school988 Posted July 30, 2008 Report Share Posted July 30, 2008 [spoiler=stroyline]three year ago after jaden lefted the duel Academy and the four killer dualist attacked and everyone disappered. everyday people kept going to duel Academy to try to find the dualist but there was never found. Now three years later in a small town called Jaden town a duellist called Nathan with is Prototype deck that has cards witch our not out yet and plus not be used but unware to Nathan is dad stole the deck from Aera 52, yu-gi-oh research centre . Now he heading to the darkness Dual Academy down south and 120 miles away from the closed down Dual Academy. [spoiler=characters so far]NathanDepthLeeTest MaryCopycatJohnLilly [spoiler=Episode 1- a new era]Nathan:“Dam I better get running has I am late for the entry exam” * Has Nathan ran he look up and saw the three god cards flying over and he ran tough you-gi-oh town. *At the darkness duel Academy* Depth: “Yes, I made it to the entry exams and so who will I be fighting.” Test: “I am your test teacher that you will be duel so follow me.” Lee: “how about me, who do I fight” Test: “you fight my brother so lets go.” Crowd: “let see how good there are.” Test/Depth: “Lets duel.” Test: 4,000Depth: 4,000 Test: “Depth, your first.” Depth: “Ok I draw and set two cards face down, your turn.” Test: Ha that a bad move but anyway I draw and I summon Element Saurus (1500/1200) in attack position.” Depth: “I activate my face down card trap hole, so now your monster is gone.” Test: “I end my turn” Depth: “I draw and activate my face down card zombie summon, now I Pay 1000 life points to summon Ryu Kokki (2400/2000) in attack position.” Test: 4000Depth: 3000 Depth: “now I attack you directly Crowd: “that was a very good move.” Test: “Noooo” Test: 1600Depth: 3000 Depth: “I Finish by set a card face down and end my turn.” Test: “I draw and I activate a spell card called Foolish Burial, now form my deck I pick one card and send it to the graveyard. The card I choose is Summoned Skull. I skip my battle phase and set two cards face down your turn.” Depth: “I draw and I summon Zombie Master (1800/0) in attack position and now Zombie master attacking directly.” Test: “Wait I activate my face down mirror force and all your face up monsters are Destroy, then I activate my other face down card call of the haunted to bring back summon skull.” Depth: “I end my turn“. Test: I draw and activate the spell card Mystical Space typhoon on your face down card then I use monster reborn to bring back Ryu Kokki (2400/2000) in attack position, then I end my turn. Crowd: “I don’t think he going to pass.” Test: “It better a good draw.” Depth: “I draw and place one card face down and end my turn.” Test: “I draw and now, what do you do when there is two face up monsters Staring you down.” Depth: “easy, I activate my face down card ring of Destruction and it Destroy 1 face-up monster and inflict damage to both players equal to its ATK.. I use it on Ryu Kokki (2400/2000) and now we both take 2400 point of damage. “ Test: 0Depth: 600 Test: “That was a good move.” Crowd: “cheering.” Lee: “That was a good duel” Depth: “thanks and what happen in your duel” Lee: “I lost my 1000 life points.” Depth: “Come lets sit down and watch the final matches of the entry exam.” Lee: “Ok, lets go.” [spoiler=Episode 2- a new eraI]Finally after about an hour Nathan was near the darkness duel Academy. A voice though a speak said “ you got five minutes left before it close. So Nathan jump over the fence and heading towards the paper were you put your name down. Nathan: “ I like to put my name down please.” Paper girl: sorry, the sign paper is closed.” Nathan: “ wait you said it was five minutes.” Paper girl: sorry, I misread it. Paper boy: Hey, put his name down and let him have the change. Paper girl: “Ok, I will.” Nathan: “ thanks.” Paper boy: “ no worries now get in and you may just make the final duel.” Nathan: “Ok.” * Has Nathan Ran inside the duelling filed , the final duel was just finish and has he look around, lee came up to him. Lee: “ your late.” Nathan: “ I know what going to happen.” * over near the test teachers seat John said “ Man, I am not going to let late comes in, well better tell him to leave.” *later on.* John pick up the phone and said “ Hello.” Head master: Now john we are not going to after what happen last year our we.” John: “ No, sir we are not.” *hang up.