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[kyuubi lord.]

plz folo these simple rules when talking here.

 

#1. do not say that the pictures are blurry unless you give me a link for a bedar pic.

 

#2. dont say that the OCG is bad unless you are corecting it.

(i am saying this becaus i already know that there are OCG erors & blurry pictures)

 

here is the stats of "omega shenron"

"sin shenron"

this card can not be somoned unless there is one or more monsters in your graveyard with shenron in there card name.

This card gites the efect of all monsters with "Shenron" in there card name, that are in your graveyard.

this cards ATK is equall to the combined ATK of every monster in your graveyard with "Shenron" in its card name.

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I do not think that sin shenron needs an effect.

 

if you dont know what "synchro" is then just ask me, it is a real card type but it just came out in 2008. ("synchro" is the card type for the last monster)

[Larxene]

First of all, Sin Shenron should have an effect

And you should make Omega Shenron

As for the effects....

 

"Decrease the ATK of all face-up monsters on the field by 300 points every turn, excluding this card."

 

"Discard 1 card from your hand to select 1 monster on your opponent's side of the field. The selected monster cannot declare an attack for 3 turns."

 

"This card cannot be destroyed as a result of battle by a FIRE monster. You may sacrifice this monster to Special Summon "Dragon #4-Nova Shenron LV 5" from your hand or Deck."

 

"This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by the effect of "Dragon #4-Nova Shenron LV4". This card cannot be destroyed as a result of battle by a FIRE monster. Damage calculation is applied normally."

 

"When this card is Normal Summoned or flipped face-up, pay any amount of Life Points. Increase the ATK of this card by the amount of Life Points sacrificed. If this card battles with a Thunder-type monster, increase the ATK of this card by the ATK of the monster it is attacking. If this card battles with a WATER monster, destroy this card."

 

"You may treat this card as WIND."

 

"If this card is destroyed as a result of battle, flip a coin. If heads, Special Summon this card in face-up Attack Position. Equip that monster to this card. This effect can only be used 3 times per game. Increase the ATK of this card by the original ATK of any monster equipped to this card."

 

~Clariex

[kyuubi lord.]

wow.....thanks 4 the help.

but you did make i problem.

 

oops i thaut i did put omega shenron up. Ill do tht right know

 

with rage shenron

"If this card battles with a WATER monster, destroy that monster"

 

its not soposed to destroy the other monster, its suposed to destroy rage shenron.

 

but thanks 4 the help, Ill pay you back if i can

[Larxene]

Oh.....well you worded it weird....it was hard to tell

 

I'll fix my post ;)

 

~Clariex

[kyuubi lord.]

thats fine, im bad with words anyways.lol

[Larxene]

Just a bit of advice

I wouldn't make Omega a Synchro

I'd just make him an effect monster

But give him a summoning condition involving the other dragons

 

~Clariex

[kyuubi lord.]

Just a bit of advice

I wouldn't make Omega a Synchro

I'd just make him an effect monster

But give him a summoning condition involving the other dragons

 

~Clariex

 

but that does involve the other dragons.

its just like the show, he dosent nead all the dragons just "sin".

 

but i guess i can change it up a bit.

[Larxene]

That's also not how Synchro monsters work anyway

They require a Tuner Monster and 1 or more Non-Tuner monsters

 

~Clariex

[kyuubi lord.]

Exactly. "sin shenron" is the tuner monster.

 

pluss i screwed up on how you git "omega's" ATK points

[Larxene]

WHen you made Sin Shenron, his type should look like this

Dragon / Tuner

 

And for Omega's effect

 

"1 Tuner monster"+"1 or more non-Tuner monster(s)"

This card gains the effect of every monster in your Graveyard with "Shenron" in its card name. Increase the ATK and DEF of this card by 200 for every monster in your Graveyard with "Shenron" in its card name."

 

Also, its really overpowered

 

~Clariex

[kyuubi lord.]

uuuum ok, shure.

 

but im tired o changing the stats around, so im gona stop for 2day

 

plus a non-tunor monster dosent have to be listed.

 

all a non-tunor monster is, its any monster that is not the tunor monster

 

i gess it is true that its overpowered, but i cant help it.

[╬「Selatcia」╬]

These are alright cards.

[kyuubi lord.]

O_O

 

did you just say somthing nice??

wow..... JK JK lol

 

thanks dude

 

oh and B4 i forget, how do i get thoes star things and reps

[Marisa Kirisame-ze]

interesting..............

[kyuubi lord.]

interesting? is that good or bad

[Fidel Castro]

plz folo these simple rules when talking here.

 

#1. do not say that the pictures are blurry unless you give me a link for a bedar pic.

 

#2. dont say that the OCG is bad unless you are corecting it.

(i am saying this becaus i already know that there are OCG erors & blurry pictures)

 

 

Then how are we supposed to help you? Its not up to us to correct your mistakes. If you can't handle the comments (That are ment to help you) then you should just give up on making cards.

 

You can't make a perfect card in one try. It takes some harsh comments before you perfect it.

 

Anyway that said i can't really say anything else because of your 'rules'

[cassia]

Nice. Pretty good cards. Just that the pics are a little blurry. That's all.

[T. Sankara]

These cards are an embarassment to DBZ. Your 'rules' aren't necessary, and violae the objective of constructive criticism. If you don' like being criticized, don't post cards. Use deviantart for pictures, one of the best art sites around. Also, learn your DBZ.

 

~Kenpachi Zaraki

[Red-Eyes Darkness Duelist]

On the subject of the pictures for those Shadow Dragons, have you tried getting them from the series or YouTube, cuz it looks like you may have been relying on Google Images and they don't always give you the best, it took me a while to get good pictures for Custom Deck and I've been having to use YouTube as well mostly!?

 

A good place to look might be DragonBall Wikia, that's where I got my Monster card pictures, sort of... And Oceanna Shenron could do with more of an ability, like it does damage equel to difference between it's ATK and an opponent's Defence positioned Monster's DEF, for example!