~Infernal Sorcerer Alchemy Caster~ Enjoy and Comment! Amazing Card!

[Yogg-Saron]

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Effect/Lore: This card cannot be Special Summoned. Neither player takes Battle Damage from battles involving this attacked card. If this card is destroyed by a card effect, you can Special Summon this card during your next Standby Phase. Monster that battle with this card are returned to the owner's hand during the End Phase. If this card attacks your opponent directly, send the top card of your opponent's Deck to the Graveyard. By Releasing 1 monster you control, this card gains 2000 ATK, if you this effect, this card is destroyed during the End Phase.[/align]

[Guest Welche]

a bit underpowered. confusing a bit, but worth 7.5/10

[Atomix]

A little bit like Grand Mole.

[Yogg-Saron]

Underpowered? Confusing? All you have to do is read the bolded text. It is not confusing.

 

EDIT: Atomix: I know, but not as broken.

[Void Old]

Here's a fix to assimilate your wording with the wording of the most recent sets:

 

This card cannot be Special Summoned. Neither player takes Battle Damage from battles involving this attacking card. If this card is destroyed by a card effect, you can Special Summon this card during your next Standby Phase. Monster that battle with this card are returned to the owner's hand during the End Phase. If this card attacks your opponent directly, send the top card of your opponent's Deck to the Graveyard. By Releasing 1 monster you control, this card gains 2000 ATK, if you this effect, this card is destroyed during the End Phase.

 

Your Set ID is good, your Circulation is somewhat unrealistic. Your best bet would be to leave your Circulation blank unless you have a golden prismatic corner stamp.

 

The name is nice but you shouldn't really use dashes unless you're making an Infernal Sorcerer set. The picture could use a little more focus on the caster itself, Yu-Gi-Oh! cards normally have only the monster as the picture.

 

It seems monsters attacking it would be its weakness, it is still quite powerful and if a monster does attack they go straight to the owner's hand. Seems like a hybrid of a Nephths without S/T removal, a 1-way Grand Mole, and has a built-in Gift of the Martyr-ish effect. I like the way you balanced it out. Could have some strategies involving protecting it with Spells/Traps and using it to reak havoc. Good job! ^_^

[Yogg-Saron]

Wow! Thanks very much Void! If only members were as great as you! +repped!

[╬「Selatcia」╬]

Nice card. Well done.

9/10

[Jericho]

7/10

 

you put "if you this effect". it should be "if you use this effect".

[Chaos Master Ygo]

nice card especially the pic 8.8/10

[Professor Cobra]

Nice pic and effect. You can raise it's ATK to 600. (that's what I would do.) 8/10

[Yogg-Saron]

Thanks for the comments!