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My Bands 1st Song Ever!!!!


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Here is my bands first song called "Nightmare!"we are a rock band. please rate it 1 the worst and 5 the best:

 

I am surrounded by darkness, over powered by shadows i look in the window to see you. I know you are afraid. People are always on the rave. My eyes have seen this. You have seen through my eyes. And when I go to sleep I see you....

 

I see you in my dreams! I see you I my Nightmares! And when you come close to me, I always want to scream! I see you in my dreams! I see you in my Nightmares! When you come close to me, I always want to scream! And when I see you coming through that door i know the only one who can stop my Nightmares is me!

 

I see you on the floor lying there and crying. I see your face in know you are dying. I hate to see your crying, I hate to see you dying. Your only dying when I am lying. And I'll stop lying when you stop crying!

 

My eyes have seen this. You have seen through my eyes. And when I go to sleep I see you....

 

I see you in my dreams! I see you I my Nightmares! And when you come close to me, I always want to scream! I see you in my dreams! I see you in my Nightmares! When you come close to me, I always want to scream! And when I see you coming through that door. I know the only one who can stop my Nightmares is me!

 

You should not hate me because you see she means nothing to me. If I hung her from tree would you love me? If I did it to me would you kiss me?

 

 

My eyes have seen this. You have seen through my eyes. And when I go to sleep I see you....

 

I see you in my dreams! I see you I my Nightmares! And when you come close to me, I always want to scream! I see you in my dreams! I see you in my Nightmares! When you come close to me, I always want to scream! And when I see you coming through that door. I know the only one who can stop my Nightmares is me!

 

My eyes have seen this. You have seen through my eyes. And when I go to sleep I see you....

 

I wrote it for My Cassie!

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My band: Rising Moon (Possible Name Change)

 

First Song: Abandoned

 

Music coming soon!

 

Dude this isn't a thread about YOUR band.

 

Don't spam.

 

On topic: Did you cheat on your girlyfriend?

 

 

1. It isan't spam' date=' you are allowed to say if your in a band and what it is, that isn't spam(just sayin'^_^)

2.What has that got anyhting to be doing with topic.lol

 

On topic: Yeah, i like it, can't wait to hear the actual song!!^_^[/color']

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My band: Rising Moon (Possible Name Change)

 

First Song: Abandoned

 

Music coming soon!

 

Dude this isn't a thread about YOUR band.

 

Don't spam.

 

On topic: Did you cheat on your girlyfriend?

 

no, she thought i was a Bisexual.

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My band: Rising Moon (Possible Name Change)

 

First Song: Abandoned

 

Music coming soon!

 

Dude this isn't a thread about YOUR band.

 

Don't spam.

 

On topic: Did you cheat on your girlyfriend?

 

 

1. It isan't spam' date=' you are allowed to say if your in a band and what it is, that isn't spam(just sayin'^_^)

2.What has that got anyhting to be doing with topic.lol

 

On topic: Yeah, i like it, can't wait to hear the actual song!!^_^[/color']

 

1. Where does it say that?

 

2. The whole "she means nothing to me" part.

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My band: Rising Moon (Possible Name Change)

 

First Song: Abandoned

 

Music coming soon!

 

Dude this isn't a thread about YOUR band.

 

Don't spam.

 

On topic: Did you cheat on your girlyfriend?

 

 

1. It isan't spam' date=' you are allowed to say if your in a band and what it is, that isn't spam(just sayin'^_^)

2.What has that got anyhting to be doing with topic.lol

 

On topic: Yeah, i like it, can't wait to hear the actual song!!^_^[/color']

 

1. Where does it say that?

 

2. The whole "she means nothing to me" part.

 

I don't Remember that part.

I am working on another song called "DOOM"

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well, need to here the music first before i can rate it,

 

and i dont see how its to long

led zepplin has songs more than 23 mins, see thats a long song

 

this , this is longer than some songs today, but still not long.

 

on a side note:

My band

Fair trade

First song

Dead end

it was called dead end because thats what the band was called originally,

 

my new band

Edge of Paranoia

First song

....still working on getting a new bass player, i cant play 3 insturments at once yet.

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