eric234 Posted July 12, 2008 Report Share Posted July 12, 2008 thiz is my new card and plz rate and plz tell me if its overpowering Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sleevecard Posted July 12, 2008 Report Share Posted July 12, 2008 OCG needs a lot of work. Its ATK, Trap, and Spells (not magic anymore). Also the word is "your" not ur. Oh and only one 0 is needed for the ATK not four. 2/10 just because the pic is cool. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantasy Dreamz Posted July 12, 2008 Report Share Posted July 12, 2008 OCG needs a lot of work. Its ATK' date=' Trap, and Spells (not magic anymore). Also the word is "your" not ur. Oh and only one 0 is needed for the ATK not four. 2/10 just because the pic is cool.[/quote'] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eric234 Posted July 12, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 12, 2008 thanks and i made a change to the card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantasy Dreamz Posted July 12, 2008 Report Share Posted July 12, 2008 try again.... "This card gains 500 ATK for each Spells and Trap Cards on your field." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eric234 Posted July 12, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 12, 2008 wat should i put Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantasy Dreamz Posted July 12, 2008 Report Share Posted July 12, 2008 "This card gains 500 ATK for each Spells and Trap Cards on your field." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sleevecard Posted July 12, 2008 Report Share Posted July 12, 2008 yeah most of it is just capitalization errors. And change ur to your Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eric234 Posted July 12, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 12, 2008 i did make changes Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sleevecard Posted July 12, 2008 Report Share Posted July 12, 2008 Ok it looks good now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eric234 Posted July 12, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 12, 2008 thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cassia Posted July 12, 2008 Report Share Posted July 12, 2008 How about this?This card gets 500 ATK points for every Spell and Trap card on your side of the field. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted July 12, 2008 Report Share Posted July 12, 2008 Put in Fiend or Zombie as the type. Dark is an attribute. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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