my first cards [bleach]

[123demetri]

how did i do?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

[Saturn of Elemia]

Nice images, but the cards themselves are not spectacular. There is one thing I noticed that drives me nuts:

 

How is the LIEUTENANT of Squad 10 (Rangiku) more powerful than the CAPTAIN (Hitsugaya)?

 

The stats are entirely unbalanced and overpowering. As for the card descriptions, the OCG is off a lot. I suggest taking a look at the OCG thread in the Tutorials. It will help you out a lot for future cards. Also, most people here do not think very highly of Vanilla (Normal) monsters. It would be wise to give your Monster Cards effects in the future. You also posted Yuroichi twice - both with different images. Also, you need to add a disclaimer about your images - either you claiming no credit for the image(s) or giving credit for the artist of the image(s) you use.

 

Sorry, but I'm gonna give these a 5.2/10 as is - mostly because the images were pretty good and that these are your first cards. I know that you can do better. Don't give up. You'll get better. :D

[123demetri]

Nice images' date=' but the cards themselves are not spectacular. There is one thing I noticed that drives me nuts:

 

[b']How is the LIEUTENANT of Squad 10 (Rangiku) more powerful than the CAPTAIN (Hitsugaya)?[/b]

 

The stats are entirely unbalanced and overpowering. As for the card descriptions, the OCG is off a lot. I suggest taking a look at the OCG thread in the Tutorials. It will help you out a lot for future cards. Also, most people here do not think very highly of Vanilla (Normal) monsters. It would be wise to give your Monster Cards effects in the future. You also posted Yuroichi twice - both with different images. Also, you need to add a disclaimer about your images - either you claiming no credit for the image(s) or giving credit for the artist of the image(s) you use.

 

Sorry, but I'm gonna give these a 5.2/10 as is - mostly because the images were pretty good and that these are your first cards. I know that you can do better. Don't give up. You'll get better. :D

 

toshiro has higher defense

[Saturn of Elemia]

That's beside the point. Rangiku could still defeat Hitsugaya even if he was in Defense Position. Rangiku's ATK needs to be reduced - a LOT.

[123demetri]

captains have 5000

LIEUTENANT have 400o

[DiNoSaUrS]

Sorry to say this but,

The cards are overpowered.

make some weaker cards so can atleast summon them.

[123demetri]

but they are captains and LIEUTENANT should need a tribute

[shadowrider985]

good looking cards <

[╬「Selatcia」╬]

Normal monsters=boring

Some of them seem kinda overpowered for their levels too.

6/10

[Βyakuya]

You need a lot of practice. There are WAY too much vanillas, and they could have desirable effects. And, even if they are vanillas, there is less effort are bad ocg descriptions too. Other than that, overpowered, unbalanced and fake types, and...........I am very sorry, but keep on trying though! Just be confident:D Check my signature for examples below.

0.5/10