Yankee Posted July 22, 2008 Report Share Posted July 22, 2008 Well, I got an idea from a pic that IcyBlue sent me on a set. I have been seeing alot of things that can be holy warriors and all, and yet, are dark, so, why not make cards of it? Credt for the parts of the effects that deal with cards in the hand being revealed goes to God Kaze (On the first card). [spoiler=Darkness Bishop - Maryann][spoiler=Effect]If your Life Points are 500 or less, you can decrease the ATK of a face-up monster you control to increase your Life Points by the same amount. When this card is attacked, you can return it to its owner’s hand. If this card is returned to your hand by its own effect, play with it revealed and apply the following effect:- Decrease your Life Points by 200 during your Standby Phase. If your Life Points are 2000 or less, decrease the ATK of all monsters your opponent controls by 300 and pay and additional 200 Life Points during your Standby Phase. If your Life Points are 500 or less, Special Summon this card to the field in Attack Position. [spoiler=Darkness Bishop - Leslie][spoiler=Effect]As long as this card remains face-up on your side of the field, all cards in your hand that have the effect of decreasing your Life Points while in your hand are instead treated as increasing your Life Points, and all cards with the effect of increasing your Life Points are instead treated as decreasing your Life Points. If your Life Points become 3000 or more than your opponent's, halve all damage your opponent recives. If your Life Points become 5000 or more than your opponent's, half the ATK of all monsters on your side of the field. If your Life Points become 6000 or more than your opponent's, all opponent's attacks are treated as direct attacks. If your Life Points become 6500 or more than your opponent's, all effects of increasing Life Points on your side of the field are instead treated as decreasing. If this card is destroyed by battle, decrease your Life Points by the amount of turns this card was on the field x200. [spoiler=Darkness Bishop - Rebecca][spoiler=Effect]During your Main Phase, if a card in your hand is revealed by it's own effect, you can put this card into your hand and Special Summon the revealed card in face-up Attack Position. If this card is in your hand by it's own effect, play with it revealed and apply the following effect: -As long as there is at least 1 card in your hand that is revealed (not counting this one), you can decrease your Life Points by any amount. Increase the ATK of 1 monster on your side of the field by the amount you decreased. The selected monster is destroyed during the End Phase. If an effect that discards cards from your hand is activated, Special Summon this card in face-up Attack Position. If this card is destroyed by battle, increase your Life Points by the amount of turns this card was on the field x 200. [spoiler=Darkness Bishop - Amanda][spoiler=Effect]When this card is drawn from the Deck, play with it revealed in your hand and apply the following effect:-When a monster you control is destroyed, you may decrease your Life Points by half the original ATK of the destroyed card to Special Summon this card from your hand in face-up Attack Position. If there is 2 or more cards with "Darkness Bishop" in their names on your side of the field, you may put them into your hand revealed (Besides this card). Decrease your Life Points by the amount of cards you put into your hand by this cards effect x300. [spoiler=Darkness Bishop - Jessica][spoiler=Effect]Increase the ATK of this card by 300 for every card with "Darkness Bishop" in it's name on the field (Excluding this card). As long as this card remains face-up on the field, during your opponent's Standby Phase, inflict damage to your opponent equal to half the ATK of this card. When this card attacks or is attacked, halve the ATK of this card. If this card is destroyed by battle, increase your Life Points by this cards ATK. During your Standby Phase, while this card is in your Graveyard, you can pay 1000 Life Points to shuffle this card into your Deck. [spoiler=Darkness Bishop - Rayla][spoiler=Effect]Once per turn, during your Standby Phase, you may discard 1 card in your hand to put 1 card you control into your hand revealed. Increase the ATK of this card by 400 for ever card in your hand that is revealed. For every card in your hand that is revealed, apply the apropriate effect:1: During battle between this card and an opponent's Defence Position monster with a lower DEF than this cards ATK, inflict the differance as battle damage to your opponent's Life Points.2: Once per turn, during your Standby Phase, you can decrease the ATK of this card by 400 to search your Deck for a card with "Darkness Bishop" in it's name, and put it in your hand. You cannot play the selected card this turn. 3 +: Decrease your Life Points by 300 during every 1 of your Standby Phases. If you cannot, as long as you control this face-up monster, all cards in your hand cannot be reveald to the opponent. Thank you very much for looking, Cheers,Yankeefan Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted July 22, 2008 Report Share Posted July 22, 2008 Lol I have got to say out of the Returning legends this has got to be my fav welcome back card ^_^ 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted July 22, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 22, 2008 Lol I have got to say out of the Returning legends this has got to be my fav welcome back card ^_^ 10/10 Thanks alot for the rate man ^_^And yay, i'm still a legend xDBTW, hopefully God Kaze doesn't see you say this is your fave...xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Atomix Posted July 22, 2008 Report Share Posted July 22, 2008 Awesome, you can repair your lifepoints, emagine doing it to something like Blue-Eyes lol (You better watch out, I'm soon going to beat you on posts, just another 100 till I beat Jerry ^_^) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted July 22, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 22, 2008 Thanks man.And, you will pass me, thing is, Jerry isn't posting anymore, and I hardly post, so, your not really passing anybody xD But, it's good to see another member almost at 5000. Cheers man ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Star Posted July 22, 2008 Report Share Posted July 22, 2008 I have to say, this card's quite good. The image goes with the name, and the effect, while parts aren't completely unique, is very well thought out. Impressive card. 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted July 22, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 22, 2008 Thank you very much [star] ^_^I'm glad you like this one more than my last. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Supreme Posted July 22, 2008 Report Share Posted July 22, 2008 Kind of like....a Life Machine. Great Card! 9.175 / 10 Keep up the good work! