i did a good job Yeha, whell it wan't good enough. you just need practice and somme hints: Summon, Field, stufflike that are all capitalized. Field-Spel, Counter-Trap Face-Up are hyphonated and capitalized, word it a little better, effects should be better (Nobody wants a useless card) and dont make them cheap (Like smashball was). Correct grammar would also be a bonus. Dosn't post all at once, make a few cards and try and get feed back on them. But, these are just tips, you don't really have to listen to me. Otherwise this was a pretty good idea that I wish I had thought of first. Oh, well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
saintslashgeorge666 Posted July 5, 2008 Report Share Posted July 5, 2008 also, if you are going to do stuff like that, get the facts straight Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
danieldoo Posted July 5, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 5, 2008 It is Palutena' date=' and Pala-Troops, Pit is an angel, not a fairy, OCG and grammar are very poor, everything is either over or underpowered, i give it a 1/5.[/quote']couldnt remember so i put that stuffpit i wasnt even going to put fairy or angel i just put that thereocg i did my bestgrammar?and i thought i did a good job Yeha, whell it wan't good enough. you just need practice and somme hints: Summon, Field, stufflike that are all capitalized. Field-Spel, Counter-Trap Face-Up are hyphonated and capitalized, word it a little better, effects should be better (Nobody wants a useless card) and dont make them cheap (Like smashball was). Correct grammar would also be a bonus. Dosn't post all at once, make a few cards and try and get feed back on them. But, these are just tips, you don't really have to listen to me. Otherwise this was a pretty good idea that I wish I had thought of first. Oh, well.how is smash ball cheap:? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
superchaos2585 Posted July 5, 2008 Report Share Posted July 5, 2008 I agree with them...sorry... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
danieldoo Posted July 5, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 5, 2008 i cant trust anyone anymoreit always happens when im a new useri hardly know what you guys are talkng about half the time Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
superchaos2585 Posted July 5, 2008 Report Share Posted July 5, 2008 It's okay just read the threads about how to do things and the threads about what things mean... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
danieldoo Posted July 5, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 5, 2008 It's okay just read the threads about how to do things and the threads about what things mean...well ok but1.how is smash ball cheap2.i thought the atks and defs were pretty balanced Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
superchaos2585 Posted July 5, 2008 Report Share Posted July 5, 2008 I don't know about the smash ball and not all of them are unbalanced just some... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
danieldoo Posted July 6, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 6, 2008 ok thx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
superchaos2585 Posted July 6, 2008 Report Share Posted July 6, 2008 No problem... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TR_Headshot Posted July 6, 2008 Report Share Posted July 6, 2008 It's an interesting idea, it just needs some work. Don't worry, not to many card makers are amazing right away. Give it some time! Think you could take a look at my cards too? They're all in signature except Wandering Spirits. (Set) I'm relative new too. :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lazer Yoshi Posted July 6, 2008 Report Share Posted July 6, 2008 These are great! Just remember to cap the words... Check out the link in my signature for more information!^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TR_Headshot Posted July 6, 2008 Report Share Posted July 6, 2008 P.S. I think Smash Ball is fair since it acts like it does in SSBB Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
linkpkm Posted July 6, 2008 Report Share Posted July 6, 2008 Pic´s bad, very strange OCG .... 1/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
danieldoo Posted July 6, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 6, 2008 ok so for the pics i had to resave them because they came up black so i had to resave it as gif and lazeri dont like capping and stuff most of the timei just do it freely... and for smash ballyes its fair look at the final smash cards... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twylight Shadow Posted July 6, 2008 Report Share Posted July 6, 2008 sweet mines almost finished Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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