Xlink Posted July 11, 2008 Report Share Posted July 11, 2008 this is my first time on this site plz rate out of 10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xlink Posted July 11, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 11, 2008 i didnt want to make the demon kid a ritual monster because i didnt feel like it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
csaman3 Posted July 11, 2008 Report Share Posted July 11, 2008 i'm new too and i thought that they were pretty cooloverall 7/10 :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
life_is_pain Posted July 11, 2008 Report Share Posted July 11, 2008 Ithink you could use better pics next time but its ok :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cassia Posted July 11, 2008 Report Share Posted July 11, 2008 Here's what you should change.For the first card you should capitalize special summon, normal summon and all those terms. Instead of magic, say spell. Also, capitalize Friend's Betrayal. This is basically the OCG errors. Try to get a better pic.For the second card, you have OCG errors. You need to capitalize Life Points. Don't capitalize card.For the third card, you need to capitalize ritual summoned and spell card. Level stars need to be capitalized.The last card is okay. Overall, you just have OCG errors. Great job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silencerleader Posted July 11, 2008 Report Share Posted July 11, 2008 What the above said^^ You do need to work on your OCG.Try Again or Fix them/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luna Lovegood Posted July 11, 2008 Report Share Posted July 11, 2008 Pop culture Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted July 11, 2008 Report Share Posted July 11, 2008 These belong in pop culture. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HellKaiserofDarkness Posted July 11, 2008 Report Share Posted July 11, 2008 Here's what you should change.For the first card you should capitalize special summon' date=' normal summon and all those terms. Instead of magic, say spell. Also, capitalize Friend's Betrayal. This is basically the OCG errors. Try to get a better pic.For the second card, you have OCG errors. You need to capitalize Life Points. Don't capitalize card.For the third card, you need to capitalize ritual summoned and spell card. Level stars need to be capitalized.The last card is okay. Overall, you just have OCG errors. Great job.[/quote'] i agree. This should be in pop culture. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Digital.Simplicity. Posted July 11, 2008 Report Share Posted July 11, 2008 try puttin it in pop culture Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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