* John walk across towards Nathan and said “ Ok, come on follow me to the duelling filed and let get it on.” * on the duel field Nathan said “ Sweet.” John: “come on lets started so I can remove you form this Academy.” Nathan: “ Fine I am ready.” Depth: “Hope he wins.” Lee: “ why” Depth: “ because people are say that he is using is deck not a test deck.” Nathan/John: “duel” John: 4000Nathan: 4000 John : “ you will not pass and now lets bring, I draw and first I summon Witch of the Black Forest in attack position and set two cards face down and end my turn.” Nathan: “ I draw and summon dark cat (200 /0) in attack position.” John: “ Ha, only 200 attack point this is going to easier then I thought.” Nathan: “ I know and I end my turn.” John: “ I draw and now I activate the spell card Snatch Steal and if you don’t I can take control of one of your monster and each of my turn you gain 1000 Lift point, so I take control of your dark cat.” Mary thinking wait I never hear of this card o well and now I suffice both to summon The Creator and my it effect I bring back Witch of the Black Forest from the grave yard (1100 /1200) .” Nathan: “Now you activate dark card effect by be sent from the filed to the graveyard I can summon Baby god in attack(200 /0) .” John: “Ha again only has 200 points then I go t my second phase and I activate the spell card Lighting Vortex and my discard Mother Grizzley form my hand I can Kill all monsters. Then I and activate another spell card monster reborn to bring back Mother Grizzley, end my turn.” Nathan: “I draw and since my baby god was sent form the field to the graveyard it effects activate which means you skip your battle phase on your next turn. End my turn.” John: I draw and end my turn but you only got one turn left.” Nathan: “I draw.” * thinks o yes the god calling card just what I need.* Nathan: “ I set one card face down and I end my turn.” John: “I draw and, Ha, it over Now attack all my monster attack and wipe him out.” Nathan said “ Not so fast I activate my trap card god calling and it first effect has long Has this card remains face up on the filed, all my monster I not effect my spell, traps or effect monsters and the second effect, I pay 2000 life points and discard all my hand to Summon the three god cards The Winged Dragon of Ra(0/0) , Slifer the Sky (0/0) Dragon and the last but not least Obelisk the Tormentor in attack position and the last effect they each gain 3000 attack points so the attack now are (3000/0) , (3000/0) and (7000/4000) now I end my turn.” John: “I draw and set one card face down. Now I end my turn.” Nathan: “ I draw and activate the spell card pot of greed, which allows to draw 2 cards. Then I activate two spell which are brain control and I pay 1600 life points so I can take control tow of your monsters.” John: 4000Nathan: 2400 Nathan; “ Now I choose to take control of your Mother Grizzley and The Creator but now I activate Obelisk the Tormentor Fist of fury effect now by Sacrifice two monsters I can destroy all of your monsters and inflict 4000 points of battle damage to your life points. So I Sacrifice Mother Grizzley and The Creator , now Obelisk the Tormentor use Fist of fury, that game.” John: 0Nathan: 2400 Has everyone was cheering and wowed, A gold white girl called Mary said “ Ha, that was just luck and come on girls lets go.” Just before it came a day, the head master said “ Ok, now here is list that will tall you what dorm you in so come look. Has the other duelist came, lee, Nathan and depth look at the list and it said Dark red dorm: Nathan JohnLee JonesGokuTrucks Dark RA yellow dorm: Depth yuckJohn leeBlade Leanne Dark gold dorm: Dark light gold girls dorm: If your name is not on their then please report to the head master office and he will sort you out. [spoiler=Episode 3- Duel for rares]*the next day after Nathan and the others got into the Academy, Lee ran into Nathans room and said “ Hey, wake up we are late for class.” Nathan: “ what we are Dam lets go.” Lee: “ Ok” * has Nathan got outside and Lee ran head of him a women walk over to him ?: Hey, lets duel.” Nathan: “ I am late for class so maybe later” ?: No now lets get it on.” Nathan: “ Ok.” ?/Nathan: “Duel” ?:4000Nathan: 4000 ?: “I draw and I summon Armed dragon level 3 (1200 / 900) in attack position and set two card face down. Then I end my turn:” Nathan: I draw and summon Dragon slayer (2500/3000) in attack position and set two card face …… ?: “Hey, wait you need to tribute monsters for that card.” Nathan: “ by it effect: if I have no monster on my side of the field then I can summon this card without a tribute o and I set two card face your turn.” ?: I draw and I activate Armed dragon level 3 special effect, at by standby phase I can sent this card to graveyard to summon Armed dragon level 5 from my hand. So I summon Armed dragon level 5 (2400 / 1700) and now I activate Armed dragon level 5 special effect and by sending on card form my hand to the graveyard I can destroy I face-up monster on your side of the field so I send Nobleman of Crossout form my hand to graveyard to destroy Dragon slayer.” Then I attack you directly.” ?:4000Nathan: 1600 Nathan: wait by destroying my Dragon slayer you activate my face down card the fury of the gods and he our it works. You see By sending two cards form my hand to the graveyard, I can summon 3 god tokens.” ?: wait, I activate my face down card trap jammer and since it still my battle phase I can Negate the activation of a Trap Card and destroy it. Your fury of gods is destroyed then I end my turn.” Nathan: “ you are quite good.” ?: your not bad yourself Nathan: I draw and I ………………………………...... ?: sorry see you.” * Depth an over to* Depth: “hey, I don’t know why she ran of like that but that was a sweet duel.” Nathan: “ Thanks so why have you come all the way down here.”Depth: “come on you have to get to class quick or you be ex- spell.” Nathan: Ok, lets go.” * Nathan and depth ran towards darkness duel Academy but on a boat the a women said “ I coming home boss I got information to share with you.” After a while Nathan and Depth got to class. John: “Why are you Nathan” Nathan: “I was in a duel.” John: “ Ok, well you may all go now but Nathan Stay behind and you have to write 5000 lines of why you were late.” * talking and running.