TR_Headshot Posted July 14, 2008 Report Share Posted July 14, 2008 Here's my Fan-Fic so far, inspired by Kale's. Enjoy! [spoiler= Prologue]*Crunch* The gravel cracked beneath the man's boots. He gazed up at the sorrowful moon. “Hmmph... the night's still young.... maybe, I'll still find him.” *Rustle* The man turned, a bird flew out from a tree. He walked on, silently, seemingly oblivious to his surroundings. But, the truth is quite the opposite. The man is carefully absorbing all of the data around him. He must find the other. The man sighed and took rest beneath a tall oak. Staring up, he wonders if they'll ever meet again. The man jumps with a start. It's dawn, he was careless. Picking himself up, he realizes.... he is by no means, alone. “I see.... another victim...” The newcomer whispered. He moved his arm, something shined. The man covered his eyes from the glare. “Duel!” [spoiler=Chapter 1]Duel! “Hee hee!” the strange adversary giggled aloud. “And just what's so amusing?” the man inquired. “I'm excited... that I finally get to face the Virtuous Sinner: Ashen Veralis! “...Hmmm.... So, are you ready to duel?” Ashen asked, loading his Duel Disk. “Guess what?” questioned Ashen's opponent, “We're playing for pinks! Winner takes all, I win.... you die! AHHAHAHHAHA” {This guy's nuts! I've got to win, must find the other} “DUEL” (Ashen) I Set a face down monster and activate my field spell card: Burning Sin! And I activate it's effect, I may now send one Sin monster from my hand to my Graveyard! (???) Why would you want to do that!? (Ashen) You'll see... your turn, but wait. (???) Hmm? (Ashen) What's your name? (Denid) Denid A'skirsu.... {A Ro' T' Baen! Not good, they're said to be very smart.... Maybe I got a dumbass.} (Denid) All right! I summon Steam Walker # 1, and I equip to him Circuit Board # 1. Increasing his ATK from 850 to 1350! I also equip him with Gear Works! Further powering him up to 1850 ATK and 950 DEF. Attack! Attack his face down! (Ashen) Ha! -The card flips face up revealing Sin- Ferri, 1950 DEF.- (Denid) Gah... -Denid loses 100 Life Points- Life Points:Ashen: 8000Denid: 7900 (Denid) I end my turn... (Ashen) Well, I discard another monster due to Burning Sin. Now, I summon Sin- Azleri ATK 1200 DEF 1200, he gains 200 ATK due to his effect. ATK 1400. I activate 7 Deadly Sins- Pride! Increasing the ATK of my two monsters by 1000! Sin- Ferri ATK 1000 DEF 1950Sin- AzleriATK 2200 DEF 1200 (Ashen) Attack his Steamwalker # 1! (Denid) AHHHH! Life Points:Ashen: 8000Denid: 7550 (Ashen) I switch my Azleri into attack position. Now! Ferri, Azleri, attack! (Denid) NOOOOO! Life Points:Ashen: 8000Denid: 4350 (Ashen) I activate 7 Deadly Sins- Gluttony and discard another card from my hand to end my turn.(Denid) Damn..... Since my Steamwalker # 1 was destroyed in battle, I can Set my Steamwalker # 2. I end my turn. (Ashen) I use my Gluttony's effect to destroy your monster, placing a Gluttony Counter on itself. Now, I summon Virtue- Nos. Now, all of my monsters, attack him directly! Duel End Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted July 14, 2008 Report Share Posted July 14, 2008 very interesting start, but i must say that that was short! XD at least it was the prologue. and thank you for saying that i inspired you. that is quite nice.. ^_^ continue with this. ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
End Of The Abyss Posted July 14, 2008 Report Share Posted July 14, 2008 Short with a realistic touch. Please continue. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TR_Headshot Posted July 15, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 15, 2008 Don't worry, the rest is on it's way! Thanks for the support! :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TR_Headshot Posted July 15, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 15, 2008 Chapter 1 is here Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted July 15, 2008 Report Share Posted July 15, 2008 chapter 1 was a little hard to follow at the end, but overall it was good. ^_^ Keep going. ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TR_Headshot Posted July 15, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 15, 2008 Well, Open Office Org kinda messed up at the end... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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