Guest Supreme Gamesmaster Posted July 10, 2008 Report Share Posted July 10, 2008 Considering all the StH fanfics in the world, I'm shocked little to none of them have made it to YCM. Hopefully, this will fix it. The basic premise is that Sonic, a prince à la SU, is on some diplomatic thing to another kingdom when he tries to stop the Red Dragon-esque secret police from beating a civilian and gets arrested. He's then put into several challenges, most of which offer the penalty of death for himself and other prisoners in the case of his failure, for the entertainment of King Nega. However, the princess takes an interest in him, and secretly supplies him with various bits of paraphrenalia to help him survive the tasks. [spoiler=Character Form]Name:Age: Species: (Humans are allowed; NO HEDGEHOGS)Gender:Alignment: (Gladiator, Civilian, Prisoner, Secret Police, Igniend Network)Basic Stats (1-10, combined # must be 30 or less)Agility - (Maneuverability, acrobatics, & speed)Speed - (Top speed)Strength - (Physical strength)Defense - (Endurance)Intelligence - (Intelligence)Special Attacks: (No Chaos or Sol Emeralds)Weaknesses:Friends: (You can use other submitted entries; no Sonic characters except Silver, Blaze, Knuckles, or Shadow)Enemies: (You can use other submitted entries; no Sonic characters except Silver, Blaze, Knuckles, Shadow, or Eggman Nega)Likes/Favorite activities:Dislikes/Least favorite activities:Personality: (Not just a few adjectives, detail)Color:Skin Color (i.e. muzzle, arms):Eye Color:Tail:Other bodily features:Attire:Items, Weapons, Vehicles: (Only for Civilians & Secret Police) [spoiler=Characters]Name: Sonic ErinaceidAge: 16Species: Hedgehog (What can I say?)Gender: MaleAlignment: GladiatorBasic Stats:Agility - 9Speed - 10Strength - 3Defense - 2Intelligence - 6Special Attacks: Spinjump, SpinDash, Homing Attack, Blue Tornado, Light DashWeaknesses: WATER, gaseous toxinsFriends: No one in this storyEnemies: Eggman NegaLikes/Favorite activities: Running, combat, windDislikes/Least favorite activities: Swimming, waterPersonality: Somewhat arrogant and very brash, Sonic never takes life seriously unless there's evil afoot. His intelligence is often underestimated. He's technically one of the three rulers of Mobius, but he has the least implication to regality of all his siblings. He's saved the world several times with the ability to harness Chaos energy.Color: BlueSkin Color: PeachEye Color: EmeraldTail: SmallOther bodily features: Exceptionally long legs; streamlined form; hollow bonesAttire: Shoes & glovesItems, Weapons, Vehicles: None Name: Eggman NegaAge: 47Species: HumanGender: MaleAlignment: Secret PoliceBasic Stats:Agility - 2Speed - 5Strength - 3Defense - 3Intelligence - 10Special Attacks: NoneWeaknesses: Weak, psychotic, gloatingFriends: NoneEnemies: Sonic, SilverLikes/Favorite activities: Ruling, tyranny, power, machinesDislikes/Least favorite activities: Insolence in subordinatesPersonality: Cruel, sadistic, and ruthless, Eggman Nega is the dictator of a massive tyrannical kingdom. Unfortunately, he's a genius with an I.Q. of 300, and shows it in his formidable war machines. No one has stood up to him before. Will Sonic be the one to do it?Color: PeachSkin Color (i.e. muzzle, arms): PeachEye Color: BlackTail: NoneOther bodily features: Bulky; large, white mustacheAttire: Black and gold suit with red pantsItems, Weapons, Vehicles: Nega Pawn M1, Nega Pawn M3, Nega Pawn M8, Nega Pawn M13, Uzi, Nega Viper, Nega Annihilator, Nega-Bot, Amatik Name: Blaze IgniendAge: 15Species: Lilac Burmese (Cat)Gender: FemaleAlignment: Igniend NetworkBasic Stats:Agility - 8Speed - 7Strength - 5Defense - 2Intelligence - 8Special Attacks: Axel Jump, Burst Dash, Axel Tornado, Tension Blast, FireballWeaknesses: Water, cold temperatures, asbestosFriends: NoneEnemies: NoneLikes/Favorite activities: Nothing