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This fanfic takes place AFTER GX and BEFORE 5D's

 

[b/Prologue[/b]

Dueling has become more than . Now it can mean life or death. To survive you need to have respect. It's "Fear or Be Feared" These days. One duelist has taken action. Will he succed...or die trying?

 

[spoiler=Main characters]

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Name: Brad Windsar

Age: 18

Bio: His crime boss attitude can scare even the toughest of gang members. He always carries automatic weapons as most do in the area

Deck: Zombie

Rarest card: DeathKaiser Dragon

 

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Name: Susan Izayoi( :shock: )

Age: 17

Bio: Has a crush on Brad(Like most girls in the area do) and again, he doesn't notice

Deck: Plant

Rarest Card: Black Rose Dragon

 

Name: Jaden Yuki

Age: 20

Bio: ???

Deck: You Know

Rarest Card:

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Name: Shane

Age: 19

Bio: A gang member who always duels someone he never met. He's always carries a .357 Magnum around

Deck: ???

Rarest Card : Chaos Emperor Dragon

 

Joey Wheeler

Age: 30

Bio: For some reason, Joey Decided to be a cop(XD). He's employed in the County Sheriff Department

Deck: You Know

Rarest Card: REDMD

 

 

[spoiler=Bad people]

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Demon Form

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Human Form

 

Name: Nightmare(Uses the name Price when in human form)

Age: ???

Bio: A human who lost in a shadow game. He can turn into a human. He wants to use the power of the God, Scared Beast and Wicked gods to go into the future(5D's world where he can take over.

Deck(Human) Dark World

Deck(Demon) the Darkness monsters from the anime

 

 

[spoiler=Other]

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Name: Loopy(Not real name)

Age: 18

Bio: A gang member(you can tell by his name) who to everyone's surprise, doesn't have a police record.

Deck: Fiend

Signature Card: Dark Ruler Ha Des

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Deck(Might have to change)

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Geeze...I have to remake my profile all over again.

Name: Ayame Kouryuu

Gender: Female

Bio:

Appearance:

Skin: Pale peach-almost like snow

Hair: Dark Raven black with hints of blue. She usually wears it in a high or low ponytail. When hanged loose it ends at her waist.

Eyes: Calm sapphire blue-they turn icy blue when she is serious

Clothing:

Personality:

Most of the time she acts sweet, kind, and friendly. She has a short temper and patience sadly. However when push too far she turns into a ruthless person-one who is cold hearted and aloof.

Past: You got to find out later. Currently she is a pro duelist and is feared for her fiendish and powerful monsters. (Note to Dark Hunter: PM for her past)

Deck(Might have to change):

She got two decks. The first is a Dark Attribute Deck.The theme varies but it is mainly deck destruction or beat down. The signature cards she use while using a DARK deck are Diabolos-King of the Abyss, Wicked Eraser, and the Demonic Dragons.

Her second deck is a Red Eyes focused deck. It also got Horus and the Armed Dragon in it along with other powerful dragons. Her most powerful monsters in this deck is Five God Dragon and Red Eyes Ultimate Dragon.

Rarest Cards:

Five God Dragon and Wicked Eraser.

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Here's Episode 1

 

Episode 1

 

Brad was at his house watching a news report about a shooting.

 

Brad: Why can't they have somthing new for once?

 

Brad's lives in the toughest neiborhood in Los Angles. To survive you need to duel. The ones who back down from a challenge get beat up or worse.

 

Brad turns off the T.V walks outside

 

Brad: Hmm what should I do today...

 

???: Hey you!!!

 

Brad: What do you want

 

A guy walks up to him. Judging by his clothes, Brad can tell he's a gang member

 

Brad: I ain't joining no gang

 

???: That's not why I called you here.

 

Brad: Who are you anyway?

 

Shane: I'm Shane. I duel all the duelist I never seen before. Now let's duel

 

Brad gets out his disk

 

Brad: You're on

 

Both of them activate there duel disk

 

Brad: 8000

Shane: 8000

 

Brad and Shane: Duel!!

