Fairy Knight King Posted July 26, 2008 Report Share Posted July 26, 2008 I was thinking I should make the Executors of the Atlantians (Sea-Serpents) Then after I'll make the Atlantians (Warriors). Here's an Executor of the Atlantians my First!! Plz tell me if it's any good before I make the set. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Atomix Posted July 26, 2008 Report Share Posted July 26, 2008 Needs a background and OCG Errors!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Void Old Posted July 26, 2008 Report Share Posted July 26, 2008 Needs a background and OCG Errors!!!!! Posting "OCG Errors!!!!!" without telling him what they are helps nothing but your post count, which you seem fixated on. Posting "what atomix said" is just total spam. You've earned a negative reputation point. Wording assimilation to recent sets: This card gains 300 ATK and DEF for each card in your opponent's Graveyard. Once per turn if "The Dark Lagoon" is face-up on the field, you can select 1 face-up monster on the field. Pay Life Points equal to half of the ATK of the selected monster to destroy it. I'd also lower the ATK boost to 200 for each card in your opponent's Graveyard, because its ATK can get extremely high if you keep it as it it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fairy Knight King Posted July 26, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 26, 2008 Thnx for the ideas ill continue with this Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragon God Posted July 26, 2008 Report Share Posted July 26, 2008 ATK,DEF,Graveyard,Life Points 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Dark Master Posted July 26, 2008 Report Share Posted July 26, 2008 Needs a background and OCG Errors!!!!! Posting "OCG Errors!!!!!" without telling him what they are helps nothing but your post count' date=' which you seem fixated on. Posting "what atomix said" is just total spam. You've earned a negative reputation point. Wording assimilation to recent sets: This card gains 300 ATK and DEF for each card in your opponent's Graveyard. Once per turn if "The Dark Lagoon" is face-up on the field, you can select 1 face-up monster on the field. Pay Life Points equal to half of the ATK of the selected monster to destroy it. I'd also lower the ATK boost to 200 for each card in your opponent's Graveyard, because its ATK can get extremely high if you keep it as it it.[/quote'] roflcopter xD? He said it needs a background which isn't total spam, so pointless neg basically... But i will not continue spam, and fix exactly what this guy said, and not to mention this card is overpowered... defiantly add a background... 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted July 26, 2008 Report Share Posted July 26, 2008 Sea Serpent doesn't need a hyphen in between. And yes the pic does need a background.Not too bad aside from that.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doom™ Posted July 26, 2008 Report Share Posted July 26, 2008 ATK not attackDEF not defenceGraveyard not GraveyardLife Points not life pointsSome grammar errors. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fairy Knight King Posted July 26, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 26, 2008 thnx again Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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