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Hello everyone. I have another card for you to rate/hate/comment. I was looking through the mountain of images I acquired for competing with Jspamax and this cute image jumped out at me. It reminded me of a card I had made in my Princess Set a while back - "Heiress to the Throne". This card follows the basic formula from my Princess Set - Tokens. I made this card to rival Jspamax's card "The Adoring Family". Without further ado:

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During each of your Standby Phases, Special Summon 1 "Bunny Token" (1-Star/EARTH/Beast-Type/ATK 100/DEF 100) to your field. These Tokens cannot be used for a Tribute Summon. By Tributing 1 "Bunny Token", Special Summon 2 "Bunny Tokens" to your field. This effect can only be activated once per turn.

 

Lemme know whatcha think. :D

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Here's a wording suggestion to assimilate your cards with those of the TCG, especially those of the recent sets.

 

During each of your Standby Phases, Special Summon 1 "Bunny Token" (Beast-Type/EARTH/Level 1/ATK 100/DEF 100). These Tokens cannot be Tributed for a Tribute Summon. Once per turn, you can Tributing 1 "Bunny Token" you control to Special Summon 2 "Bunny Tokens".

 

The picture could be better. It's too anime for Yu-Gi-Oh cards and the rabbit looks soulless. The tiltedness of it is also somewhat concerning.

 

Don't use circulation, all circulations except LIMITED EDITION are unrealistic, and LIMITED EDITION needs a golden prismatic corner stamp. 1st Edition doesn't work because the card maker makes it 1ST EDITION.

 

Set ID needs EN.

 

It's a decent card, not your best, I give it a 71/100 as it is. ;)

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Thanks for the rating, but as for the other suggestions:

 

1) I mostly use anime images for my cards. Since most people complain about others using realistic or overused pictures, I don't see a problem with using anime images.

 

2) I always like to put "Last Edition" as a joke. Since none of these will ever be made into an actual card, it can't really hurt.

 

3) I cannnot stand the EN thing in the Set ID. :?

 

I'm glad everyone took an interest in this card. You all should take a look at my Princess set. 8)

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