particularly notableDislikes/Least favorite activities: Nothing particularly notablePersonality: Blaze is the cynically cunning heiress to Eggman Nega. She's built a peculiar network of contacts with many of her "father's" suppliers, and therefore has a massive wealth of weapons and gadgets at her disposal. Though usually cut-off and introverted, she's taken an interest in Sonic for reasons she can't explain.Color: LilacSkin Color (i.e. muzzle, arms): Transparent, usually covered as whiteEye Color: AmberTail: Thin, but as long as the rest of herOther bodily features: Her skin normally shows through, revealing fire inside her body.Attire: Violet cloak, tights, gloves & bootsItems, Weapons, Vehicles: Too many to list. Name: Silver SykosinAge: 14Species: HedgehogGender: MaleAlignment: CivilianBasic Stats:Agility - 6Speed - 6Strength - 7Defense - 6Intelligence - 5Special Attacks: PsychokinesisWeaknesses: Chaos energyFriends: He considers himself friends with Blaze, though she doesn't reciprocateEnemies: Eggman NegaLikes/Favorite activities: Traveling, exploringDislikes/Least favorite activities: Nothing particularly notablePersonality: Silver is a naïve, idealistic rebel against King Nega's tyranny. He's inquisitive and morally sound, though this occasionally presents itself as blissful ignorance and emotional insecurity. He's always trying to disrupt the King's machinations.Color: WhiteSkin Color (i.e. muzzle, arms): PeachEye Color: GoldTail: SmallOther bodily features: There are glowing green marks in several locations on his bodyAttire: Shoes, gloves, and anklets.Items, Weapons, Vehicles: Manta-ray shaped combat RV Name: Aaron LonginusAge: 16Species: HumanGender: MaleAlignment: CivilianBasic Stats:Agility - 7Speed - 5Strength - 4Defense - 6Intelligence - 8Special Attacks: NoneWeaknesses: A damsel in distress... ^_^ Or a sharp blade.Friends: NoneEnemies: NoneLikes/Favorite activities: Running, stealing from others.Dislikes/Least favorite activities: Being caught red handed.Personality: Nice, but is knowledgeable. Will do anything to stay alive.Color: Favorite? blackSkin Color (i.e. muzzle, arms): Tan, but not too tanEye Color: GreenTail: NoneOther bodily features: NoneAttire: Slightly ragged clothing, like they have been worn for a long time.Items, Weapons, Vehicles: One small, chipped dagger. Name: NoklidAge: 15Species: Echidna (ex: Knux)Gender: MaleAlignment: GladiatorBasic Stats (1-10, combined # must be 30 or less)Agility - 6Speed - 5Strength - 9Defense - 3Intelligence - 7Special Attacks: Ultamatum FinalinWeaknesses: Fire, ThunderFriends: Shadow, KnucklesEnemies: Aaron Longius,Eggman NegaLikes/Favorite activities: Fighting, Bodybuilding, ExploringDislikes/Least favorite activities: NothingPersonality: Noklid is a very friendly echidna. He is protective and caring. Altough he can be violent, destructive and very big headed. He acts before thinking.Color: OrangeSkin Color (i.e. muzzle, arms): Peach (Human skin color)Eye Color: GreenTail: Similar to KnucklesOther bodily features: Muscles, odd Z symbol on chest.Attire: Black Leather Jacket, blue jeans Name: Lord DǽvokAge: 2000Species: Humanoid/ImmortalGender: MaleAlignment: Secret PoliceBasic Stats: 30Agility - 5Speed - 4Strength - 9Defense - 2Intelligence - 10Special Attacks: Shadow Tendrils, Control over ShadowsWeaknesses: Light and Extreme ForceFriends: NoneEnemies: Everyone except Eggman Nega and the Secret PoliceLikes/Favorite activities: Taking over worlds, travelling through dimensions, murderingDislikes/Least favorite activities: Heroes, those who fowl his plans, cheesy heroes who can't take a hint.Personality: Always calm, even in the face of defeat, mostly because of the advantage that he can't die. He's purely evil and psychopathic, only makes alliances to further his own gains and ambitions- domination over the Planet Earth. Usually likes