Aaron the dragon master Posted July 10, 2008 Report Share Posted July 10, 2008 Plz rate Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Altair117 Posted July 10, 2008 Report Share Posted July 10, 2008 8.9/10Good Job even for a new member! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aaron the dragon master Posted July 10, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 10, 2008 THX Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vorrokhero1 Posted July 10, 2008 Report Share Posted July 10, 2008 ocg needs help. overall 7.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jericho Posted July 10, 2008 Report Share Posted July 10, 2008 OCG is all that I see wrong. 7.3581818754545828556548581/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bazzabaz Posted July 10, 2008 Report Share Posted July 10, 2008 OCG is a minor prob.But apart from that its the sex8/10Grrrrrrrr8 4 a new member XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HellKaiserofDarkness Posted July 10, 2008 Report Share Posted July 10, 2008 the pic is nice. some OCG errors. but i like it. good job for a newbie. Needs more effect. 5/10. its also kinda underpowered because i could just summon a monster without removing 2 dragon type monsters. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CinnamonStar Posted July 10, 2008 Report Share Posted July 10, 2008 First of all, you choose a rather original name, which is something not every member here thinks about, but there is a small spelling mistake. It should be "Grimlock, Dragon of the Underworld", including the few capitalization mistakes.Then you definitely created a balanced card, but there are some issues with your OCG. Actually if you Summon a card by removing 2 Dragon-Type monsters from play, it isn't Normal, Flip summoned or Set anymore, but Special Summoned. Therefore I'd suggest the following version for the effect:This card cannot be Normal Summoned, Flip Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing 2 Dragon-Type monsters from play.On a sidenote, you could also specify whether said cards have to be removed from your field or from your Graveyard and maybe add an extra part to the effect to make it more original and unique.Furthermore I like the picture and it really fits the name of the card, but as I mentionned above, you could have added an extra part to the effect, maybe something which makes it more Zombie-related.;) However, and this is very important, you didn't give credit to the artist you got it from or at least write a disclaimer stating that you didn't do it yourself, so in your case I would hurry up and do so as soon as possible because if it isn't done tomorrow this thread will probably be locked.To sum it up and answer your question, I would say that this is quite good indeed, but you should add a disclaimer, fix the OCG and work a bit on the originality of your cards in the future. However, considering that you're a new member, this is actually a pretty good start, which makes a 6.5/10 from me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RacecaR Posted July 10, 2008 Report Share Posted July 10, 2008 Underpowered. Increase attack and maybe decrease number of dragons needed to be sacrificed by 1. Otherwise, 7/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Victory Posted July 10, 2008 Report Share Posted July 10, 2008 6/10Too Relistic Of A Picture Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted July 10, 2008 Report Share Posted July 10, 2008 OCG needs work. Not too bad though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexeaus Posted July 10, 2008 Report Share Posted July 10, 2008 few OCG mistakes but otherwise great job 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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