* Nathan: “Dam, this is going to take for ever.” Outside of the classroom, Lee ran up to Depth and said “ Hey lets duel.” Depth: “ sorry not now busy.” Then Mary walk up to Lee.” Mary: Hey, tell Nathan to meet in the duel field tonight o and say it for rare cards.” Lee: “ Why did you not mail him.” Mary: “ because I want to tell you.” * push and girls laughing* Depth: “Hey, you alright.” *later on at night* *Nathan walked towards the duel field to have a duel, Lee ran behind him and has then both ran towards the duel field. The sky turn black and it started raining. Finally after a way there got to the duel field and walk inside.”* Depth: “Hey, Mary you know you cannot duel here outside duelling hours.” Mary: “I know but Nathan you going to run away.” Nathan: “ no, so let get it on o and you better have a rare card ready.” Mary: “ you to and also lets see if you beating John was a flute.” Mary/Nathan: “ Duel.” Mary: 4000Nathan: 4000 Mary: “My draw and now I activate call of the Samurai, which means that my discarding one card from my hand, six Samurai- Irou (1700/1200) is summon to your side of field in face up attack. Now since you have a monster on your side of field and I have no monster I special summon cyber dragon (2100/1600) In face up attack. Then I activate a spell Reinforcement of the Army which allows me to add a 1 level four or lower warrior type monster form my deck to my hand and The card I choose is The six Samurai- Zanji and now I summon The six Samurai- Zanji (1800/1300) in face up attack, now I end my turn.” Nathan: I draw and set a monster face down and end my turn.” Mary I Draw and I activate the spell card Reinforcement of the Army. The card I will add to hand is the six Samurai- Yaichi and now I summon six Samurai- Yaichi (1300/800) in face attack position, also I set tow cards face down your turn.” Nathan: “I draw and I set two cards face down your turn.” Mary: I draw and since I control a Six samurai warrior I can special summon Grandmaster of the six Samurai (2100/ 800) in face up attack position and I will also summon The Six Samurai - Kamon (1500/1000) face up attack. Now I activate The Six Samurai - Kamon effect since I control a six Samurai monster I destroy the first one of your spell or trap cards. * good a got rid of the god calling card.*, now My grandmaster of the six Samurai attack his face down monster.” Nathan: “ by destroying my Dragon slayer you just activate my face down card fury of the gods and he our it works. You see By sending two cards form my hand to the graveyard, I can summon 3 god tokens.” (0/4000), (0/4000), 0/4000) in face up defence position.” Mary: “I end my turn.” Mary: 4000Nathan: 4000 Nathan: “ I draw and now I sacrifice the three god tokens to summon Slifer the Sky Dragon (X000/X000).” Mary: “ It got no attack points.” Nathan: “ that right and since I have 6 cards in my hand is attack and defend points are now six thousand (6000/6000). Now Slifer the Sky Dragon attack her cyber dragon.” Mary: 100Nathan: 4000 Mary: “ Dam, you pay for that you wreaking.” Nathan: “I end my turn.” Mary: “I draw and I the spell card Lighting Vortex and my discarding one card form hand I will destroy your Slifer the Sky Dragon . Your turn.” Nathan: I draw and …………. Lilly: “the guards are coming , quick Depth, Nathan and Lee come with out the back way.” Mary: your very luck wreaking, but next time I won’t let anything get in the way.” * Nathan, Depth, Lilly and lee ran outside the back door and while the got outside the guards came in.* Guard one: “ There is no one here lets go.” Guard two: Ok.” Lilly: “ I am sorry if Mary gave you a hard time but you would of lose.” Nathan: “ No, she would off.” Lilly: “ How would you win.” Nathan: “ the card I drew was Call of the dead.” Lilly: “ how would it go.” Nathan: “ I know, I activate the spell call of the dead witch means I can bring back Slifer the Sky Dragon and it gains 7000 attack points since I got seven cards. Now attack Slifer the Sky Dragon .” Mary: “ Nooooooo.” Lee: “come on lets go.” Nathan: “ lets go back to dorm see you Depth and Lilly.” “So Nathan and lee walked back to their dorm.” Lilly/depth: “ this is going to be good with them around.” Nathan: “ Of course we can have tea when we get back to our dorm.”” [spoiler=Episode 4-Making the grade] *The next week, has Nathan, lee and depth got to class there saw The dark red dorm head master Crow. There was something on