kyuubi-cloak Posted July 7, 2008 Report Share Posted July 7, 2008 no mean coments, no saying the card is "blurry" and no "jinzo" i just relized that the card text is hard to read so.... here. ["cats ear tribe" + "darkfire dragon"]every turn this card is on the field place one "darkfire kitten" token (beast-fire/1 star/ATK 500/DEF 500) in ATK mode. your oponent can not atack a darkfire kitten token if darkfire cat is face up on the field. "Darkfire kitten" does NOT take up a monster card zone(this means they do not count tword the 5 monster card limit).the atk and def of this card becomes 1000 points times the number of "darkfire kitten" token on the field. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeroshot Posted July 7, 2008 Report Share Posted July 7, 2008 Please read this thread: http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/showthread.php?tid=51154 That'll help you with OCG. Remember to cap the first letter in every sentence and the first letter in all names. Not important but in the title, you spelt "first", "Card", and "Thought" wrong. pic is OK Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fiffer Posted July 7, 2008 Report Share Posted July 7, 2008 THAT CAT KICKS ASS Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kyuubi-cloak Posted July 7, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 7, 2008 i have a lot on my mond so i tend to be bad at spelling.thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kyuubi-cloak Posted July 7, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 7, 2008 THAT CAT KICKS ASS dident see that comin..... lolthanks dude Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted July 7, 2008 Report Share Posted July 7, 2008 Pic is cool. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
D-lock Posted July 7, 2008 Report Share Posted July 7, 2008 Horrible OCG and Grammar, but the pic is NOT blurry. Great effect, good job of incorporating two real cards into this card's effect. 9/10 And what do you mean by "Jinzo"? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kyuubi-cloak Posted July 7, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 7, 2008 theres some dude with jinzo as his SN that is pising me off Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~ P O L A R I S ~ Posted July 7, 2008 Report Share Posted July 7, 2008 I assume you mean Hunter? Anyway, it's clear that your effect quality is good but your Official Card Grammar is abyssmal, for this reason I'm giving you a fix for your card to make it worded like a real card, this will make it more realistic. ^_^ Name: Darkfire Cat Effect: "Cat's Ear Tribe" + "Darkfire Dragon"Special Summon 1 "Darkfire Kitten Token" during each of your Standby Phases. As long as this card remains face-up on the field, your opponent cannot select a "Darkfire Kitten Token" as an attack target. "Darkfire Kitten Token" does not count toward the 5-card monster limit.The ATK and DEF of this are equal to the number of "Darkfire Kitten Tokens" you control x 1000. ATK: ?DEF: ? Set ID: _ _ _ _-EN_ _ _ Fill the first 4 blanks with letters and the last 3 blanks with numbers. Click on the effect square so that a check mark appears in it. I hope I helped. Good luck with your cards, I recommend you read the link Zeroshot posted to help you with Official Card Grammar. ^_^ Nice effect and good picture. ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kyuubi-cloak Posted July 7, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 7, 2008 there i fixed the card and i changed the efect just like "Doom Wraith" sugjested. i have a question, do they ever make the cards into real cards?that would be so sweet Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kingdom Xathers Posted July 7, 2008 Report Share Posted July 7, 2008 I doubt it, but you're right, that would be sweet! Anyway, you still need to capitalize in some places (like this: Darkfire Cat, Beast).Besides, what are the "Darkfire Kitten Token"'s stats? (Level, ATK, DEF, Type, Attribute?) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silencerleader Posted July 7, 2008 Report Share Posted July 7, 2008 theres some dude with jinzo as his SN that is pising me off Then you would really hate me. How did he piss you off? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~ P O L A R I S ~ Posted July 7, 2008 Report Share Posted July 7, 2008 Yugioh Card Maker is unaffiliated with Konami, so they do not make cards posted by our members into real cards. Nice, you fixed it, now all you have to do is give Beast a capital B, make the ATK and DEF have only one ?, not four, give Darkfire a capital D, and give Cat a capital C. Do that and your card's ready for contests. ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eric234 Posted July 7, 2008 Report Share Posted July 7, 2008 cool card 9/10 cats kick so muck ass Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HellKaiserofDarkness Posted July 7, 2008 Report Share Posted July 7, 2008 nice picture. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kyuubi-cloak Posted July 7, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 7, 2008 the stats 4 the kittens are (ATK/500, def/500, fire, beast,) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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