 

Brad: I'll start

 

In his hand were Shrink, Monster Reborn, Mezuki, Mirror Force, Darkness Gear - Gokuen and he drew Tune Warrior.

 

Brad: I summon Mezuki in ATK mode(1700/800)

 

A large ox like creature with an axe emerged.

 

Brad: I play this face down and end my turn

 

Shane: My turn. I play a monster in defense mode and end my turn

 

Brad: That's all

 

Shane: Heh Heh Heh

 

Brad(:shock:) My turn.

 

He drew Pot of Greed

 

Brad: I activate Pot of Greed which let's me draw 2 cards

 

Brad drew Red Eyes Zombie Dragon and another Mezuki

 

Brad: I summon another Mezuki in ATK mode(1700/800). ATTACK!!!

 

The monster was Marshmallon

 

Brad: No not Marshmallon

 

Shane: Yep now you take 1000 points of damage and Marshmallon can't be destroyed in battle

 

Brad: 7000

Shane: 8000

 

Brad: Turn end

 

Shane: My turn. I activate Graceful Charity which let's me draw 3 cards and discards 2. Then I play Monster Reborn to revive my Tiger Dragon(2400/1800).

 

A tiger like Dragon emerged looking ready to fight.

 

 

Shane: Then I activate Mystical Space Typoon which allows me to destroy your face down.

 

Brad: You son of a...

 

Shane: Tiger Dragon...ATTACK!!!

 

Mezuki was destroyed

 

Brad: 6300

 

Shane: Turn end.

 

Brad: My turn

 

Brad drew Graceful Charity

 

Brad: I activate Graceful Charity

 

He drew Dragon Zombie, Double Summon and Shield Crush and discarded REZD and Gokuen.

 

Brad: I summon Tune Warrior(1600/200) and activate Double Summon son I can summon my Dragon Zombie(1600/0) Now...I Synchro Summon my DeathKaiser Dragon

 

A Large zombie like dragon emerged and let out a cry.

 

Brad: Now I activate Shield Crush to destroy Marshmallon.

 

Shane: ...

 

Brad: Now I activate Monster Reborn to revive my Red Eyes Zombie Dragon(2400/2000)

 

A zombie version of the Red Eyes emerged

 

Brad: Now I activate Shrink to half your monster's attack

 

The Tiger Dragon decreased in size and it's ATK lowered to 1200

 

Brad: Mezuki ATTACK!!!

 

Tiger Dragon was destroyed

 

Brad: 6300

Shane: 6800

 

Brad: Both of you DIRECT ATTACK

 

REZD let out a powerful blast and DeathKaiser let out nasty breath

 

Brad: 6300

Shane: 2000

 

Shane: My turn

 

He looked at his card and a frown came

 

Shane(Thinking) I drew CED but I can't summon him...

 

Brad: Well?

 

Shane: I give. You'd win next turn anyway.

 

Brad: Well I was the best duelist from the town I moved from

 

Shane I can see that. We'll meet again

 

???: Nice Duel

 

Brad turned around. It was Joey

 

Brad: Wow Joey Wheeler... I'm Brad.

 

Joey: Nice to meet you.

 

Brad: Hey Joey, out of all jobs, why did you become a cop

 

Joey: They all ask that. I wanted to be one.

 

Meanwhile...

 

???: Have you found them yet?

 

Masked Guy: No

 

???: Hmph. No worries. The God cars, the Wicked Gods and the Scared Beast...all will be MINE!!!!

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^_^ Looks nice. I see you had taken my idea on the 5D related charature. I thought the Izayoi was going to be a Red head. The weapon thing...O.o; Why are they carrying weapons?! *freaks out* *coughs* Forgot you saw that...

 

The duel was good-however it was short. I thought you would wait a few more chaptures until he bring out his rarest/most powerful cards or at least have a cliffhanger! ><; Overall...8/10 (because of the stuff I mentioned and script format).

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