the wall that there looked at. RareCardsBeingShippedInToday. Nathan: “ cool rare cards.” Lilly: “I know can’t believe it.” Mary: “I can and I will ask if I can you duel you Nathan so be careful.” Lee: “Cool’s o what we doing.” Crow: “Now has you know, rare cards I coming in and the reason I here to teach is because today is the field test.” Depth: “what that.” Crow: “It were people get to advance to the next dorm. So class lets get on with the teach now who knows what a quick spell card do.” Nathan: zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz Crow: “wake up Nathan and since you want to sleep in my class what does a qick spell card do.” Nathan: “ not sure.” Mary: “ I means that you can play it straight away even if it not your turn.” Crow: “ well done Mary and now you may go to the card shop has the rare cards have already arrive.” Class: “ lets go.” Depth: “ Nathan and Lee come on there is good cards that you may like.” * So has Nathan, lee and Depth got to the card shop the shop person said “ Sorry we ran out.”Lee: Hey, who got all the rare cards Nathan: “ not sure but come on lets get back to our dorm.” Lee: K * Nathan and lee walked.* Depth: “ I think I go back and make a new deck ready for the field test.” * at the stairway just before the class John walk up to Mary and her two mates.* John: “ Hey, want to duel Nathan in the field test.” Mary: “ yep I do.” John: “ look at all these rare cards that I got.” ? & ?: “ hey, Mary there are all the rare cards.” Mary: “ I don’t care I will use them cards to beat Nathan and show this Academy what the loser really is.” John: “ good, here our cards, get ready you only got two hours left.” * at the dark red dorm inside Nathan room* Nathan: “ I can’t believe to is the field test.” Lee: I know can’t wait to be upgrade.” Nathan: “ lets duel and have a warm up.” Lee: “ Ok.” * later that day* Lee: Dam, can’t believe I lost again. Nathan: “ it was close 100/1000.” Lee: I know but I only had 100 left and you had a thousand.” *Door banged open.* Depth: “ I time for the field test now so lets go.” Nathan: “ ok lets go.” * inside the duel field.” Announcer: “ welcome to the duel field test, now has you know the winners will be upgrade to the next dorm if there win. Now the first match is between Mary and Nathan so please come up.” Nathan: “ duel a light gold dorm person.” Mary: “ yes, time to lose Nathan.” Nathan: “ bring it.” Announcer: “ are we all ready.” Crowd/Nathan/Mary: yes we are.” Announcer: “ Let, he duel bring.” Head master: “ well lets see how this go.” * John thinking,” Ha, can’t wait to Nathan to lose.” Nathan/Mary: “ duel” Mary: 4000Nathan: 4000 Nathan: “ I’ll started, I draw and I summon dark cat (200/0) in face up attack positionand I set one card face down and end my turn.” Mary: “ I draw and I summon Luster dragon (1900/1600) in attack position and set one card face down your turn.” Announcer: wow, crowd is going wild, it turn into a good match.” Crowd: “ Cheer.” Nathan: “ I draw and now I place one card face don and end my turn.” Mary: “ Draw and tribute my luster dragon for "Luster dragon #2" (2400/1400) and I attack your monster.” Mary: 4000Nathan: 2100 Nathan: “ “Now you activate dark cat effect by be sent from the field to the graveyard I can summon Baby god in (200 /0) face up defend position .” Mary: I set a card and end my turn.”Nathan: “ I daw and summon dark slyer in (1900/3000) attack position, now I activate the spell card defend mode.” Mary: “ I activate my face down card magic jammer and I discard Masked Dragon to graveyard to stop the activate of your spell card.” Nathan: “ I end my turn.” Mary: “ I draw and summon Masked Dragon (1400/1100) in attack position and set one card face down and end my turn.” Nathan: “ my draw and now Dark slayer attack her Masked Dragon (1400/1100) .” Mary: “ wait I activate my face down card Mirror force, now your monster is destroy.” Nathan: “ wait I forgot to tell you one of dark slayer effect it is not effect my trap cards, so the attack carry’s on.” Mary: “ What!.” Mary: 3500Nathan: 2100 Nathan: “ set one card face down and end my turn.” Mary: I draw and I summon Masked Dragon (1400/1100) In attack position and..” Nathan: “ wait you just activate my face down card call of the god.” Mary: “ I play a quick spell card Mystical Space typhoon to destroy your call of the gods.” Mary: “ I end my turn.” Nathan: “ I draw and I sacrifice my dark slayer to summon "dark slayer #2" (2300/2000), and it effect activate. Now for how many monster you got on your side of field I pick trap card form grave equal to the numbers of monsters you have. I set two cards face down your turn.” Mary: I draw and now Luster dragon #2 (2400/1400) attack is dark slayer #2.” Nathan: “ wait once again you activate my face down card call of the gods and it first effect has long Has this card remains face up on the field, all my monster I not effect my spell, traps or effect monsters and the second effect, I pay 2000 life points and discard all my hand to Summon the three god cards The Winged Dragon of Ra(????