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Preveiw of a possible new set

 

Rate's are appreciated, along with any OCG errors.

 

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p><p>[b]EFFECT: When this card is Summoned, select 1 face-up Trap Card on your opponent

 

Picture by Raquel-12 at Photobucket. http://photobucket.com/image/blood%20anime/raquel-12/anime/BLOOD-2.jpg?o=37

 

p><p>[b]EFFECT: When this card is destroyed as a result of Battle, select 1 "Scream" Monster in your Graveyard and remove it from play. During your opponent

 

Picture by Wolvesrain1400 at Photobucket. http://photobucket.com/image/murder%20anime/wolvesrain1400/murder.jpg?o=5

 

 

EFFECT: When this card is Summoned, select 2 Monsters in your opponent's Graveyard and Special Summon them to your opponent's side of the field. As long as this card remains face-up on your side of the field, your opponent cannot declare an attack on a "Scream" Monster, besides this card.

 

Picture by VampireBloodrace1441 at Photobucket. http://photobucket.com/image/destruction%20anime/VampireBloodrace1441/Anime%20Girl/Archsoul.jpg?o=18

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Hmmm..........

Seems rather hard to use, dowside blances upside................

Pic a bit gory.........

8.687527587387/10

Wow, pic of Bacura!

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REALLAY BLODDY!!! i wouldnt post a pic this graphic cuz little kids read this forum you know. but for older kids i guess ill give it a 5.00000000000001/10

 

Well I don't think a child over the age of 10 would mind this card. Seeing how children under the age of 10 would be too scared to click on a thread like this. >_>

 

As for you, the picture is fine. I like it alot. It's a really cool picture of Bakura that I stumbled upon in photobucket. Also, all the '0's arn't really needed. a Simple 5.1 out of ten would do. IMO, that's a bit low. But whatever. Your the rater ^_^.

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This is quite an interesting card. Image is creepy, but fitting. The stats are fairly balanced considering its condition for staying on the field. Your OCG is off. I think this is how it should be:

 

When this card is Summoned, select 1 face-up Trap Card on your opponent's field and equip it to this card (the selected Trap Card is treated as an Equip Spell Card). If there is no Trap Card equipped to this card, destroy it. Once per turn, you can discard 1 card from your hand to decrease the ATK of 1 face-up monster on your opponent's field by 500.

 

I'm gonna give this card a 8.6 because of its unique effect. Great idea! Keep up the good work! :D

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This is quite an interesting card. Image is creepy' date=' but fitting. The stats are fairly balanced considering its condition for staying on the field. Your OCG is off. I [b']think[/b] this is how it should be:

 

When this card is Summoned, select 1 face-up Trap Card on your opponent's field and equip it to this card (the selected Trap Card is treated as an Equip Spell Card). If there is no Trap Card equipped to this card, destroy it. Once per turn, you can discard 1 card from your hand to decrease the ATK of 1 face-up monster on your opponent's field by 500.

 

I'm gonna give this card a 8.6 because of its unique effect. Great idea! Keep up the good work! :D

 

 

Fixed ^_^. Thankies to the above.

 

Also, thread name is now changed AND a new card is now added.

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Okay, the second card's effect isn't possible. "Scream - Murder's Advocate" activates its effect when sent to the Graveyard. The last part of the effect cannot be applied since "Scream - Murder's Advocate" is in the Graveyard. Here is how I would word it:

 

When this card is destroyed by battle, select 1 "Scream" monster from your Deck and remove it from play. Special Summon the removed monster during your opponent's next Standby Phase in face-up Attack Position. Any monster Special Summoned with this card's effect cannot have its ATK increased.

(NOTE: This is probably not correct; it's just a guideline)

 

The picture is creepier than the first card. Stats seem a little unbalanced for its effect; perhaps a reduction?

 

Overall, I would give the second card about a 7.8/10. Not a bad idea, though. :D

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Okay' date=' the second card's effect isn't possible. "Scream - Murder's Advocate" activates its effect when sent to the [b']Graveyard[/b]. The last part of the effect cannot be applied since "Scream - Murder's Advocate" is in the Graveyard. Here is how I would word it:

 

When this card is destroyed by battle, select 1 "Scream" monster from your Deck and remove it from play. Special Summon the removed monster during your opponent's next Standby Phase in face-up Attack Position. Any monster Special Summoned with this card's effect cannot have its ATK increased.

(NOTE: This is probably not correct; it's just a guideline)

 

The picture is creepier than the first card. Stats seem a little unbalanced for its effect; perhaps a reduction?

 

Overall, I would give the second card about a 7.8/10. Not a bad idea, though. :D

 

Fixed. Unfortunally I cannot fix the card itself because I forgot to save it. :(

 

I fixed the text below the card, though. It should be enough :)

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the last card is clever. ;)

 

*here, have two back! cant attack me though. XD*

 

and the second card doesnt sound like it is worded right....

 

i dont know how to fix it though. ;)

 

and the first one, can you select face down traps? that would be sweet!

 

almost like getting rid of a worry you have by equipping it to the monster.

 

the set so far deserves an 8/10. ^_^

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nice card effects

pics are a bit bloody though

kids under 10 might have nightmires or might be scared to click on it

8/10

 

And I've said this in PM's..

 

Your Point? I could care less what children under the age of 10 think of my cards.. Like 'KOREAN2' up in the some of the first posts.

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