life_is_pain Posted July 11, 2008 Report Share Posted July 11, 2008 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silencerleader Posted July 11, 2008 Report Share Posted July 11, 2008 Some pics are just terrible."you gain no damage" WHAT?!?Wrong. Just wrong. Maybe "you take no damage" would do.A tweak them to get a rating from me/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deadbeam09 Posted July 11, 2008 Report Share Posted July 11, 2008 nice pics. i know it really doesn't matter how you say certain things but try to say it right so some uptight card makers won't yell at you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cassia Posted July 11, 2008 Report Share Posted July 11, 2008 The pics are okay. OcG is horrible though. Change the cards if you want a rating. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luna Lovegood Posted July 11, 2008 Report Share Posted July 11, 2008 OCG could be better. I don't like new types. also poison pill [ic to realistic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
life_is_pain Posted July 11, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 11, 2008 sry for bad ocg but its heavy for me because im german... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted July 11, 2008 Report Share Posted July 11, 2008 Some pics could use better backgrounds. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enigma Zero Posted July 11, 2008 Report Share Posted July 11, 2008 It's not so much your English that causes the problem here as it is OCG(Official Card Grammar) which is how the cards would be written if they were real. It's more about certain words and capitalization. Your English is actually good enough that I wouldn't have guessed you were a German native. ;) Read The OCG/Grammar Thread for ideas and examples of how to fix your cards. I hope this helps. As for the cards themselves. Since all your monsters have the "Assassin Brotherhood" in their name there is no real point to making the Assassin Type. Just treat them like normal Ninjas and make them Warriors. You can still make set specific cards and just reference to the "Assassin Brotherhood" instead. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
life_is_pain Posted July 11, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 11, 2008 Ok thank you maybe it will help me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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