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[align=center]PART 1: RISE OF THE NECRO FORCE

2 years Before Exxo ever came to Duel Academy, before he was even Exxo, he was a nice young man named Raku Henchimorie. He always had a love dueling but liked to use dark cards. His favorite was Dark Necrofear. He always talked to the card as if it where alive. The events that happen in this prequel will reveal the unknown secrets of the Necro Force.

 

PART 2: The Necro Force

3 years ago before any of the duelist we know came to the island there was a student by the name Exxo. Exxo was different from any other duelist. He had a strange lust for darkness and could only be seen during the late hours of the day. He also used a dark deck that containd monsters such as Dark Necro Fear and Exodia Necros. One day Exxo dueled an Oblisk Blue student who was tuanting him about his wired ways. After the duel was over the Oblisk Blue student went into a coma and died a few weeks later. He mumbeled 1 last word before he died, necro. The teachers a the island became worried about the saftey of the students after what Exxo did to the student and had him removed from the island. He vowed to return to the island and show all of them what kind of force they where messing with. He would do this by using a set of cards long thought gone. These cards are known as the Necro Force Cards. The cards are scatered across the island. There a total of 40 cards. Exxo has found 27 of them and there are only 13 left. If Exxo gets a hold of the last 13 cards all the whole world will be in great danger. It's up to the best duelist at on the island to stop Exxo and he wont be stoped without a fight.

 

PART 3: LOCKED!

PART 4: LOCKED!

PART 5: LOCKED!

PART EX: LOCKED![/align]

 

[spoiler=From the Authors-Mage]

All of the Necro Force installments are great. It really has depth and so much emotion. One of the things that make this rp stand out is the love between LOCKED and Kai. Most RP's dont have that kinda stuff. Theres alot of drama ans stuff and its just really good. This RP has to be one of the best or it wouldent have 5 installments.

 

[spoiler= Chapter 1: Necrofear]

"GUYS! GUYS, WE'RE GONNA BE LATE!" Kai said as she ran downhill towards Domino Park. She saw Raku, Hyoma and Shun sitting around with their Duel Monsters Cards. When she finally got to the park, she collapsed. "Woah, Kai, relax." Hyoma said. "RELAX? WHAT IS YOUR PROBLEM? IT'S THE LAST DAY OF SCHOOL, AND YOUR PLAYING DUEL MONSTERS!" She screamed. "Yah....your point?" Shun asked. Kai froze. "Just c'mon already, guys! You wanna go to summer sch--" Kai began, but the trio ran off. "NO! NOT SUMMER SCHOOL! GET OUT OF MY WAY!" They charged to school. "No fair!" Kai said. She found the situation ironic.

 

"Raku? Why are you running?" A voice said. Raku reached into his pocket and pulled out Dark Necrofear. "Oh, hi Necrofear! We have to get the school! It's the last day, and class starts in...2 minutes!?!" Raku exclaims. He places Dark Necrofear back in his pocket and runs. Kai finally was able to catch up. "No fair, you guys are faster than me!" Kai says to the trio. "Too bad!" Hyoma said. They charge uphill and bash into class. "Ah. Mr. Raku, Mr. Shun, Mr. Hyoma, and Ms. Kai....You have 5 seconds to get seated." The teacher greeted them as they ran in. "Some welcoming party." Raku said to Kai. She shrugged back. They took their seats and class began.

 

"Perfect." A deep voice said. "All the pawns are in place." It finished. It's dark figure faded, but an evil echo carried....

 

To Be Continued...

 

 

[spoiler=Chapter 2-Exxo Awakens]

A dark figure appeared in Domino Park. It had an EM body, so no one could see it."The pawns have been placed. My plan is coming together." It said. He glanced nearby. He saw Raku and his friends coming to the park from school. "Perfect." It said, and it vanished.

 

"Killer last day." Hyoma said, rubbing his head. "Oh, relax." Kai said. "It wasn't that bad, Hyoma." "So says the teacher's pet." Shun said. Hyoma and Raku laughed. Kai hit Shun over the head. "So said the cheater. You cheated on the Math Test last week." She said and giggled. "Look, let's just go to the park." Raku cut in. Then, a shiver ran down his spine, and stopped. "Did you feel anything, guys?" Raku asked. "No, why?" Kai said. "Uh...never mind." Raku said. They reached Domino Park. "Something doesn't feel right." Raku said under his breath. He looked around, and out of the corner of his eye, he saw a tall, dark figure. It vanished before him. Shun approached Raku. "Raku? You alright?" Shun said. "Uh...yah. I'm fine." Raku said.

