Rikana Posted July 13, 2008 Report Share Posted July 13, 2008 Hi there I thought why won't I give it another try, so here it is Guunra the Legendary Sea-Dragon: Effect: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be special Summoned except by removing from play 8 Dragon-Type monsters with different names from your Hand or Graveyard. If this card is destroyed by battle or by your opponent's card effect, inflict 500 points of Direct Damage to your opponent's Life Points for each Dragon-Type monster on the field. The reason why it's 8 Dragon-Type monsters you should discard is because this effect allows you to also discard them from your hand not only the Graveyard. Try to be nice this time because I tryed my best this time with both the Picture and the OCG (or something like that :P) Defence is a bit changed: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarkAngel_XD_070695 Posted July 13, 2008 Report Share Posted July 13, 2008 i like it jst raise the DEF a little but overall i rly like it i could use it in my Dragon Deck! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DonRoyale Posted July 13, 2008 Report Share Posted July 13, 2008 WOW, MORE GREAT OCG! :) "This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing from play 8 Dragon-Type monsters with different names from your hand or Graveyard. When this card is destroyed by battle or by a card effect your opponent controls, inflict 500 damage to your opponent for each face-up Dragon-Type monster on the field." My God, is this EVER a good card. Open with Future Fusion, three Dragons, and a beatstick (Exiled Force, perhaps?). BAM! 9.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rikana Posted July 13, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 13, 2008 WOW' date=' MORE GREAT OCG! :) "This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing from play 8 Dragon-Type monsters with different names from your hand or Graveyard. When this card is destroyed by battle or by a card effect your opponent controls, inflict 500 damage to your opponent for each face-up Dragon-Type monster on the field." My God, is this EVER a good card. Open with Future Fusion, three Dragons, and a beatstick (Exiled Force, perhaps?). BAM! 9.8/10[/quote'] Thanks, so I finnaly managed to create a card with correct OCG :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bury the year Posted July 13, 2008 Report Share Posted July 13, 2008 You forgot to capitalize the "Special" in "Special Summon", but your OCG rocks! Thanks for reading up on it, 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rikana Posted July 13, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 13, 2008 You forgot to capitalize the "Special" in "Special Summon"' date=' but your OCG rocks! Thanks for reading up on it, 8.5/10[/quote'] Oh Yeah I see lol thanks I already fixed it now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silent Member Posted July 13, 2008 Report Share Posted July 13, 2008 Yeah,but you misspelled Kazuki Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
silverlighted Posted July 13, 2008 Report Share Posted July 13, 2008 Nice card. Instant, powerful beatstick for dragons that will probably smack the opponent for another quick 500 when it leaves.I think the summoning cost is a bit insane though...8 is freakishly high, and it doesn't have any sort of catclysmic effect that warrants such a cost I think. Maybe 4-5ish would be better. I know you also mentioned the hand as well...that makes it a bit more flexible, but I think 8 is just overkill. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silencerleader Posted July 13, 2008 Report Share Posted July 13, 2008 The card has minor errors...but Kuzuki Takahashi?Dude...you can't screw that name...Its...KAZUKI TAKAHASHI. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rikana Posted July 13, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 13, 2008 Whoops... now I took all of you guys advice and now I get this: Good/fair enough ? :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted July 14, 2008 Report Share Posted July 14, 2008 Very impressive for a new member. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Slayeroflight Posted July 14, 2008 Report Share Posted July 14, 2008 So...people can literally print and use these like real cards? :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rikana Posted July 14, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 14, 2008 So...people can literally print and use these like real cards? :P Yep and that's why people want it to be Official Card Grammer or let's just say correctly written so it realy could be a Official card :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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