Einhander Posted July 27, 2008 Report Share Posted July 27, 2008 they are from DotA ( defense of the ancients ) orginally from warcraft 3 but i think they are cool .. anyway please rate them ^_^ Pugna The Oblivion - he has a Nether Ward which hurts anybody if they cast a spell. Sven Rouge Knight - he is powerful enough to give a Toughness Aura. Furion the Prophet - he is kinda weak ( at the game too ) but he can summon treants from trees. Nevermore Shadow Fiend - well he used to collect souls and turn them to power - count your deck by soul Azgalor Pit lord - he is brutal he cripples his enemies by pit of malice ^^ Demnok The Warlock - well not so much about him he can summon a powerful flamed golem called Infernal Infernal Flame Golem - its him :D Noortrom the Silencer - its updated.Well nortrom suck every spell nearby So he is bad trouble for spellcasters Kel thuzad Lich - well he was killing its own troops for mana ^^ so i made for spell card well make a comment or criticise me im open to all Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Welche Posted July 27, 2008 Report Share Posted July 27, 2008 Set ID and circulations are not right, bad pics, but suprisingly good OCFG (Official Card Grammar)Second card could use more ATK but there good for n00b Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Einhander Posted July 27, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 27, 2008 set id & circ. / i will correct thembad pic ?! / man i photoshop them a bit anyway you are bit rightgrammar / im bit cautious man xDsven has nice attack for 6 level card also has a fine boost same as chorus of sanctuarygood for noob / long way to be pro then :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucas Maximus Posted July 27, 2008 Report Share Posted July 27, 2008 Not bad. Images could be better though. Your OCG is little off too. Otherwise, good job. ;) I'll give these a 6.5/10. ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted July 27, 2008 Report Share Posted July 27, 2008 Effect's are plain-ishNot bad pics.Good for a new member. 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Einhander Posted July 27, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 27, 2008 to lucas im with ya about images but OCG is perfect i believe anyway thanks for comment ^^ to demented i know you man u rated my megaman cards too :D sigh* you found their effects simple too ... i appreciate your comment thanks ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Roid Lover Posted July 27, 2008 Report Share Posted July 27, 2008 Hi im new will you be my friend? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Welche Posted July 27, 2008 Report Share Posted July 27, 2008 I meant the third one, I didn't notice sven til later Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Einhander Posted July 27, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 27, 2008 to welche well furions effect is tough its just like a bit dandylion so i dramaticaly decresed its attack. to roid lover ugh well why not if you are spend much time while making cards we can be friends Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Roid Lover Posted July 27, 2008 Report Share Posted July 27, 2008 To Einhander Thanks your my first friend I made online. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Black Rose Phoenix® Posted July 27, 2008 Report Share Posted July 27, 2008 Effect's are plain-ishNot bad pics.Good for a new member. 8.5/10 I'd say the same' date=' not bad!!^_^[/color'] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Einhander Posted July 27, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 27, 2008 well for demented i made the nevermore !!! its special effect is the best i have ever made ! i hope no one thougth this effect before - -' Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Atomix Posted July 27, 2008 Report Share Posted July 27, 2008 Effect's are plain-ishNot bad pics.Good for a new member. 8.5/10 I'd say the same' date=' not bad!!^_^[/color'] Yeah me too ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Einhander Posted July 28, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 28, 2008 atomix thank you for comment i think i will keep up with them ^^ update - Azgalor Added Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Void Old Posted July 28, 2008 Report Share Posted July 28, 2008 Here are some wording fixes. ^_^ Pugna: Inflict 500 damage to your opponent each time they activate a Spell Card. Sven: All monsters on the field gain 400 DEF. Also, I think by rouge you meant rogue. Rogues are assassin-ish people, rouge is the french word for red. It would also be better with a background on its picture. Furion: When this card is Summoned, Special Summon 2 "Treant Tokens" (Plant-Type/EARTH/Level 2/ATK 600/DEF 600) in Attack Position. These Tokens cannot be Tributed for a Tribute Summon during the turn they are Special Summoned. Also, I'm not liking that blur effect on the picture. Nevermore: This card gains 100 ATK for each card drawn from your Deck in the current Duel. Again, don't use blur effects on the cards. I'd recommend against using circulation as you need a golden prismatic corner stamp for all 1st Edition and Limited Edition cards, which the card maker does not provide. All other circulations are unrealistic. Set IDs should have 4 letters before the dash, and EN followed by 3 digits after the dash. Good cards. ^_^ I hope this post helped you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TR_Headshot Posted July 28, 2008 Report Share Posted July 28, 2008 Awesome, fair cards! Not bad for a beginner 8/10! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Einhander Posted July 28, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 28, 2008 to void furions explanation is perfect ^^ ( thank you dandylion xD )sven should give boost to its own troops eh ?about pugna ugh well both of them suitable i suppose :Sfor nevermore : i will update thanx for advice ^^ but ... I TOT THE BLUR EFFECTS WERE COOL T_T ok then i wont do it :) i just checked some original cards there are nothing written to circulation so im gonna do the same but cant get the ID can u explain better or give an example ?? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TR_Headshot Posted July 28, 2008 Report Share Posted July 28, 2008 Set ID is EN### meaning the order it is in a set Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Einhander Posted July 28, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 28, 2008 Set ID is EN### meaning the order it is in a set Thanks now i understood ^^ ps tesekkür xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Void Old Posted July 28, 2008 Report Share Posted July 28, 2008 Sure, Set IDs should have 4 letters before the dash, and EN followed by 3 digits after the dash. Like this: LOTD-EN001 LOTD are the four letters before the dash, after the dash are EN and the 3 digits 0, 0, and 1. ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TR_Headshot Posted July 28, 2008 Report Share Posted July 28, 2008 ? tesekkur? russion? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Einhander Posted July 28, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 28, 2008 i thought you were turkish ( the TR tag in your name ) anyway nvm thanks for posts and comments ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TR_Headshot Posted July 28, 2008 Report Share Posted July 28, 2008 LOL, it stands for Team Reaper my old Halo 3 clan but thanks. I need to sig that lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Einhander Posted July 28, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 28, 2008 now i've updated with a warlock and fresh Infernal Golem ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TR_Headshot Posted July 28, 2008 Report Share Posted July 28, 2008 Infernal should say "in" Defense Position but not bad otherwise. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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