Wi Fi Master Jordan Posted July 12, 2008 Report Share Posted July 12, 2008 ok this is my first splice its a horsee and a mew i know it sucks but im new at this morsee can you rate it from 1-10 for a begginer new one geofet new one ra-ri new one silencer- raqquaza+areadactal+mew+kabutotaps+aggron+geodude deodude- deoktops- dew two- deodactly- mewokly two- Garnix--onix+gardose unknown name- !!!New!!1 dittowie Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Buffer Posted July 12, 2008 Report Share Posted July 12, 2008 thats so bad I wanna pull out a old "you fail" pic (i won't but its really bad) I'll help ya if you wan't Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skyfi Posted July 12, 2008 Report Share Posted July 12, 2008 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
D-lock Posted July 12, 2008 Report Share Posted July 12, 2008 Sorry, looks nothing like a Pokémon. 1/10 for the effort. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yogg-Saron Posted July 12, 2008 Report Share Posted July 12, 2008 What happened to the outline around the head?2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Buffer Posted July 12, 2008 Report Share Posted July 12, 2008 I thought they made a rule saying you can't post fail pics Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Slash Posted July 12, 2008 Report Share Posted July 12, 2008 meh, it'z ok for your firstBut maybe try reading or watching a tutorial...5/10 for a newbie Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Willieh Posted July 12, 2008 Report Share Posted July 12, 2008 I thought they made a rule saying you can't post fail pics They did >.> Lol you guys should be a little easier on him (excluding slash). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted July 12, 2008 Report Share Posted July 12, 2008 Go find a tut to improve. 3/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Buffer Posted July 12, 2008 Report Share Posted July 12, 2008 I thought they made a rule saying you can't post fail pics They did >.> Lol you guys should be a little easier on him (excluding slash). ah hem I am one of the top ten best splicers on ycm (I used to be in the top 5 T.T) so I usely get a tiny bit harsh on bad splicers but I offer to help and behold a mirical happens (only works for splicers willing to actually work hard) they become great (lets take a look at ruby (one of my former students) and see how great he has be come) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted July 12, 2008 Report Share Posted July 12, 2008 Head is blurry. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hioco Posted July 12, 2008 Report Share Posted July 12, 2008 buffer who is te top 10?? anyways 5/10 not bad but read some tuts or ask for a tutor... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tefached Posted July 12, 2008 Report Share Posted July 12, 2008 this is ok for a first. not good, not great, but not bad add more things to the mew body,recolor to horsee colorswork on the outline better Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Marisa Kirisame-ze Posted July 13, 2008 Report Share Posted July 13, 2008 sorry but those aren't good pokemon to split.....and this slicer is really weird.....it just looks....i don't know how to say it.....just work harder....im sure you will improve! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wi Fi Master Jordan Posted July 27, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 27, 2008 new splice added Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Tiger Posted July 27, 2008 Report Share Posted July 27, 2008 Considering that was your first splice 5/10 Also look at some tuts. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wi Fi Master Jordan Posted July 27, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 27, 2008 new one added its a legendary Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jappio Posted July 28, 2008 Report Share Posted July 28, 2008 Ok, time for me to critique here. Horsee + Mew. This sprite is quite ugly. I don't know what you possible did to the Horsee head. You have pixels everywhere, you undid all the shading. It looks very misformed. Lots of improvement is needed. Geodude + Wabufette. Ok, this one is very odd looking. Shading is off once again. Also a point that should be made, the geodude arms don't look right. Wobufettes body is sort of smooth and squishy, or looks like it. Geodudes arms are rocky, rough and stuff. These two textures don't combine nicely. Your recoloring also missed a few spots, I see some blue on it (when recoloring, don't forget there are some dark border colors there too). Finally, you did something weird to the border, you made it thick and stuff in some areas. I don't know why you would have to do this, but it makes it ugly. Rayquaza + Darkrai. You have improved, but still have a lot more room for even more improvement. One issue I have is that there is very little from Darkrai, or I should say too much Darkrai in one area, not enough else where. Another issue, you poorly cut Darkrai's necklace thing, and put it in a poor place. There is also some random hovering pixel floating there too. So I've listed the issues you have, but if you properly attend to them, your splicing skills could increase. I'd like to see you use this advice and show some improvement for the next splice you do if you decide to continue in this art field. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mikaeo Posted July 28, 2008 Report Share Posted July 28, 2008 I've seen worse first splices. 5/10 for Morsee Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tefached Posted July 28, 2008 Report Share Posted July 28, 2008 the very first one is awfulthe second one is to basic, you should have added the texture of geodude to it.thirdneeds work if you need ideas check out my archive with 139 out of the couple hundred splices ive made[yea my archive needs more updating] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wi Fi Master Jordan Posted July 28, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 28, 2008 ok heres my biggest one so far silencer Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jappio Posted July 28, 2008 Report Share Posted July 28, 2008 I don't know if this is an improvement or not. I liek that your trying something new, by using the design all over. Yet the image is very warped, much too hard to tell whats going on, whats in it, or what its suppose to be like. Its nice you wanted to do a lot of things, but I suggest you work on perfecting the basics before going off on new things. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wi Fi Master Jordan Posted July 30, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 30, 2008 new one added deodude- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yogg-Saron Posted July 30, 2008 Report Share Posted July 30, 2008 Deodude is........wow. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wi Fi Master Jordan Posted July 30, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 30, 2008 new ones added!!!! dew two- deodactly- mewokly two- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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