/????) , Slifer the Sky (X000/X000) Dragon and the last but not least Obelisk the Tormentor (4000/4000) in attack position and the last effect they each gain 3000 attack points so the attack now are. now since I got five cards in my hand my Slifer the Sky dragon attack is now increase my five thousand but since also my trap card effect it gains another 3000 extra attack point it is now 8000 attack and 5000 defend (80005000), The Winged Dragon of Ra is also increase my three thousand (3000/3000) and last but not least Obelisk the Tormentor attack is now seven thousand and four thousand defend (7000/4000). End my turn.” Mary: “ I draw and set one card face down and end my turn.” Nathan: “ now I activate Winged Dragon of Ra Phoenix mode: and In this form, Ra is unaffected by the effects of all magic, trap, and effect monsters, plus is not destroyed as a result of battle, and the controller of Ra receives no damage to his or her life points from a battle involving Ra. Pay 1000 life points to destroy any one card on the field. Ra returns to the graveyard at the end of the turn. Now I pay 2000 life points.” Mary: 3500Nathan: 100 To increased the attack my 1000 witch it means it now four thousand attack points (4000/3000), then my the Winged Dragon of Ra Phoenix mode I destroy your "Luster dragon #2" (2400/1400). Then will attack your monster with Winged Dragon of Ra . Mary: 900Nathan: 100 Nathan: “ now I end my turn.” Mary: “what why did he end is turn or well I draw and summon Wined Dragon, Guardian of the Fortress and I set one card face down and end my turn.” Nathan: “ I draw and now Slifer the Sky dragon (8000/5000) attack her Wined Dragon, Guardian of the Fortress.” Mary: “ wait I activate my face down card Enchanted Javelin which means I gain 8000 life points.” Mary: 8900Nathan: 100 Nathan: “ just see what you would do and now I activate Obelisk the Tormentor, Fist of fury effect : and now my Sacrifice two monsters I destroy all of your monsters and inflict 4000 points of battle damage to your life points. So I Sacrifice Slifer the Sky dragon and Winged Dragon of Ra to destroy all of your monsters and inflict 4000 points of battle damage to your life points.” Mary: 4900Nathan: 100 Nathan: “Then I activate my spell card call of the dead witch means I can bring back Slifer the Sky Dragon and it gains 6000 attack points since I got six cards in my hand (6000/6000). Now Slifer the Sky Dragon attack her life points directly” Mary: 0Nathan: 100 Nathan: “ That game.” Mary: “ what, I can’t believe it.” * Mary runs off* Lilly: so that why we wait for one more turn he could use that tick that he was going to use the time and I better keep my eye on him.” Head master: “since Nathan won that duel he will advance to dark RA yellow dorm.” Lee: that good, * but I always knew he would.” Depth: “ Let me first to say welcome to the dark yellow dorm.” * back at the dark red dorm* Lee: Dam, I lost my friend all well better get to sleep.” * knock at the door* (opens.) Nathan: “ hello Lee.” Lee: why you back here I tough you was in dark RA yellow now.” Nathan: “ I know but I could get the nice beds so I came back here and there is always next time.” Lee: “ cool, lets get to sleep.” Nathan: “ Ok.” Next episode: An unexpected challenge [spoiler=yu-gi-oh movie-The return of the Egyptian God info] coming in 2008 is the yu-gi-oh movie the return of the Egyptian God now read this little to found out what it about but bewave the darnkness may takeover you. After the Eyptian god were destoy after being throw into the river. A black hole appers in Sky over the darkness Dual Academy and 120 miles over into Dual Academy and now five duelist, nathan, chazz, jaden,lee and Alexis musted work together to stop this evil or the earth have we kown it will die. [spoiler=Episode 5- An unexpected challenge]* that Saturday Just has Nathan woke up and Lee ran into the room, Depth was also training my duel another dark red duellist and meanwhile inside Nathan room* Nathan: “ Lee, I say we look around the Academy and have a bit of duelling.” Lee: “I think we should we look around the Academy.” Nathan: “Ok lets go.” * outside the Academy Depth was still duelling a dark red duellist and the life points are Depth: 100Red : 6000 With both having no monster on the filed or spell or trap cards.” * inside the Academy Nathan and lee went different ways to look around the whole of the Academy, Has Nathan head towards the class room, Mary came up to him.” Mary: “Let’s duel right now loser.” Nathan: “ Ok, lets duel.” *just then John walked up* John: “ what did I hear about duelling.” Mary: “I want to fight Nathan.” John: “ Ok, meet at the duel field in half hour.” Nathan: “ Ok” Mary: “ Ok I will. * later that day, Depth ran up to Nathan.* Depth: “ Nathan, Lee is duelling someone.” Nathan: “ What, come we have to get there.” * at the card shop Lee was duelling a dark yellow duellist called copycat. So far the life points are Lee: 6000Copycat: 12000 Lee has Summoned Skull in face up attack position (2500/1200). While Copycat has Summoned Skull in face up attack position (2500/1200). In there deck they only have 15 cards left plus the six cards in their hand.