Huntar! Posted July 29, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 29, 2008 Thanks everyone... To Spinx, you get a neg rep. Thanks everyone.. And to all of you people who say this thing is OP, YOU try making Ra playable, while still keeping to the Anime. -.- Then, we'll compare? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bluephoenix Posted July 29, 2008 Report Share Posted July 29, 2008 Amazing,simply Amazing,in my short time here I've seen alot of "God" cards,and I have to say,it's a relief to finally see a good one.I bow to you.10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Supreme Gamesmaster Posted July 29, 2008 Report Share Posted July 29, 2008 If I've said it once, I've said it a million times. The Gods are playable, efforts to tone them down are always underpowered. This is a pretty good effort, though; it's almost balanced. It'd stand a chance if there were any good Pyro-Types to feed it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntar! Posted July 29, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 29, 2008 Thats why I picked Pyro instead of any old random tributes, and I made it 'token-incompatable'. Thanks Gamesmaster Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragon God Posted July 29, 2008 Report Share Posted July 29, 2008 nice 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yogg-Saron Posted July 29, 2008 Report Share Posted July 29, 2008 Geez, I wish I could get 2 pages of comments. But no one pays attention to other threads. Good card.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntar! Posted July 29, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 29, 2008 lol.. thanks guys Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Void Old Posted July 30, 2008 Report Share Posted July 30, 2008 Here's a wording fix. ^_^ This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by Releasing 2 face-up Pyro-Type monsters you control. When this card is Summoned, you can pay up to half of your Life Points and destroy all monsters you control (excluding this card). If you activate this effect, this card gains ATK equal to half of the Life Points you paid. Once per turn, you can place 1 Ra Counter on this card. If you activate this effect, this card cannot attack this turn. You can remove any number of Ra Counters from this card to destroy 1 face-up monster your opponent controls an ATK equal to or less than the number of Ra Counters removed x 2000 and inflict 900 damage to your opponent. This card is unaffected by the effects of your opponent's Spell Cards. As long as this card remains face-up on the field, you cannot Summon monsters. Also, this card seems really underpowered. It destroys all of your cards and makes it so that you can't summon. With 3999 ATK at most, it's not going to be worth it. And with the specific Type Release Summoning condition thrown on to that, it's just not good enough for people to use. If someone uses Phoenix Wing Wind Blast, tons of your cards will have gone to waste. The picture is pretty good, but the contour of the dragon has white spots, you might want to fix that. Don't use circulation. Limited Edition cards require golden prismatic corner stamps, here's one if you want to try it out: [img=http://i35.tinypic.com/e13qzr.jpg] All circulations except Limited Edition when using a golden prismatic corner stamp are unrealistic. 1st Edition doesn't work because the card maker black capitalizes circulations, so 1st Edition becomes 1ST EDITION, which it isn't supposed to be. The first parts of Set IDs are always 4 letters nowadays. Proof of this: The first Duelist Packs used DP1 and DP2 as Set IDs, the latest Duelist Packs use DP06 and DP07. Also, just take a look at all of the latest sets and you'll see the trend. So if I were you I'd make the first part of your Set ID RA02 or something, since it's a second Ra. Ok, now just fix up the above and it'll be great. ^_^ I hope that helps, if you have any further questions PM me. I look forward to seeing more from you. ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HellKaiserofDarkness Posted July 30, 2008 Report Share Posted July 30, 2008 0/10, no originality.....jk! 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tonisanoob Posted July 30, 2008 Report Share Posted July 30, 2008 hmmmm it dosnt gain much attack half life point then half of that so about 2000 max but evn so the last effect is killer nice work ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
End Of The Abyss Posted July 30, 2008 Report Share Posted July 30, 2008 OMFG I'm so proud i'm your newby. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntar! Posted July 30, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 30, 2008 xD Swift.. wow.. thanks If I made this thing anymore powerful, or cut down the cost, it would become Overpowered and you people would complain about that too. -.-" Void, I dont care about the stamp... my goal in life is not to make these perfect, its to get my ideas across.. Thanks guys. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
End Of The Abyss Posted July 30, 2008 Report Share Posted July 30, 2008 BTW, Ruby told me about the newby thing. Thnx, man! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Void Old Posted July 30, 2008 Report Share Posted July 30, 2008 xD Swift.. wow.. thanks If I made this thing anymore powerful' date=' or cut down the cost, it would become Overpowered and you people would complain about that too. -.-" Void, I dont care about the stamp... my goal in life is not to make these perfect, its to get my ideas across.. Thanks guys.[/quote'] Sure, and I respect that, but if it's perfect, you can get your idea across better. XD The stamp wasn't the only thing I posted y'know. ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntar! Posted July 30, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 30, 2008 I am aware of that Void. Just the point that how this card does not match the exact standards of the mass produced TCG does not interest me.. how would you make this better and balanced? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Void Old Posted July 30, 2008 Report Share Posted July 30, 2008 Making the ATK equal to the amount of Life Points you paid would be better than half the Life Points you paid, otherwise it just has too many drawbacks for someone to want to use it. I'd also make the Summoning Condition 3 monsters instead of 2 Pyro-Type monsters to make it splashable. It would see more play if you made those changes, but would still be balanced. ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntar! Posted July 30, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 30, 2008 I have a feeling that some people would say that'd be Overpowered. Even things that are balanced are Underpowered or overpowered.. I'll see what I can do.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bringer Of The Apocalypse Posted July 30, 2008 Report Share Posted July 30, 2008 10/10, done. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntar! Posted July 30, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 30, 2008 Thanks. :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TGTwtfDXD Posted July 30, 2008 Report Share Posted July 30, 2008 :o 10/10 XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntar! Posted July 30, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 30, 2008 thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntar! Posted August 1, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 1, 2008 first official bump. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntar! Posted August 2, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 2, 2008 second and last official bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Digital.Simplicity. Posted August 2, 2008 Report Share Posted August 2, 2008 9/10 awesome card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mutant Monster RAEG-HAPYP Posted August 2, 2008 Report Share Posted August 2, 2008 Nice edit of Ra. yugi would be pleased *Calls UDE again and ask them to hire you* they say yes XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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