"Anyone wanna duel me?" Kai said. Hyoma and Shun laughed. "You? You're the worst duelist in school...NO, IN DOMINO CITY!" The two broke out laughing. "C'mon guys. Give her a chance. I'll duel you, Kai." Raku said. They both prepped their duel disk. "I'm not holding back!" Kai said. They drew their cards.

 

Meanwhile, deep inside Raku, a dark power was stirring. "Now. With Raku in my control. It's only a matter of time until I am free." A deep voice said. An evil echo carried through. The dark figure stepped into the light. Revealing...Exxo.

 

To Be Continued...

 

[spoiler=Dear Readers-The True Silent Swordsman]

Dear Readers,

Hello in the RP I was Hyoma. It was awesome making the RP especially because I made a lot of new friends doing it. I liked every part of the RP. I hope you enjoy this fan fic by SwiftObliterater.

 

Yours Truly

The True Silent Swordsman

 

P.S. I rule.

 

 

[spoiler=Chapter 3-Darkening The Soul]

Kai-8000

Raku-8000

 

"Okay! I'll start! I summon my Firestorm Blade Mistress!" Kai said, playing the monster.

 

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"Next, I play 2 face-downs and I'll end." Kai said, ending her turn. "Sweet. My draw." Raku said. Suddenly, a chill ran through Raku. His eyes turned pitch black. Exxo was in control. "I activate my Card Destruction." He said. They both discarded their cards. "Now. Since I discarded my Giant Orcs because of Card Destruction, I remove them from play to summon....DARK NECROFEAR!" Exxo said, in Raku's voice. "Cream her!" He said. Dark Necrofear began to attack, but Kai had a trap rigged. "I trigger my trap, Negate Attack!" Necrofear pulls back. "I play 2 face-downs and end." Exxo says. Kai draws. "I activate my Maseleom of the Emporer. I pay 1000 Life Points to summon......MOBIUS, THE FROST MONARCH! But, I chain his effect with Ultimate Offering. Now...." Kai began. She pointed at Exxo's face-downs. "Destroy 'em, Mobius!" The face-downs shattered. "I pay 1500 to summon Zaborg, The Thunder Monarch. His effect destroys your Necrofear!" Kai said. Necrofear screamed in despair and shattered. "Now....ATTACK!"

 

Kai: 5500 LP

Exxo/Raku: 2500 LP

 

"Now....I end." Kai said. "Good. I draw." Exxo said. "I summon Chainsaw Insect!" Exxo said. The monster burst out. "DESTROY HER FIRESTORM BLADE MISTRESS!" Exxo exclaimed.

 

Kai: 4900 LP

 

"I end." Exxo said calmly. "I draw. I attack Chainsaw with Zaborg." Kai said softly. Both cards shattered and were sent to the Graveyard. "Now. I attack with Mobius!" Kai said. Mobius charged at Exxo.

 

Exxo: 100 LP

 

"I'll finish my turn and the duel with Tremendous Fire!" Kai said.

 

Exxo: 0 LP

Kai: 4400 LP

 

This cannot happen to me...I have to vanish quickly. Exxo thought. Exxo gave Raku control back, and his soul faded back into the depths of Raku. Suddenly, Shun and Hyoma stopped their onslaught of laughter. "Oh.......snap..." They both said in unison. They ran away. "RUN! SHE'S A DUELING MACHINE!" They screamed. "What....happened?" Raku said, his voice low. "Raku! Don't you remember the duel?" Kai asked. Raku closed his eyes. "Oh no!" Kai said. She ran to the nearest pay-phone and dialed 911. "Hello? Police Depertmant? We need you ASAP at Domino Park. My friend is unconciuess."

 

To be Continued....