mocking his opponents, he is a master of psychology with an IQ of 800. It doesn't even matter if he's too weak to fight- he can manipulate others to do his own bidding.Color: BlackSkin Color: PaleEye Color: RedTail: Doesn't have one.Other bodily features: Not much else.Attire: A black trimmed collar shirt, with sharp dress pants and shoes. Usually wears his trademark vampire cape.Items, Weapons, Vehicles: Sword(Armageddon), Pistol, Shadow Spear Name: MarcoAge: 14Species: WolfGender: MaleAlignment: GladiatorBasic Stats (1-10, combined # must be 30 or less)Agility - 5Speed - 3Strength - 10Defense - 10Intelligence - 2Special Attacks: Hammer Blow BlastWeaknesses: not very smart...nuff said.Friends: KnucklesEnemies: Red Dragon-esque secret police and King NegaLikes/Favorite activities: Gym, Smashing WallsDislikes/Least favorite activities: Sitting around, relaxingPersonality: An excessively strong wolf warrior, he is naturally caring, but sometimes turns arrogant. Not predictable in battle.Color: Blue-greySkin Color (i.e. muzzle, arms): Muzzle is a soft peachy colourEye Color: BlueTail: Blue with white undersideOther bodily features: Long teeth XDAttire: Ragged clothes. [spoiler=Voice Credits]Ryan Drummond as SonicMike Poloff as King NegaPete Capella as SilverGrey DeLisle as BlazeDavid Humphrey as ShadowScott Dreier as Knuckles•Chris Emerson as Marco(More Coming Soon) [spoiler=The Incredibly Short Prologue: Scam]Well, I have to admit, Sonic admitted to himself, I’m not exactly impressed. The entire square looked dismal. There were about sixty small, square, grey, dilapedated homes about him, each one exactly the same as those surrounding it. There was only a wide road to separate them; Sonic stood on that road himself. “So this is the supposed ‘great kingdom’ of High Emperor Nega?” Sonic scoffed, glaring around at his surroundings. “These are friggin’ ghettos.” He decided to walk instead of run, for the sole purpose of detecting change. Sonic had been sent here by his siblings, who were taking far more readily to ruling his home kingdom of Mobius than he was. Apparently, they’d been too busy when they’d received the message from ‘High Emperor Nega’ to send an important figure to his kingdom for diplomatic purposes, so Sonic had been volunteered for the task instead. He was starting to wish he’d never come, though: it was entirely the same for about a minute — and then he heard the sound. He had no idea what it was, but anything making noise in the silence of the High Emperor’s slums was cause for investigation to him. When he arrived, he saw his first forms of sentient life. Two red-armored rats were aiming blasters at a young wolf. “Now just come quietly, and we won’t blow you to pieces!” one of them said boredly. “No, I’ll never come!” the wolf argued. Sonic zipped over, immediately intrigued. “So, what’s this guy arrested for?” he asked. “Pretty serious?” “He’s being arrested for ‘speaking treasonous lies regarding the almighty and invincible high emperor Nega,’” the bored-sounding rat replied. “King Nega doesn’t deserve such dissent throughout our populace!” the other one said pompously, drawing himself up to what he evidently thought was an impressive height. “You’re seriously arresting him for criticizing your king?” Sonic asked in disbelief. The first rat to speak looked like he somewhat agreed, but the other one just looked angry. “You, sir,” he raged, “are in violation of the law as well! We dictate that you are speaking treasonous lies of the Secret Police, long may they serve the great King Nega!” “Oh, please,” the hedgehog said flippantly. “That’s seriously a crime? You can do something about it?” The guard responded by shooting him. