zlane Posted July 29, 2008 Report Share Posted July 29, 2008 [spoiler=Effect]If this card is destroyed as a result of battle you can remove from play 3 Monster cards from your Graveyard to Advance Summon this card in face-up attack position. If this card attacks a face-up DARK monster you can remove from play 1 other monster on your side of the field to immediatly destroy the attacked monster. Please tell me where i can improve. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Atomix Posted July 29, 2008 Report Share Posted July 29, 2008 If this card is destroyed as a result of battle you can remove from play 3 Monster cards from your Graveyard to Advance Summon this card in face-up attack position. If this card attacks a face-up DARK monster you can remove from play 1 other monster on your side of the field to immediatly destroy the attacked monster. Partly Fixed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Master Ygo Posted July 29, 2008 Report Share Posted July 29, 2008 OCG Fix: look at the post above menot a bad pic but try to add a BG Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted July 29, 2008 Report Share Posted July 29, 2008 Nice idea. I like the pic.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SeiyamaruSisco Posted July 29, 2008 Report Share Posted July 29, 2008 awesome 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zlane Posted July 29, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 29, 2008 I made the fixes, is there anything else wrong with it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted July 29, 2008 Report Share Posted July 29, 2008 Good pic, grammar problems and good effect. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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