SSBB Fan Posted July 24, 2008 Report Share Posted July 24, 2008 Here is a new card I just finished up. Feel free to comment and rate however you please:) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloo-D Posted July 24, 2008 Report Share Posted July 24, 2008 It's simple. The pic isn't bad. Grammar error: missing word. 9/10. Fix it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CeDeFiA Posted July 24, 2008 Report Share Posted July 24, 2008 O/K card.... 8/10Needs a picture that really fits the Name,Wings arent enough.8/10 on the effect also. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted July 24, 2008 Report Share Posted July 24, 2008 Pretty good & simple. Seen the pic a couple times before though. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SSBB Fan Posted July 24, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 24, 2008 I updated the card and I think the name suits it a little more. I also changed the effect and made it more complex. I think the OCG is a bit sketchy so if there is anything I need to improve on don't hesitate to tell me! Also, is this better or worse? Effect:A monster destroyed by this is card removed from play. Once per turn, pay 1000 Life Points to activate 1 of the following effects:-Select 1 Equip Spell Card on the field and equip it to this card.-Special Summon 1 level 4 or lower Warrior-Type monster from you or your opponent's Graveyard. The selected monster cannot be released in the same turn it was Special Summoned.-During battle between this attacking card and a Defense Position monster whose DEF is lower the the ATK of this card, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent's Life Points until the end of the Battle Phase. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
superbull Posted July 24, 2008 Report Share Posted July 24, 2008 I'd say u deserve a 8/10 for that card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SSBB Fan Posted July 24, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 24, 2008 I'm fine with an 8/10 lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
the bucket 90 Posted July 24, 2008 Report Share Posted July 24, 2008 nice card man btw one ocg mistakeu put, A monster destroyed by this is removed from playcorrection:A monster destroyed by this Card<----(ocg mistake)is removed from play.but all above that nice card keep going Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SSBB Fan Posted July 24, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 24, 2008 OOOHHHHHH So that's what Bloo-D meant bymissing word. Didn't Catch that!!! EDITED! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TR_Headshot Posted July 24, 2008 Report Share Posted July 24, 2008 Well, I'd use it! Good job! 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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