MasterMatt56 Posted July 23, 2008 Report Share Posted July 23, 2008 Chapter 1:Nothing. Nothing at all. Just empty space. Nothing. Then, there is a flash of light...and...something?....................................* He was falling. Falling down a seemingly endless pit. But it couldn't be endless. Everything must end somewhere, right? Right?............* Everything was a blur. He tried to sit up, but fell over again. So... dizzy. Someone shouting. Couldn't make out anything. Two objects coming towards him. What? The world starts spinning. Can't make out anything. Suddenly, a word flashed through his mind. Dreadroot. Then, nothing...... "Finally, you're awake!"He sat up, still groggy. "Wha-?" he said. "You're awake!" Exclaimed the person in front of him "Oh, you're awake!""Who're 'ou?" He said. The stranger gasped, and looked stratled."Me? You don't remember me, do you? I'm Josh, your brother!"Josh's brother sat up. "I not your broter. I not know who I 'm. I only know Dreadroot. Am I Dreadroot?"Josh stared at his brother in disbelief. "I'd better go get the mayor." he said. Josh ran off, leaving his confused brother to ask the wall who the "Mayo" is. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MasterMatt56 Posted July 23, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 23, 2008 Just remember, I'm not real good at this. But you can reply all you want. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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End Of The Abyss Posted July 25, 2008 Report Share Posted July 25, 2008 A short Fan Fic. But you have potential, Matt. Wanna be friends? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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