 

 

[spoiler=Chapter 4-Entering Darkness Pt.1]

Raku began to open his eyes. He looked around. He was in a large room, laying on a bed. Kai, Hyoma, and Shun stood around the bed. "K-Kai? Hyo-ma? Shun?" Raku said softly. "He's awake!" Thank god your okay, Raku!" Kai said. As always, Kai was a worrier. Then, the lights went off. They began to flicker. A teen with a black shirt and a brown Duel Disk stood in the doorway. "Hyoma? What time is it?" He asked. "Oh. Volf. Long time no see. I'ts 5:30 PM. Wh-" Hyoma began, but Volf vanished. "Something isn't right about him." Shun said. Then, a black figure formed next to Raku. Raku panicked. Kai and the others looked at Raku strangely. "Are you OK?" A nurse said. Raku didn't take his eyes off of the black figure. "I am Exxo. Raku. A cursed has been placed upon you. You will give the life of someone who shares your blood, your closest friend, and then, mortal fool...You will sacrficie yourself." Then, the figure vanished. Raku looked around. "Raku?" Hyoma said. "There was a black guy, saying I was gonna sacrifice myself...and..and.." Raku began. "Oh relax." The nurse said. She helped Raku lay down. "Just go to sleep." She said. "Bye, Raku." Kai said, smiling. Hyoma, Kai, and Shun walked out of the room. "Bu--...." Raku mummered, but he was alone.

It was midnight.Raku woke up, with a feeling of rage. He jumped out of the bed and ran to his house. He slammed to door open, and saws his mother cleaning the bedroom. "Oh, Raku...The doctor said you wouldn't be home until tomorrow. I was tidyin---" His mother began, but a seal began to shine on the ground. Raku began to chant. A black aura formed around his mother. "What are you doing?" His mother said. Then, Raku turned his hands into a fist, and his mother disenegrated. "Good-bye, Mom." Raku said. And he fainted again.

 

To Be Continued...

 

[spoiler=Chapter 5-Entering Darkness Pt. 2]

Raku awoke. A dark jolt ran through his body. He struggled to get up. He turned around. He passed through the door way, slamming the door shut, and it broke into meer peices of wood. He found his way to Hyoma's mansion. He broke the door down. Hyoma was rummmaging through his cards when Raku entered. "Oh. Hey Raku! What's up?" Hyoma said to Raku. Raku began to chant. "What are you doi---" Hyoma began to speak, but the same seal that appeared around Raku's mother had circled around Hyoma's feet. Hyoma glowed black, and vanished. "Now....The End of you, Raku." Exxo whispered. "NO! NO! no....." Raku screamed. His body turned a pitch-black color. Exxo's soul took control of Raku. "Heheh...." Exxo laughed. He charged outside, walking down the road.

Kai and Shun walked up the street towards Hyoma's mansion. "What does Hyoma want now?" Shun asked Kai. Kai shrugged. "Something about selling his old--" Kai began to explain, but Raku charged right into her. "Raku? What the heck!?" Kai shouted at him, getting up. "Oh, sorry Kai." Exxo said in Raku's voice. "It's okay, it was an accident right?" She asked. "Of course!" Exxo said, in Raku's voice. These mortals are so easy to fool. Exxo thought. Now I just need to contact the darkness within.... Exxo thought. He grinned grimly. His eyes flashed with darkness. Mortals are just my pawns after all. Exxo thought. Pawns waiting to be played.

 

To Be Continued...

 

[spoiler=Chapter 6-Rebirth of Silence Pt. 1]

"So, what were you doing?" Exxo asked Kai and Shun, tricking them by using Raku's voice. "Just going to Hyoma's hou--" Shun began to explain, but Exxo blocked them. "No need to go, I was just there, and he said he was busy!" Exxo explained. They can't find out that Hyoma's dead, or it'll blow my cover. I've waited too long for this! Too long for destruction! Exxo thought.

Meanwhile, a dark spirit roamed downtown Domino. "Hmph. Exxo is near. He'll need my help to conquer and destroy." The spirit mummers to itself. He looks down, spotting Volf as he walked towards the avenue ahead. "Perfect vessle." The spirit chuckled. It flew down, circling Volf. It flooded itself into Volf. "Hey...what?!" Volf said. He feel to the ground, hitting the sidewalk hard. A woman who was walking by stopped. "Are you all right, young man?" She asked. She poked Volf. "I'm fine." He said. He stood up and turned around facing the woman. He growled and tackled her, having some sort of animal instinct. "What's happening to me?" He asked himself. His skin burnt. He grew Satan-like wings, holding a burning pitch-fork. His tail was ended with spikes. He had bonded with a dark spirit named Reaper. No...he BECAME Reaper.

