starly Posted July 21, 2008 Report Share Posted July 21, 2008 [spoiler=episode 1]episode 1 the start of the duels of destructionone day there was a boy called alex with is mates yugi, sophie, jaden, joshua, liam, tristan, joey, kiaba, mokuba and ashthey all went out side it was a bit strange because there was so many duels.Jaden:this is the biggest duelist place i've seen there has not been so many duelists around.joshua:maybe it's a world champion person:wanna duel joshua joshua:how do you know my name person:you were on tv.joshua was confused but they got on with the duel but there was something strange about theese duels because when the duels end the win goes down a destruction hole. joshua:the duels of destruction are beginning.person:by the way the names macus.joshua:so let's duel get your game on. joshua lp-4000marcus lp-4000 marcus:this is going to be a free duel not a destruction duel.allstair:hmmmmmmmm who ever wins is going against me in a destruction duel hehehe. alstair walked away and watched the duel.joshua:i will go first,i summon elemental hero sparkman in atk mode (atk:1600 def:1400)i will end with a face down person:hey help us theres a black hole in the ground and it taked my mum and my baby sister, both joshua and marcus said end duel. coming soon episode 2...... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
End Of The Abyss Posted July 21, 2008 Report Share Posted July 21, 2008 0/10 Terrible. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CamChan22 Posted July 22, 2008 Report Share Posted July 22, 2008 thats good needs improvement 7.3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
starly Posted July 22, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 22, 2008 episode 2 is coming up Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Umbra Posted July 22, 2008 Report Share Posted July 22, 2008 No. Spare us the pain. If you use original characters, make them behave as they did before. And I certainly doubt Kaiba would hang out in a gang that big just for the fun of it, considering he has a company to run and all. To make this easier for all of us: Go read a book. Then write like that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bakura Vessal Posted July 24, 2008 Report Share Posted July 24, 2008 i dont get it...... you said that a destruction duel is where you get sucked into a black hole but............1. you said that it wasnt a destruction duel but his mother and daughter got sucked into a black hole, 2. the duel wasnt finish and 3. why was the daughter and mother sucked into one anyway please explain Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Willieh Posted July 24, 2008 Report Share Posted July 24, 2008 0/10 Terrible. That comment is terrible. That wasn't even constructive at all. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted July 25, 2008 Report Share Posted July 25, 2008 Basic stuff, Capital letters. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Victory Posted July 27, 2008 Report Share Posted July 27, 2008 puke Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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