MILSS Posted July 26, 2008 Report Share Posted July 26, 2008 I got an idea for a card, so here it is. I don't own this pic.Plz Rate and Comment! Effect: This card cannot be Special Summoned. When this card is Summoned select 1 monster that your opponent controls and destroy it. Then destroy this card. Once per turn during your Main Phase, select and remove from play 1 monster in your opponent's Graveyard. Then inflict points to your opponent equal to the level of the selected monster x100. If your opponent has no monsters in his/her Graveyard remove this card from play. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BigSky Posted July 27, 2008 Report Share Posted July 27, 2008 i like it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragon God Posted July 27, 2008 Report Share Posted July 27, 2008 nice 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Apocolypse Posted July 27, 2008 Report Share Posted July 27, 2008 Maybe should say,(While this card remains in your Graveyard, once per turn). Intresting card, 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Atomix Posted July 27, 2008 Report Share Posted July 27, 2008 No errors from my point of view, well done ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yogg-Saron Posted July 27, 2008 Report Share Posted July 27, 2008 Very good job. Pic is fitting. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MILSS Posted July 27, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 27, 2008 Thanks for the comments! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Tiger Posted July 27, 2008 Report Share Posted July 27, 2008 No errors from my point of view' date=' well done ^_^[/quote'] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Void Old Posted July 27, 2008 Report Share Posted July 27, 2008 Your Official Card Grammar is good, but has a few errors such as his/her, which is outdated and remove ____ from play is now remove from play ____. Also, you'll need to mention that the effect works in the Graveyard, since it can't work on the field if it destroys itself when you summon it. Here's a fix. ^_^ This card cannot be Special Summoned. When this card is Summoned, destroy 1 monster your opponent controls and this card. Once per turn during your Main Phase while this card is in your Graveyard, remove from play 1 monster in your opponent's Graveyard and inflict damage to your opponent equal to the Level of the monster x 100. If your opponent has no monsters in their Graveyard remove from play this card from your Graveyard. I believe that to be the correct wording. Your Set ID isn't realistic, it should have 3 or 4 letters as the first part of it, preferably four, and your second part needs "EN" at the start of it. Make those changes and it should be perfect. ^_^ I love the picture. ^_^ It would be overpowered if you didn't put "This card cannot be Special Summoned", but since you did it's well balanced. Great card! ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted July 27, 2008 Report Share Posted July 27, 2008 Not bad, but it would be a bit better with some ATK and DEF though.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MILSS Posted July 28, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 28, 2008 I would give it ATK and DEF but it only stays on the field for a second before it gets destroyed. And you can't Special Summon it. It does look strong though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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