Back at Hyoma's mansion, 1 card at the bottom of the pile he had spread out was glowing. A large spirit, Silent Swordsman LV. 7, had emerged from it. "Hyoma?" He said. He searched with no result. "He's not here..." The spirit murmered. Then, he heard Hyoma's voice. "Silent? Is that you? Help me...Please!" The voice echoed. "Of course, Hyoma, old friend." The swordsman said. He focused his Duel Energy* on bringing Hyoma back.

"Raku? Why shouldn't we go to Hyoma's house?" Kai asked. "Fine go. He didn't want to see you, but if you insist." Exxo said, still fooling Shun and Kai. They walked to Hyoma's mansion. Shun knocked on the door. "Hyoma, man? You home?" Shun called. The door creaked open. Kai looked at Raku harshley. They stepped inside. Then, there was an explosion of light, and a large THUD. Everyone was silent.

 

To Be Continued...

 

[spoiler=Hey, Readers!-Swift]

Hi, everyone. It's Swift here. The RP was alot of fun to do. Thousands of posts, drama, romance, action. It was wow. I was Kai in the RP. Hey, gone for 3 seconds, and you'd fall behind about 5 pages. Lol. Anyway, enjoy the Fan Fic.

 

 

[spoiler=Chapter 7-Rebirth of Silence Pt. 2]

The light faded. Exxo was knocked to the ground. On top of him was Hyoma, standing proudly. "Hyoma?! What'd you do that for?" Kai said, trying to push Hyoma off. "This isn't Raku!" Hyoma convinced Shun and Kai. "What?" Shun and Kai said. "He's right." Exxo said. This time, not in Exxo's voice. It was deeper, more mysterious voice. "I am Exxo." He said, rising out from under Hyoma. Then, Volf, who was being possesed by Reaper, appeared behind Exxo. "Long time no see." Reaper said the Exxo. "Yes. Now...Let's conquer." Exxo said, grinning. They disseapered. "We have to stop them." Silent Swordsman said. "He's right. But where are they?" Shun asked. "Egypt." Silent Swordsman said. Everyone turned to him. "I can teleport. Get ready, and get back here when you are." The swordsman said.

The trio prepared themselves. One hour later, they meet back at Hyoma's mansion. They warped to where Reaper and Exxo were. They appeared in front of a unusally large pyramid. They found the entarnce and slowly made there way inside. Then, they heard voices. "Exxo and Reaper." Kai mouthed to the group. They sidled on the wall and reached the two. "Exxo. We have some guests." Reaper said, with an evil grin on his face. Exxo walked out of a doorway, and saw the group. "You have come to dare oppose us?" Exxo said. "We've come to stop you, Exxo." Hyoma said. His duel disk lit up, and Hyoma was ready to duel. "Have it your way." Exxo responded, as his sword lit up. "I'll take care of Reaper. You go scout out the place." Kai whispered to Shun. Shun nodded and took off. "DUEL!" Hyoma and Exxo screamed, at the same time of Reaper and Kai.

 

To Be Continued...

 

 

[spoiler=Chapter 8-Descending Light]

Kai and Reaper both drew 5 cards. "I'll start!" Kai declared. She drew her next card and started her turn. "I summon my Thunder Nyan Nyan!" Kai said. The peppy drummer appeared on the field, to quite a tune. "Yay! Time to fight some evil!" Thunder Nyan Nyan said. "Now, I'll play 2 face-downs and end." Kai said. "Heh. That's all?" Reaper said, chuckling. He drew his card. "I activate Shifting Shadows, Grande Garden Composition, and my second Shifting Shadows. Now, I'll throw 'em away for....HAMON!" Reaper called out. A rumbling shook the pyramid with great source. A giant, gold demon rose. "I play 2 face-downs and end." Reaper said. Kai drew, beginning her turn. "I activate DNA surgery! And Ultimate Offering!" Reaper said, sprining his traps. "All monsters are Fiends now." Reaper said. "Okay. I summon my other Thunder Nyan Nyan!" Kai said. The drummer played a tune as she appeared. "Next, I activate Swords of Revealing Light." Kai said. Swords blocked Kai's field. "Fine then," Reaper said, drawing a card. "I summon Giant Orc. Now, I activate Ultimate Offering. To summon 2 more Giant Orcs." Reaper said. Little did Kai know, Reaper drew an extra 3 cards. "Now..." Reaper said grinning. "I summon...RAVIEL!" Reaper yelled. The rumbling began. Raviel appeared. "She's doomed..." Exxo said. Hyoma glared at Exxo. That son of a jabroni...Not caring for anyone...What has he done to Raku? Hyoma thought. "ATTACK!" Reaper said. So fast, Kai's Life Points fell to 0. Then, a black aura began to overcome Kai's body. She disenagrated. A card appeared in her place.