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted July 22, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 22, 2008 Thanks alot man, glad you like it ^_^(This is getting better reviews than my last card, yay, lol) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted July 22, 2008 Report Share Posted July 22, 2008 first offitsit'sas your it is the possession of that cardand, in the last part of the effect, its, an additional, not and additional OCG - 9/10Structure -10/10Balance - 10/10Name - 5/5 very nicely donethe picture is beautifuland i actually really see this effect in actual yugioh cardsthis is effect is more thought out then your levias Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted July 22, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 22, 2008 Well, thanks alot man ^_^Though, I wish I could just leave my levias behind ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted July 23, 2008 Report Share Posted July 23, 2008 I would use this card. Very nice.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted July 23, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 23, 2008 BUMP, and thanks man ^_^ I'll post the 2nd card today, I promice ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Parting Shot Posted July 23, 2008 Report Share Posted July 23, 2008 Hmm, very interesting card. Bloodrun pointed out all the major mistakes I saw, so kudos to him :P. All-around, a well-made card. overall - 13.34/13.69 ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Death Metal Posted July 23, 2008 Report Share Posted July 23, 2008 Impressive card, your cards are amongst the best i've seen. 9.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted July 23, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 23, 2008 Thanks you very much brow and metal!I'm glad you like it,and I have just added cards #2 and #3, I hope you all enjoy them! ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Parting Shot Posted July 23, 2008 Report Share Posted July 23, 2008 The 2 new cards are great as well, Yankee. The effects flow well, and the pics are pretty good. new overall - 13.43/13.69 ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted July 23, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 23, 2008 Thanks alot brow ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Void Old Posted July 23, 2008 Report Share Posted July 23, 2008 I tried to help out with OCG a little bit, I hope I helped. :) If your Life Points are 500 or lower, you can select 1 monster you control. Decrease the ATK of the selected monster by any amount. You gain Life Points by an amount equal to the amount of ATK you decreased from the selected monster. When this card is attacked, you can return it to the owner’s hand. If this card is returned to your hand by its own effect, play with it revealed and apply the following effect:- You lose 200 Life Points during each of your Standby Phases. If your Life Points are 2000 or lower, all monsters your opponent controls lose 300 ATK and you must pay an additional 200 Life Points during each of your Standby Phases. If your Life Points are 500 or lower, Special Summon this card to your side of the field in Attack Position. Whenever you would take damage by the effect of a card in your hand, you gain that amount of Life Points instead, and whenever you would gain Life Points by the effect of a card in your hand, you take damage equal to amount of Life Points instead. If your Life Points are higher than your opponent's and the difference is 3000 or more, halve all damage inflicted to your oponent. If your Life Points are higher than your opponent's and the difference is 5000 or more, halve the ATK of all monsters you control. If your Life Points are higher than your opponent's and the difference is 6000 or more, all of your opponent's attacks abecome direct attacks to your Life Points. If your Life Points are higher than your opponent's and the difference is 6500 or more, if either player would gain Life Points by the effect of a card you control, they take damage equal to that amount instead. If this card is destroyed by battle, you lose 200 Life Points for each turn that this card was on the field. During your Main Phase, if a Monster Card in your hand is revealed by it's own effect, you can Special Summon the revealed card to your side of the field in face-up Attack Position. If this card is in your hand, play with it revealed and activate the following effect:-As long as there is at least 1 card in your hand that is revealed (except this card), you can pay any amount of Life Points to select 1 monster you control. The selected monster gains ATK equal to the amount of Life Points you paid and is destroyed during the End Phase. If an effect that discards cards from your hand is activated, Special Summon this card in face-up Attack Position. If this card is destroyed by battle, you gain 200 Life Points for each turn that this card was on the field. Very nice ideas Yankeefan, much like Cure Burn. I looked at various cards to check your OCG when making the above versions, I checked cards such as Rainbow Life, Life Equalizer, etc. I'm not 100% sure, but I am pretty close to it, just tryin' to help that's all. ^_^ Good job. ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted July 23, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 23, 2008 I also had the grammar checked, such as the x200, the fact is that I use a combination of new and old ocg, lol Thanks alot for taking the time to do all that ^_^ + rep to you ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Void Old Posted July 23, 2008 Report Share Posted July 23, 2008 Thanks for the reputation point Yankeefan, if you need anymore help just PM me and I will do what I can. ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted July 23, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 23, 2008 Thanks for the reputation point Yankeefan' date=' if you need anymore help just PM me and I will do what I can. ^_^ [/quote'] Np man, i'll remember that ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Star Posted July 24, 2008 Report Share Posted July 24, 2008 Leslie is incredibly underpowered. Rebecca is overpowered. Nice pictures though. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted July 24, 2008 Report Share Posted July 24, 2008 wow!! *pauses* ...wow!! It has been so long since I have seen actually good cards here! Brilliant! I rate the set a 9.5/10. It would be an honor if you could view my Ally Monster thread, I believe you would like them. ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted July 24, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 24, 2008 1. Thanks [star], I agree that rebecca is overpowerd because I forgot to add somthing, and thanks for pointing out the problem with leslie to me on msn ^_^ 2. Thanks alot Kale ^_^Apparently, you are a very popular person, and yet, I don't remember seeing you... I would like to talk to you, lol ^_^ And yes, I will look at your cards ^_^ Cheers,Yankeefan Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Recommended Posts
Archived
This topic is now archived and is closed to further replies.