* Nathan: “ Hey, lee what you doing.” Lee: “duelling this copycat.” Lee: 6000Copycat: 12000 Lee: “ I draw and I activate my spell card Advanced Ritual Art and that means I send monster form my deck to the graveyard equal the level of my monster.” So I send Warrior Lady of the Wasteland to the graveyard has well has Dark Blade to summon form my hand Black Luster Soldier (3000/2500) in face up attack position and now Summoned Skull attack is Summoned Skull. Then Black Luster Soldier attack his life points directly and I end my turn.” Lee: 6000Copycat: 9000 Copycat: “ I draw and activate my face down card zombie summon, now I Pay 1000 life points to summon Ryu Kokki (2400/2000) in attack position.” Lee: 6000Copycat: 8000 Copycat: “ I set one card face down your turn.” Lee: “ I draw and activate my spell card Brain Control and I pay 80 life points to take control of one of your monsters.” Lee: 5200Copycat: 8000 Lee: “I choose you take control of your Ryu Kokki (2400/2000) and then I activate the spell card Mystical Space Typhoon on your face down card, witch is mow Destroy. Then I Summon Ninja Grandmaster Sasuke (1800/1000) in attack position and equip it with the spell card lighting blade, so it gain an extra 800 attack points (2600/1000). Now Black luster solider attack him directly.” Lee: 5200Copycat: 4000 Lee: “Now, Ryu Kokki (2400/2000) and Ninja Grandmaster Sasuke (2600/1000). Attack him directly.” Lee: 5200Copycat: 0 Copycat: “ Dam I lost.” Depth: “ he was using my deck.” * copycat runs away* Nathan: “ well done Lee you won against that copy cat.” Lee: “thanks and I glad I won one duel.” Depth: “ come on, we get to look at Legendary Sacred Beasts God Card deck.” Nathan: “ Cool, lets look at it.” * while there ran to see the Legendary Sacred Beasts God Card deck, Copycat had already took them and has Nathan went another way to talk to Lilly he bump into Copycat.* Copycat: “Duel me now I got the Legendary Sacred Beasts God Card deck.” Nathan: “ you what give them back.” Copycat: “ No way if you want them, then beat me in a duel.” Nathan: “ Ok, were.” Copycat: “ follow me to the coast at the edge of your dorm and we duel.” Nathan: “ Ok.” * later that day.* Nathan/Copycat: Duel Nathan: 4000Copycat: 4000 Copycat “ I draw and summon Mad Reloader (0/0) in face up attack position and set one card face down and end my turn.” Nathan: “ I draw and summon Dark cat (200/0) in attack position then I activate the spell card, 10,000 seal of the darkness.” Copycat: “ wait, no so fast I activate my face down card Dark Bribe And he what it does now it Negate the activation and effect of an opponent's Spell or Trap Card and destroy it. You opponent draws 1 card. So I Negate the activation of 10,000 seal of the darkness but you draw one card.” Nathan: “ I draw, I set on card face down and now Dark cat attack is Mad Reloader.” Nathan: 4000Copycat: 3800 Copycat: “ now you activate Mad Reloader effect and When this card is destroyed by battle and sent to the Graveyard, I send 2 cards from your hand to the Graveyard to draw 2 cards.” Nathan: “ I end my turn.” Copycat: “ my draw and set three cards face down you turn.” Nathan: “ I draw and I Sacrifice dark cat to summon dark slyer in (1900/3000) attack position also my is Effect is not effect my trap cards. So now Dark slayer Attack him directly.” Nathan: 4000Copycat: 2800 Nathan: “ set one card and end my turn.” Copycat: “ I draw and I Sacrifice three trap cards Immortal Class,Chaos Form,Chaos Burst to summon Uria, Lord of Searing Flames (0/0) in attack position. I set two card face down your turn.” Nathan: “ I draw and I sacrifice my dark slayer to summon "dark slayer #2" (2300/2000), and it effect activate. Now for how many monster you got on your side of field I pick trap card form grave equal to the numbers of monsters you have buts= since I have not got every them it does not. Now I attack your Uria, Lord of Searing Flames.” Copycat: Now I activate Chaos Burst and I can only Activate it only Tributing 1 monster and when you declares an attack. I can Destroy the attacking monster. Then inflict 1000 damage to your life points. So I Tribute Uria, Lord of Searing Flames to destroy your "dark slayer #2.” Now you take 1000 [points of damage.” Nathan: 3000Copycat: 2800 Nathan: “ I end my turn.” [spoiler=Episode 6- An unexpected challengeI]* Has copycat is about to take is turn, unaware to Nathan area 52, police are on route to the darkness duel Academy.