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Speaking of proofreading, Intro to my RP:

 

In a world, known as Teration, where no demons, no troubles, and no fear is established, the people all look to the God, Xanth, for showing this form of mercy to them. However, all goes wrong, when one person, who was once named Dresdus Balos, attempted to practice a ritual, without permission from the Hand of Xanth. Because of such a treason, he was turned into a demon, and sealed into Verscilion, Realm of the Verscilves. After a few decades passed, misfortunes began to happen, and the people begin to worry. Recently, some of the people who work under the Hand have been slaughtered in a way people cannot perform. When the Hand begin to investigate, they realize that the once human and now demon, Dresdus Balos, now known as the demon Sintrionus, has escaped from Verscilion. The only way to reseal him, or completely erase him from existence, is to find the Relics of Xanth, mystical items that represent the forces of which Xanth himself rules over. With the help of those who wish for this monstrosity to stop, they search for the relics themselves, and attempt to put a stop to Sintrionus, in the name of Xanth.

 

 

So yeah, help, etc.

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Lyfe. visits again.

 

Pikachu' date=' I need an opinion. Should I return to YCM?

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Yes.

 

True' date=' I never actually met you, but from what I've seen, your epikz, and we are running out of epikz here on YCM.

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Bullshit. Club Pikachu makes normal members to epic members like you every day.

 

This club is epic because we make things epic. And that's the truth.

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[spoiler=This is the about to be Final Product of the RP]

[align=center]In a world, known as Teration, where no demons, no troubles, and no fear is established, the people all look to the God, Xanth, for showing this form of mercy to them. However, all goes wrong, when one person, who was once named Dresdus Balos, attempted to practice a ritual, without permission from the Hand of Xanth. Because of such a treason, he was turned into a demon, and sealed into Verscilion, Realm of the Verscilves. After a few decades passed, misfortunes began to happen, and the people begin to worry. Recently, some of the people who work under the Hand have been slaughtered in a way people cannot perform. When the Hand begin to investigate, they realize that the once human and now demon, Dresdus Balos, now known as the demon Sintrionus, has escaped from Verscilion. The only way to reseal him, or completely erase him from existence, is to find the Relics of Xanth, mystical items that represent the forces of which Xanth himself rules over. With the help of those who wish for this monstrosity to stop, they search for the relics themselves, and attempt to put a stop to Sintrionus, in the name of Xanth.

 

[spoiler=Rules when RPing(General)]

•Advanced Clause (You know what that means. If not, facepalm for me.)

•No Godmodding

•No Powerplay

•All other YCM rules apply

 

 

[spoiler=Rules when RPing(Specifics)]

•Okay, I know this might offend some people's religions, and I am sorry, but for this RP, there is only one religion in this RP, which is followed. However, I will not force you to be a complete hardcore religious person for this RP. Anyways, in this RP, you follow Xanth. To what degree is up to you. You may be a hardcore follower, or a follower who barely follows him, but mentions him from time to time. Once again, totally sorry for this inconvenience if this insults you in any manner in terms of religion. (Damn, that was a long rule.)

•If you are to preform an act that would be considered a "Sin", you will be taken to the nearest prison by the nearest Guard. If you are to resist arrest, which is normally impossible, you would normally be killed on the spot.

(More will be added in due time)

 

 

[spoiler=App]

[b]Name:[/b] If you cannot think of one, I will provide you one.
[b]Age:[/b] Please be reasonable. A little kid cannot embark on a quest like this, and neither can an elderly man, who are both weak.
[b]Gender:[/b]
[b]Occupation(Job):[/b] Like, Merchant, Servant, etc. Choice is up to you really. Just be reasonable. And no, no one can pick Hand of Xanth Member as a job.
[b]History:[/b] I will look carefully, and I will decide heavily if you are able to participate.
[b]Appearance:[/b] Same as above.

 

[spoiler=Accepted members]

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[spoiler=Map of Teration]

A Map will be added when possible.

 

 

[spoiler=My application]

Name: Xilus Tritus XIII

Age: 29

Gender: Male

Occupation(Job): He is the Digitus Me'dius (Middle Finger) of the Hand of Xanth.

History: Being the new Digitus Me'Dius of the Hand of Xanth, taken from his father, Xilus Tritus XII, he was inclined many responsibilities, more than the other Digitus's. He had to grant permissions most of the time, organize ceremonies, train soldiers, cleanse the people of their sins, etc. However, upon the escape of Sintrionus, he was selected to locate the relics, and find others to will help him.

Appearance: Xilus is a roughly 6' 2" man, with a fair muscular body. Cloaked in mainly the usual attire of a Digitus, he's the only one who keeps the hood down. With long slightly curly charcoal-colored hair hanging loose, you can clearly see him with his pale skin tone. His eyes give a sheen of pureness, being a light gray color that gives quite a sense of pureness and loyalty, ever since Tritus I. The greatest indication is the ring he wears on his right hand, made of an element that was said to be forgotten, at least the name was forgotten.

 

 

[spoiler=Terminology]

Xanth- The God of the world of Teration, he governs all forces of nature. He is nicknamed, "A God of Twin Paths."

Xantrion- The Realm of which Xanth is located. Cannot be traveled.

Verscilves- Those who serve under Xanth. They live in the Realm of Verscilion. They apply severe punishment to those who are sent there.

Verscilion- The Realm of which the Verscilves live in. Those who commit Sins that are immeasurable are sent here to be punished by the Verscilves.

Hand of Xanth- 5 people who are chosen to serve as Xanth's highest followers. They tend to things in Teration that don't need Xanth's usually. They wear a ring on the finger of which they represent.

 

More will be added...

 

 

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Ta-dah?

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In a world where no demons' date=' no troubles, and no fear is established[b'].[/b] The people all look to the God, Xanth, for showing this form of mercy to them. However, all goes wrong when one person, who was once named Dresdus Balos, attempted to practice a ritual without permission from the Hand of Xanth. Because of such a treason, he was turned into a demon and sealed into Verscilion, a Realm of the Verscilves. After a few decades passed, misfortunes began to happen and the people begin to worry. Recently some of the people who work under the Hand have been slaughtered in a way people cannot perform. When the Hand begin to investigate, they realize that the once human and now demon Dresdus Balos, now known as the demon Sintrionus, has escaped from Verscilion. The only way to reseal him or completely erase him from existence is to find the Relics of Xanth, mystical items that represent the forces of which Xanth himself rules over.

 

At least that's my take on it. What do you guys think?

 

Good point. But seriously' date=' how many people proof-read their posts?

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*raises hand*

 

I have the Mozilla Firefox spellchecker.

 

So ha. ^^

 

Enrise, that intro is looking very nais. ;D

I have that as well!~ It is very helpful.

 

And I am so sorry about not posting sooner, the server was being mean to me! :cry:

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As I had said Enrise, the Server was being mean to me, and woul not let me reload any of the tabs properly. Just please take a look at what I had done with it and please consider, are there any places where you have unnecessary punctuation marks? Are the any words or any lettering that is missing?

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True, but I noticed the part where you said, "a Realm of the Verscilves."

 

This would mean that the Verscilves have more than one realm, which in itself, is not true.

 

EDIT: Shadow, I won't normally mind it, but would I have to participate in it?

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