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Skyfi Posted July 11, 2008 Report Share Posted July 11, 2008 Name: Haaris SyedAge: 13Species: WolfGender: MaleAlignment: Secret PoliceBasic Stats (1-10, combined # must be 30 or less)Agility - 6Speed - 6Strength - 6Defense - 6Intelligence - 6Special Attacks: Chaos WarpWeaknesses: FireFriends: Silver, KnucklesEnemies: Blaze, Eggman Nega , And His Number One Enemy ShadowLikes/Favorite activities: Like To Hunt. He Loves To Play Sports Whitch He Is Really Good AtDislikes/Least favorite activities: Dosnt Really Hate Anything Except His EnemiesPersonality: He Is Kind Of Mean Because When He Was Little He Was Betrayed By His Best Friend Who Ended Up Killing His Parents, And Destroying His Village.Color: SilverSkin Color : GreyEye Color: BlueTail: YesOther bodily features: Has 2 Legs. 2 Arms. 3 Tail's. And Has A Big Scar Under One Of His EyesAttire: Has Blue Shoes. And Wrist Bands.Items, Weapons, Vehicles: He Has A Gravity Board Like In Sonic Rides. He Has A Beam Sword. And A Laser Gun. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted July 11, 2008 Report Share Posted July 11, 2008 Name: Aaron LonginusAge: 16Species: HumanGender: maleAlignment: CivilianBasic Stats (1-10, combined # must be 30 or less)Agility - 7Speed - 5Strength - 4Defense - 6Intelligence - 8Special Attacks: (No Chaos or Sol Emeralds)Weaknesses: a damsel in distress... ^_^ or a sharp blade.Friends: no one in particularEnemies: no one in particular.Likes/Favorite activities: running, stealing from others. Dislikes/Least favorite activities: being caught red handed. Personality: Nice, but is knowledgeable. will do anything to stay alive. Color: favorite? blackSkin Color (i.e. muzzle, arms): tan, but not too tanEye Color: greenTail: noneOther bodily features: just a head, arms, legs, and a bodyAttire: slightly ragged clothing, like they have been worn for a long time. Items, Weapons, Vehicles: one small, chipped dagger. i dont know much about sonic the hedgehog, but i hope you like the character. ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Supreme Gamesmaster Posted July 11, 2008 Report Share Posted July 11, 2008 @Stardust: The Secret Police work for Nega, but other than that, you're in the clear. @Kale: Dock two points on stats and you're good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted July 12, 2008 Report Share Posted July 12, 2008 alright, docked two. I must have counter wrong before.. Oops. ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Supreme Gamesmaster Posted July 12, 2008 Report Share Posted July 12, 2008 Accepted and rep'd. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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End Of The Abyss Posted July 20, 2008 Report Share Posted July 20, 2008 Name: NoklidAge: 15Species: Echidna (ex: Knux)Gender: MaleAlignment: GladiatorBasic Stats (1-10, combined # must be 30 or less)Agility - 6Speed - 5Strength - 9Defense - 3Intelligence - 7Special Attacks: Ultamatum Finalin Weaknesses: Fire, ThunderFriends: Shadow, KnucklesEnemies: Aaron Longius,Eggman NegaLikes/Favorite activities: Fighting, Bodybuilding, ExploringDislikes/Least favorite activities: NothingPersonality: Noklid is a very friendly echidna. He is protective and caring. Altough he can be violent, destructive and very big headed. He acts before thinking.Color: OrangeSkin Color (i.e. muzzle, arms): Peach (Human skin color)Eye Color: GreenTail: Similar to KnucklesOther bodily features: Muscles, odd Z symbol on chest.Attire: Black Leather Jacket, blue jeans Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Davok Posted July 20, 2008 Report Share Posted July 20, 2008 I wonder if I can get away with this... Name: Lord DǽvokAge: 2000Species: Humanoid/ImmortalGender: MaleAlignment: Secret PoliceBasic Stats: 30Agility - 5Speed - 4Strength - 9Defense - 2Intelligence - 10Special Attacks: Shadow Tendrils, Control over ShadowsWeaknesses: Light and Extreme ForceFriends: NoneEnemies: Everyone except Eggman Nega and the