JJjustin101 Posted July 24, 2008 Report Share Posted July 24, 2008 [/img]img]http://img401.imageshack.us/img401/1884/119853tw9.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted July 24, 2008 Report Share Posted July 24, 2008 img]http://img401.imageshack.us/img401/1884/119853tw9.jpg[/img] you forgot part of the code. i fixed it. plus, this belongs in any other cards or pop culture, as it isnt realistic. 3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silencerleader Posted July 24, 2008 Report Share Posted July 24, 2008 Bad card is bad...Try reading tutorials and make better cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saturn of Elemia Posted July 24, 2008 Report Share Posted July 24, 2008 (-_-) 0/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
D.D Star-Storm Posted July 24, 2008 Report Share Posted July 24, 2008 0/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Bloo-D Posted July 24, 2008 Report Share Posted July 24, 2008 Not original/10. (took a page from Silencerleader's book ^_^) Ok. Now that card above me is overpowered. It also contains horrible butchery of the English language. 1/10 for trying. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Desu the Blue Nerd Posted July 24, 2008 Report Share Posted July 24, 2008 Overpowered. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silencerleader Posted July 24, 2008 Report Share Posted July 24, 2008 OCG errors spewing out like non-dry mucus from a runny nose.The pic could be better...like...way better. I suggest a better place for pics.*You forgot a period at the end of the effect.**Its Special Summon**Its Normal Summon**Cap the first word. When**Its Deck**Its "Obelisk the Tormentor**Its "Winged Dragon of Ra" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted July 24, 2008 Report Share Posted July 24, 2008 overpowered, and i think in broken english.... XD please try your best to write the words out, so we can understand them without thinking about it. we are all somewhat lazy around here. ^_^ also, pic is mega blurry. 0/10 for this one. -Kale Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloo-D Posted July 24, 2008 Report Share Posted July 24, 2008 OCG errors spewing out like non-dry mucus from a runny nose.The pic could be better...like...way better. I suggest a better place for pics.*You forgot a period at the end of the effect.**Its Special Summon**Its Normal Summon**Cap the first word. When**Its Deck**Its "Obelisk the Tormentor**Its "Winged Dragon of Ra" It's "it's", not "its". Contractions FTW. I find it ironic since you're trying to correct his grammar. ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silencerleader Posted July 24, 2008 Report Share Posted July 24, 2008 OCG errors spewing out like non-dry mucus from a runny nose.The pic could be better...like...way better. I suggest a better place for pics.*You forgot a period at the end of the effect.**Its Special Summon**Its Normal Summon**Cap the first word. When**Its Deck**Its "Obelisk the Tormentor**Its "Winged Dragon of Ra" It's "it's", not "its". Contractions FTW. I find it ironic since you're trying to correct his grammar. ^^[/quote I was trying out some broken English...all he/she has to focus on is...everything after the "Its". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saturn of Elemia Posted July 24, 2008 Report Share Posted July 24, 2008 I think I got cancer by reading this thread :( EDIT: Everyone is allowed to sig the above statement! :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted July 24, 2008 Report Share Posted July 24, 2008 I think I got cancer by reading this thread :( LOL! permission to lolsig? XD i dont think that this could have gotten any worse actually. try, in the future, to read the rules of the forum before you log onto one. then, try to make cards that are balanced and have a good effect. try not to include cards that arent real, or at least not able to be played, like the Egyptian Gods. ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silencerleader Posted July 24, 2008 Report Share Posted July 24, 2008 Dude...do us all a favor and rename the thread to something shorter...its making a mess in the forums. Thank you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted July 24, 2008 Report Share Posted July 24, 2008 Dude...do us all a favor and rename the thread to something shorter...its making a mess in the forums. Thank you. agreed. this title is messing up how the forum looks. please rename it, for YCMaker's sake. XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silencerleader Posted July 24, 2008 Report Share Posted July 24, 2008 Name it...my...first...card...Please do this by clicking and holding on the title of your thread and then renaming it...to rename it...you type...with the keys on the keyboard... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted July 24, 2008 Report Share Posted July 24, 2008 Wow, everybody is a lil harsh...Truth is, these are actually good for the first few cards you have made ^_^If you work on your grammar and official card grammar, you will be good.I do hope you get better and post more. Also, Obelisk does belong in any other cards... But as for these, for a first,6/10 Cheers,Yankeefan Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pyrotechnet Posted July 24, 2008 Report Share Posted July 24, 2008 I think I got cancer by reading this thread :( EDIT: Everyone is allowed to sig the above statement! :D At least your eyes didn't throw up! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saturn of Elemia Posted July 24, 2008 Report Share Posted July 24, 2008 They did..... :( Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CeDeFiA Posted July 24, 2008 Report Share Posted July 24, 2008 Stop being mean to him/her!Hes/Shes new give him/her a chance! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silencerleader Posted July 24, 2008 Report Share Posted July 24, 2008 They did..... :( *sigh* as Silencer would put it.This thread is getting out of control!!Try to fix the mistakes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pyrotechnet Posted July 24, 2008 Report Share Posted July 24, 2008 They did..... :( oh...I'm sorry...how are they now? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloo-D Posted July 24, 2008 Report Share Posted July 24, 2008 Here's a suggestion: Stop posting in this thread so it can be ignored all the way to the second page. That way, the first page will return to normal, until someone bumps this thread up again... But who in their right mind would do that? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted July 24, 2008 Report Share Posted July 24, 2008 Worst I've seen today.0/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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