* Copycat: “ I draw and activate my spell card monster reborn so I bring back Uria, Lord of Searing Flames form my graveyard (0/0), your turn.” Nathan: “ I draw and I play draw counter (2000/0) in attack position, now it’s effect activate and you see when this is card is normal summon, we both pay 500 life points to draw six cards.” Nathan: 2400Copycat: 2300 Nathan: “ Now I set two cards face down and end my turn.” Copycat: “ I draw and I set two cards face down and end my turn.” Nathan: “ I draw and activate my face down light of hope and he what does, for how many monster that you destroy you take 400 points of damage. Then I summon dragon slayer (2500/3000) in attack position and now dragon slayer (2500/3000) Attack him directly.” Copycat: “ I activate my face down card Skull Zoma After activation, I can Special Summon this card in Defense Position; and it is treated as a Effect Monster Card (Zombie-Type/DARK/Level 4/ATK 1800/DEF 500) and is Special Summoned to your Monster Card Zone in Defense Position. When this card is destroyed by battle, the ATK of the monster that destroyed this card is inflicted as damage to your opponent's Life Points. (This card is also still treated as a Trap Card.) So I summon Skull Zoma (1800/500) in Defense Position. Nathan: “ I end my turn.” Copycat my draw, and I place three cards face down your turn.” Nathan: “ I draw and I activate the spell card healing well and now I Tribute dragon slayer to gain 2500 life points.” Then I activate call of the dead to bring back dragon slayer (2500/3000) . Now I Attack your Skull Zoma . Your turn.” Nathan: 4900Copycat: 2300 Copycat: “ I draw and I set a monster face down. Then I activate the spell cards, Banner of Courage, Banner of Courage, Infinite Cards but I send my three spell card the graveyard to summon Hamon, Lord of Striking Thunder (4000/4000). Now Hamon, Lord of Striking Thunder attack is dragon slayer.”Nathan: “ wait I activate face down card stop attack and here what means, my 1 Tribute on my side of field you can’t attack for four more turns. So I Tribute dragon slayer.” Copycat: I end my turn.” Nathan: “ I draw and end my turn.” Copycat “I draw and set a monster face down your turn.” Nathan: “ I draw and set a monster face down your turn.” Copycat: I draw and summon Renge, Gatekeeper of Dark World in in Defense Position (100/2100) then I end my turn.” Nathan: “ I draw and he thinking * yes I only need one more card to win this.* I end my turn.” Copycat: I draw and summon Renge, Gatekeeper of Dark World in Defense Position (100/2100) I Tribute 3x Renge, Gatekeeper of Dark World to summon the last sacred beast Raviel, Lord of Phantasms (4000/4000) but now I activate my spell card Dimension Fusion Destruction and remove form play Raviel, Lord of Phantasms, Hamon, Lord of Striking Thunder, last but not least Uria, Lord of Searing Flames to summon for my fuison deck "Armitael, Phantasm of Chaos" (0/0) o since it still my Main Phase 1 it gains 1000 attack points. (1000/0). Then I end my turn.” Nathan: “ Yes I got it and now I set one card face down.” Copycard: “ I draw and Now I activate my spell card Banner of Courage and go to my battle phase and my monster gains 200 more points.” with mean it no (1200/0) and now I attck you directly. your turn.” Nathan: 3700Copycat: 2300 Nathan: “ I draw and now I activate my face down card call o fthe gods and I pay 2000 life points plus I discarded my hand.” Nathan: 1700Copycat: 2300 Nathan: “ to summon all three god cards The Winged Dragon of Ra(????/????) , Slifer the Sky dragon (X000/X000) Dragon and the last but not least Obelisk the Tormentor (4000/4000) in attack position and since I only have three cards in my Slifer the Sky dragon gains 3000 attack ponts plus aonther 3000 form my trap. Now it has ( (6000/X000) , Obelisk the Tormentor (7000/4000) and The Winged Dragon of Ra(3000/????). Now I attack your "Armitael, Phantasm of Chaos” with Obelisk the Tormentor . Copycat: “ it don’t destroyed.” Nathan: “ I know but you take the damage.” Copycat: “ what, nooooo.” Nathan: 1700Copycat: 0 Nathan: “ That game.” Copycat: “ why did I lose.” Nathan: “ Look, I know you have always been a copycat but build your own deck because it not fair on the other duelist and now go before my friedn get here.” Copycat: “Ok.” * Copycat runs off and Lee appered in fornt of Nathan.” Lee: “ Hey, it night time so lets get some sleep.” Nathan: “ Ok.” * the next day, lee bangs on Nathan door.* Nathan: “ come in.” Lee: “ I don’t want to worry you but two seryi gauds are outside wanting you.” Nathan: “ wait what are there doing.” * banged out Nathan and Lee* * later that night* Guard1: “wake up.” Nathan: “ wait were are we.” Guard2: “ just on the outskirts of your dorm.” Lew: “ what do you want.” Guard1: how deck back that your dad stole Nathan.” Nathan: “ what no he gave it to me.” Lee: “ you can’t tale it and he did not know.”Guard2: “ ok tell you what we have a tag team duel and if you win we will leave and say we never foun you but if you lose you are coming with us.” Nathan/Lee: “ Ok, that sounds fair so lets get it on.” Guard1/guard2: “ no yet lets drink first.” * nearly the end of the night* Nathan/Lee/Guard1/guard2: “ duel.” Nathan/Lee: 8000 Guard 1/guard 2: 8000. [spoiler=Episode 7- An unexpected challengeII]Nathan/lee/guard1/guard2: “ duel” Nathan/Lee: 8000Guard 1/guard 2: 8000. Lee: “I draw and summon Warrior Lady of the Wasteland (1100/1200) in Attack Position” Guard: 2: I draw and activate spell card Warrior of