Secret PoliceLikes/Favorite activities: Taking over worlds, travelling through dimensions, murderingDislikes/Least favorite activities: Heroes, those who fowl his plans, cheesy heroes who can't take a hint.Personality: Always calm, even in the face of defeat, mostly because of the advantage that he can't die. He's purely evil and psychopathic, only makes alliances to further his own gains and ambitions- domination over the Planet Earth. Usually likes mocking his opponents, he is a master of psychology with an IQ of 800. It doesn't even matter if he's too weak to fight- he can manipulate others to do his own bidding.Color: Black Skin Color: PaleEye Color: RedTail: Doesn't have one.Other bodily features: Not much else.Attire: A black trimmed collar shirt, with sharp dress pants and shoes. Usually wears his trademark vampire cape.Items, Weapons, Vehicles: Sword(Armageddon), Pistol, Shadow Spear Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Exyst Posted July 20, 2008 Report Share Posted July 20, 2008 Name: MarcoAge: 12Species: WolfGender: MaleAlignment: GladiatorBasic Stats (1-10, combined # must be 30 or less)Agility - 5Speed - 3Strength - 10Defense - 10Intelligence - 2Special Attacks: Hammer Blow BlastWeaknesses: not very smart...nuff said.Friends: KnucklesEnemies: Red Dragon-esque secret police and King NegaLikes/Favorite activities: Gym, Smashing WallsDislikes/Least favorite activities: Sitting around, relaxingPersonality: An excessively strong wolf warrior, he is naturally caring, but sometimes turns arrogant. Not predictable in battle.Color: Blue-greySkin Color (i.e. muzzle, arms): Muzzle is a soft peachy colourEye Color: BlueTail: Blue with white undersideOther bodily features: Long teeth XDAttire: Ragged clothes. Hope you accept ¬.¬ Ask me if you want me to elaborate on ANYTHING! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Supreme Gamesmaster Posted July 20, 2008 Report Share Posted July 20, 2008 @Swift: Accepted. @Davok: Hello, plot twist. Change the name, though; I don't want him getting confused with the other Lord Davok. @Cyber: Do you really think such a tank would only be 12? The rest is great, though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Davok Posted July 21, 2008 Report Share Posted July 21, 2008 Fix'd name. Even though it's not much of a name change, it should distinguish the names a little. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Supreme Gamesmaster Posted July 21, 2008 Report Share Posted July 21, 2008 *chuckles* Accepted, mon ami. ((Anyone other than Davok, find the joke in this post.)) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Exyst Posted July 21, 2008 Report Share Posted July 21, 2008 Ok then Games Master, make him 12 1/2. Jk. But you can make him however old you want p.s I know 5 year olds who can beat me up ¬.¬ they bodybuilder-like kids. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Supreme Gamesmaster Posted July 21, 2008 Report Share Posted July 21, 2008 Accepted. p.s You mean like my youngest brother? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
End Of The Abyss Posted July 21, 2008 Report Share Posted July 21, 2008 lol, nice joke, Supreme. When will you make Ep. 1? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Supreme Gamesmaster Posted July 21, 2008 Report Share Posted July 21, 2008 I'm working on it now. Introductions are always the hardest part. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Supreme Gamesmaster Posted July 25, 2008 Report Share Posted July 25, 2008 Just a quick bump. Chapter 1 should be up tomorrow. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Supreme Gamesmaster Posted July 26, 2008 Report Share Posted July 26, 2008 Posted the absurdly short prologue. Chapter 1 coming soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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