U23Drocks Posted July 23, 2008 Report Share Posted July 23, 2008 here is the first card i made it had to go through some editing to make it......reasonably powerful yet not outrageous first design was 12 stars atk and def 9000....so heres the newer version. also post some ideas for cards cause im stuck...... this is the revised version after major tweaking comment on the improvements. thank you. ive made a version before he became the guy abovethis one was made liek 5 mins ago and will go through major adjustments Ta-da! frostmourne! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luna Lovegood Posted July 23, 2008 Report Share Posted July 23, 2008 A little over powered, but only just. I personally don't like when people make up new types, so try a zombie but since your new, 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:|Fallen|:. Posted July 23, 2008 Report Share Posted July 23, 2008 i like the pic but make it a effect so 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted July 23, 2008 Report Share Posted July 23, 2008 Effect needed.And 4000 ATK is to much for a lvl 8 monster. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
U23Drocks Posted July 23, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 23, 2008 well its not horrid im still tweakign the design i have made it an effect but im working on a few things with it so rest assured these issues will be resolved and the card reposted Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DiNoSaUrS Posted July 24, 2008 Report Share Posted July 24, 2008 good startsi give it a 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phatt Mann Posted July 25, 2008 Report Share Posted July 25, 2008 ...a little powerful. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ender4449 Posted July 25, 2008 Report Share Posted July 25, 2008 pm me if you want me to fix the OCG (Original Card Grammar) problems for youfairly decent card and better grammar than most beginner cards that i have seen (including my own cards that i first made) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted July 25, 2008 Report Share Posted July 25, 2008 A liitle overpowered and OCG errors. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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