 

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"NO!" Hyoma said. Shun walked back in. He stared in horror. Deep inside Exxo, Raku was alive. He looked at Kai, terrified. "No....No...No...NO!" Then, Exxo screamed. Everyone turned. There was a large explosion. Exxo stood at one end of the room. And directly across the room....

 

Raku stood, enraged at the dark spirit.

 

To Be Continued...

 

[spoiler=Epilouge-End of the Abyss]

Raku and Exxo glared at eachother. "You trapped me in that abyss that replaces your soul..." Raku said. Hyoma senced rage tracing in his voice. Shun slowly stepped out of the room. "Yes. It was fun manipulating your friends." Exxo grinned. "That is it! I CAN'T STAND YOU, YOU jabroni!" Raku screamed. "YOU TURNED MY FRIEND INTO A CARD, YOU TRAPPED ME INSIDE YOUR HEARTLESS ABYSS OF A SOUL, AND...ARGH!" Raku screamed. Hyoma and Reaper, although on different sides, exchanged looks, suprised by Raku. "Duel!" Exxo said. "And maybe I'll free your friend." He finished. "Okay." Hyoma said, stepping up. "2 on 1?" Exxo asked. "It hardly seems fair....for you." Exxo whispered.

Meanwhile, Shun was exploring the pyramid. "Woah..." He said. He had stumbled upon a large room. On each side there were tabelets and a large space. "What was this?" He asked. The words echoed through the stone structure. He lifted a golden tablet. The markings resembled a Red Eyes Black Dragon. "This must've been where they dueled in years past." He figured. He walked around. Then, he walked into a wooden door. He pushed on it, but it wouldn't move. "That's odd. All the years in here would've loosened it..." Shun said. He walked away and continued his expedition.

"Nice move!" Hyoma told Raku. Raku had destroyed Exxo's Dark Necrofear with a Trap Hole. Exxo had full Life Points. Same applied to Hyoma and Raku. "I summon Silent Swordsman LV. 3!" Hyoma said. "I activate my Spell, LV Up!" He said. The tiny swordsman grew. "Now. I activate my second LV Up!" Hyoma declared. "Here he comes....SILENT SWORDSMAN LV. 7!" He called. "Now...ATTACK!" He said. The swordsman held his large blade high and crushed Exxo. Exxo grunted and lost 2600 Life Points. (Exxo LP: 5400) "I'll call it a turn." Hyoma said. "My go." Raku said, drawing. "I summon Gemeni Elf!" Raku said. The sisters appeared next to Silent Swordsman. "I activate Double Attack. It's effect activates on Hyoma's big friend there." Raku explained. He discarded Red Eyes. B Dragon from his hand. "Finish him!" Raku said. The duo charged Exxo. "Impossible!" Exxo screamed as a light gathered around him. He vanished. Reaper as well. But Exxo didn't die. He had retreated inside Raku. Deep inside. Raku and Volf fainted. Shun returned, and the duo began to leave. A light shone behind them. They turned. Raku and Volf awoke to the amazing sight. Kai stood in the place of the card. She checked her deck. The card she was in was at the bottom. "Kai! You're okay!" Raku said, smiling. He hugged Kai and stood back. "Yay!" Hyoma said. "Kai's back!" Shun celebrated. "Whatever." Volf said, leaving alone. The other four left the pyramid with rejoice and content. The darkness had been vanquished....For now...

 

To Be Continued....?

To Be Continued....?

 

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