DarkAngel_XD_070695 Posted July 13, 2008 Report Share Posted July 13, 2008 Here's a dragon Mistress Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
A Flying Toaster Posted July 13, 2008 Report Share Posted July 13, 2008 thats a pretty cool card u made! I like how the picture matches up with the color of the card :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rikana Posted July 13, 2008 Report Share Posted July 13, 2008 The card is ok, but you kinda used a Synchro card and made it a Fusion card, lol. I like the picture but there's some text in it. There are also some OCG errors (to point out one) you should capitalize alot of words like Normal Summoned and Fusion Summoned. Look at some real Yugioh cards and see how they use the words you're about to use in a card. If you fix the little errors this would become a 7/10 but now it's about 4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarkAngel_XD_070695 Posted July 13, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 13, 2008 The card is ok' date=' but you kinda used a Synchro card and made it a Fusion card, lol. I like the picture but there's some text in it. There are also some OCG errors (to point out one) you should capitalize alot of words like Normal Summoned and Fusion Summoned. Look at some real Yugioh cards and see how they use the words you're about to use in a card. If you fix the little errors this would become a 7/10 but now it's about 4/10[/quote'] ooopps but its okay...i'll try with the OCG's i was in a hurry and i was gonna get rid of the txt i'm not done w/ it yet...its a rough copy! haha Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VainZiler Posted July 13, 2008 Report Share Posted July 13, 2008 The OCG needs a little work. The first effect should read "This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be summoned by Fusion Summon." The second effect should read "While this card is face-up on the field, decrease the ATK of all monsters on the field by 400 points." And the last effect should read "While the card "Ice Canyon" is active on the field, increase this cards ATK and DEF by an additional 1000 points." All in all, it's a decent card, but it's hard to call whether it's underpowered or overpowered, it kind of borders on both. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragon God Posted July 13, 2008 Report Share Posted July 13, 2008 that is not how you word a synchro Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarkAngel_XD_070695 Posted July 13, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 13, 2008 that is not how you word a synchro well idk what a synchro card is i jst like the color ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted July 14, 2008 Report Share Posted July 14, 2008 Synchros involve tuner monsters.Make the card a regular fusion monster. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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