DarkAngel_XD_070695 Posted July 13, 2008 Report Share Posted July 13, 2008 okay no OCG errors same as my other ones jst rate on the card and the pic... thanks! and if it sucks point out some stuff so i can change it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skuldur Posted July 13, 2008 Report Share Posted July 13, 2008 some OCG errors but i like it 8.2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aouros Posted July 13, 2008 Report Share Posted July 13, 2008 9.99/10 Allow me to write a corrected version of your OCG "Dragon Girl - Dark" - "Black Dragon"When Dragon Keeper - Dark is summoned to the field, destroy all Dragon-type monsters on your opponent's field. For every monster destroyed by this effect, Dragon Keeper - Dark gains 500 ATK points. Try this one out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarkAngel_XD_070695 Posted July 13, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 13, 2008 9.99/10 Allow me to write a corrected version of your OCG "Dragon Girl - Dark" - "Black Dragon"When Dragon Keeper - Dark is summoned to the field' date=' destroy all Dragon-type monsters on your opponent's field. For every monster destroyed by this effect, Dragon Keeper - Dark gains 500 ATK points. Try this one out.[/quote'] thanks for the helpmy OCG is really bad :( Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragon God Posted July 13, 2008 Report Share Posted July 13, 2008 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted July 14, 2008 Report Share Posted July 14, 2008 9.99/10 Allow me to write a corrected version of your OCG "Dragon Girl - Dark" - "Black Dragon"When Dragon Keeper - Dark is summoned to the field' date=' destroy all Dragon-type monsters on your opponent's field. For every monster destroyed by this effect, Dragon Keeper - Dark gains 500 ATK points. Try this one out.[/quote'] Wrong. Proper OCG: Dragon Girl - Dark + Black DragonThis monster cannot be Summoned except by Fusion Summon. Destroy all Dragon-type monsters your opponent controls. This monster gains 500 ATK for each monster destroyed by this effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saturn of Elemia Posted July 14, 2008 Report Share Posted July 14, 2008 Good card. I would raise its Level, personally. DeMeNTeD mentioned the OCG issue. I like the image. I'm giving this a 9.5/10. Keep up the good work! :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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