KeneticKing Posted July 7, 2008 Report Share Posted July 7, 2008 Hey ppl this is a first card i made can u guys check it out if its ok. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
the demon Posted July 7, 2008 Report Share Posted July 7, 2008 theres an OCG Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zack Blaze Posted July 7, 2008 Report Share Posted July 7, 2008 you cant use slang like u for you. and it says increase your 500 points. increase what!?!?!?!? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
the demon Posted July 7, 2008 Report Share Posted July 7, 2008 you have to put what your increasing! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zack Blaze Posted July 7, 2008 Report Share Posted July 7, 2008 Too Much OCG Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
the demon Posted July 7, 2008 Report Share Posted July 7, 2008 is it limited or not? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doom™ Posted July 7, 2008 Report Share Posted July 7, 2008 Ocg Errors and Grammar errors. 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
the demon Posted July 7, 2008 Report Share Posted July 7, 2008 yup Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TobitoXIII Posted July 7, 2008 Report Share Posted July 7, 2008 Not bad of a card. But there are alot of grammar errors.6/10 And for "the demon", STOP POSTING SO MUCH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:x:x:x:x Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wolfdady Posted July 8, 2008 Report Share Posted July 8, 2008 the same that theodore214 said..............hey tobito13 dont angry be happy like u always are Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TR_Headshot Posted July 8, 2008 Report Share Posted July 8, 2008 Interesting card, but it needs some editing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
superchaos2585 Posted July 8, 2008 Report Share Posted July 8, 2008 I agree with everyone else... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KeneticKing Posted July 8, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 8, 2008 One answer is enough -_-!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
=aTaLiG= Posted July 8, 2008 Report Share Posted July 8, 2008 the name isn't really cool.the pic isn't cool either.you have many OCG errors.increase your 500 points??what are you trying to say?1.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KeneticKing Posted July 8, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 8, 2008 lol wat website u use to get cool pics then???? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted July 8, 2008 Report Share Posted July 8, 2008 OCG needs work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bankz Posted July 8, 2008 Report Share Posted July 8, 2008 the cards bad buts its your first so if the comments are to hard its for your own good that way you can improve and make better cards :lol: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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