shadowgames Posted July 11, 2008 Report Share Posted July 11, 2008 Hi eveyone ... I'm new here ... I have just made this account yesterday :PI know I have a lot of mistakes in making cards ... So please comment for me and help me make them better ... Thank you !! :D:DI like holy type card ... And here they are :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enigma Zero Posted July 11, 2008 Report Share Posted July 11, 2008 Ok, you have ideas and your pictures are decent. The main problem you have here is that your OCG(Official Card Grammar) is completely off. I would suggest you read The OCG/Grammar Thread so you can see how real cards are reworded and then redo them all. ;) P.S. Lose all the weird types. Once you master the basics then you can try to make 1 new type for your cards but, for now, it's just clutter. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silencerleader Posted July 11, 2008 Report Share Posted July 11, 2008 i'm from brazil and i do very best cards idiota!!!!! Idiot?!? Look who is talking noob! Spammer. Anyway...the cards need improvement.Get rid of the Dwarf-type. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HellKaiserofDarkness Posted July 11, 2008 Report Share Posted July 11, 2008 you need to look at the proper ocg thread...1/10. 1 point for pics. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted July 11, 2008 Report Share Posted July 11, 2008 Not so good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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