ColdDrinks Posted July 24, 2008 Report Share Posted July 24, 2008 Here is the first chapter.Steven:Ha,you'll never beat my blue-eyes!!!!!!Murdoc:......Steven: What,Speechless????Murdoc:......Steven: Blue-Eyes,Use Blue Fire!!!!!!Murdoc:heh heh...Murdoc:You walked into my trap...Steven:WHA??!Murdoc:Here you go,Crush Card!!!!!!Steven NOOO I LOST!!!!Murdoc:Oh heh heh not yet!Murdoc: I play Saggi,The Dark Clown!!!!Murdoc:ATTACK HIS LIFE POINTS!!!!!Steven:NOOOOOO,Y-Y-YOU CHEATED!!!!Murdoc:Sorry,Stevie,you lost and i get your blue eyes.Steven:GRRRR FINE TAKE IT!!!!!Murdoc:Hey,Tiffany you can have this card.Tiffany:But dont you need it???Murdoc:I dont like light type monsters.M:Hmmm,this is Kaiba Corp,Eh?T:Yeah,I think Kaibas gonna freak when he realizes his son lost his own prized card.M:Im out of here,later.T:Hey wait!At Murdocs house at night....zzzzzzz ZzzzzzzzMurdoc has a dream....huh wha???Hey where am i??The Card,The Dark Magician Girl starts talking to him.DMG:Hey,i remember you,you totally creamed my owner!M:Yeah you were in Stevens deck,i killed you.DMG:AHEM!!!DMG:Listen,the world's are going to war!Murdoc:Worlds??? War????DMG:Yes our world and your world are going to collide,please help us Murdoc!!!!M:What do you mean???DMG:I must go,and your dog is gonna lick your head.Murdoc wakes up.M:Man,I should cut down on the coffee.Tiffany yells Murdocs name from outside.T:YOU OVERSLEPT!!!!!!Murdoc:uh oh i have school today.K hold on!!!End of chapter 1.I didnt write this,my friend did. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gogeta™ Posted July 24, 2008 Report Share Posted July 24, 2008 Really short, not well orginized, take a look at other Fan Fics to get an idea on how to set everything up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ultimate Ryan Posted July 24, 2008 Report Share Posted July 24, 2008 Mage said it all, plus please make you sig smaller Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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