End Of The Abyss Posted July 16, 2008 Report Share Posted July 16, 2008 Rising Moon is my band. I play guitar. This is our debut song, Abandoned. *Slow guitar introduction*Abandoned, I am all alone. Abandoned….I have been de-throned.Abandoned…I am by myself.Abandoned…I’m losing my sanity, I’m losing my health, I’ve been abandoned… Everyone is trying to avoid me,Everyone wants to destroy me,Nobody is around, Nothing can make a sound, My life has turned around,The light has turned to dark,My life is nothing but an everlasting fightAnd I’m only fighting the truth,I have lost everything, But there’s nothing I miss moreThan my friends. Everything has disappeared, It has vanished from my sight,Right’s wrong, Wrong’s right.Everything has turned it’s back on me….I have lost my right to be free…. Abandoned, I am all alone. Abandoned….I have been de-throwned.Abandoned…I am by myself.Abandoned…I’m losing my sanity, I’m losing my health, I’ve been abandoned… *Slow guitar solo.* Everything has disappeared, It has vanished from my sight,Right’s wrong, Wrong’s right.Everything has turned it’s back on me….I have lost my right to be free…. Abandoned, I am all alone. Abandoned….I have been de-throwned.Abandoned…I am by myself.Abandoned…I’m losing my sanity, I’m losing my health, I’ve been abandoned… Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Willieh Posted July 17, 2008 Report Share Posted July 17, 2008 Kind of repetitive in a way. Most of the songs that my band plays has no order in them. Basically you keep the same theme and rhyme scheme throughout the entire song. This would be like a song by A Perfect Circle. The songs we play are more like lamb of god or tool I guess. Not bad lyrics; just a little redundant. You should upload tabs to the guitar so I can know what it sounds like. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
End Of The Abyss Posted July 17, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 17, 2008 After we make afew more songs, I'll upload our soundtrack. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted July 17, 2008 Report Share Posted July 17, 2008 lol well congratz mate for being in a bannedthat actually, sounds like it would sound good. and a repetative song is goodthat way the dunces that listen to your music can understand it.Note: not saying they all would be dunces. but yesi would like to hear this song =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
End Of The Abyss Posted July 17, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 17, 2008 Thanks, Bloodrun. =] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Arekku_Koro Posted July 17, 2008 Report Share Posted July 17, 2008 o.0 SWIFT IS A GIRL???!!!! On-topic, I like it. It's a nice little diddy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
End Of The Abyss Posted July 17, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 17, 2008 0.o YEAH I'M A GIRL! Thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Frostpaw Posted July 17, 2008 Report Share Posted July 17, 2008 It's quite good. I'd like to hear this song very much. Keep up the good work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Basherbelding Posted July 17, 2008 Report Share Posted July 17, 2008 At the moment im listing to a great song, Propane Nightmares by Pendulum. Anyway i can wait to hear the soundtrack! :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
End Of The Abyss Posted July 17, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 17, 2008 We're working on the second song. We only have the name: "Fearing Hope" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliminateHRN Posted July 17, 2008 Report Share Posted July 17, 2008 It looks very nice Swift. I would like to hear the music to it :D. But still great job. Also my friend has a band, so I know how it can be LOL. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
End Of The Abyss Posted July 17, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 17, 2008 lol. Thnx, Startos, Orihime, basher. The soundtrack info: 8 SongsTitled AbandonedRelease: UnknownCost: $5.00 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucas Maximus Posted July 17, 2008 Report Share Posted July 17, 2008 That's really nice. I like it. I'd definitely buy the soundtrack. You have a great talent at song writing. When you've finished recording, make sure you post it here. ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neiko Posted July 17, 2008 Report Share Posted July 17, 2008 o.0 SWIFT IS A GIRL???!!!! I should sig that...She has "Tomboy" in her title so it's kinda obvious. Nice song^^ Do you play localy where you live? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
End Of The Abyss Posted July 17, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 17, 2008 Well, I just moved to Cameron. NOW IN THE US. No gigs yet. One coming up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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