the dead and now bro can you lend be a monster:” Guard1: “ sure.” Guard2: “ Now you see I discard one card from my hand to destory your Warrior Lady of the Wasteland, then I activate the spell card Warrior of the dead#2 witch now I can summon a level five or high monster form my bro deck so I summon god killer (0/0). Set two cards your turn.” Nathan: “ I summon dark cat (200 /0) in Attack Position.” Guard2: Wait I activate my face down card, light blast and you see has long has this card remain face up on the field, you can not summon any dark or light monsters and plus your dark cat is destoy.” Nathan: “ I set a card face down and end my turn.” Lee: “ How can we win this, there can counter us every time.” Nathan: “ don’t worry we will.” Guard 1: “ I draw and if you don’t mind borther can i borrow your monster.” Guard2: “ sure and anyimte you need yo then you can.” Guard 1: “ you to and now I Sacrifice god killer to summon the anti- dragon slayer (4000/4000) in Attack Position then god killers effect activate, now since I Sacrifice god killer, the summon monster gain an extra 12000 attack points.” so now it is (16000/4000) and now anti- dragon slayer attack there life points directly.” Nathan: “ wait I activate my face down card stop attack#2.” Guard2: “ wait there I activate a quick play spell card, sealing of the traps and now every trap that you use you take 1000 points if damage.” Nathan: “ but the effect of my stop attack#2 still activates and I destoy your anti- dragon slayer.” Nathan/Lee: 7000Guard 1/guard 2: 8000 Guard1: I end my turn.” Lee: my turn and I set a monster face down plus set two cards face down your turn.” Guard2: “ my turn Bro and now I activate the spell card anti- dragon slayer reborn, now what it means is form my Bro graveywrd I can re summon anti- dragon slayer with the same attack points but also it gains another 1000. So I bring back anti- dragon slayer (17000/4000).” Nathan/lee: “What” Guard2: now anti- dragon slayer attack his face down card.” Lee: “ well done you just activate the effect of man eat bug which means your anti- dragon slayer is destory.” Guard 1/2 “ we know but the first effect of anti- dragon slayer activate wich means by destoy this card with an effect monster you take 2000 points of damage.” Nathan/Lee: 5000Guard 1/guard 2: 8000 Guard2: I end my tun.” Lee: “ Dam Nathan we already lost 3000 life points and there still got 8000.” Nathan: we will turst me and now I draw, set two cards face down your turn.” Guard1: “ this so easy.” Guard2: “ I know borther lets end this.” * worried looks on Lee and Nathan Faces.” Guard1: “ I draw and set one monster face down. As well has set two card face down your turn but it better be good.” Lee: “ I draw and I summon dark blade (1800/1500) then I equip with lighting blade to increase it attack my 800. ( 2600/1500) set one card face down your turn.” Guard 2: “ I draw and activate the spell card the cry of the gods.” Lee: “ wait I activate my face down card Magic Jammer and discarded one card form ahnd to negate your spell card.” Guard: “ you survived so far but for how long your turn.” Nathan: “ I draw and summon draw counter (2000/0) now it effect activate we both pay 500 life points to draw six cards.” Nathan/Lee: 4500Guard 1/guard 2: 7500 Guard:2 “ ha, why did you do that.” Nathan: “ you see but for now I finish off my set one card face down your turn.” Guard2: “ it does not matter your still going down because now I summon draw count (0/0) and my it effect it goes in face up in Defense Position and gains 4000 defned points. “ (0/4000) o also I destoy your draw counter with it other effect hich allows me to use nay monster effect, spell or trap cards form ym deck this turn so I use for my deck Draw destoyer, so I discard two cards for my hand to destoy your draw counter and you take 500 points of damage your turn.” Nathan/Lee: 4000Guard 1/guard 2: 7500 Lee: “I draw and use Nathan face down card tow summoning which means form ym deck I can summon tow wooror type monster so I summon Swift Gaia the Fierce Knight (2300/1200) in attack Position and Gilford the Legend (2600/2000) Defense Position then I set one card face down your turn.” * lee tells Nathan the card he put down* Guard1: “my draw and I set one card face down your turn.” Nathan: “ I will beat you now I draw then I sumon Dragon slayer (2500/3000) in attack Position and set one card face down, I end my turn.” Guard2: “I draw and I summon Gilford the dark Legend (3000/0).” Lee: “wait you need to safice a monster for that.” Guard: “ nope it level two and now my Gilford the dark Legend attack is Gilford the Legend.” Lee: “ I activate my face down card mirror force which means your monster is destoy.Guard2: ha, but did you not forget you take a 1000 points of damage and you also activate Gilford the dark Legend effect which means when this card get destroy my a trap card you take damage equal to it attack points.” Nathan/Lee: 0Guard 1/guard 2: 7500 Guard1: “ but I activate the quick play spell card healing gem and so you gain life point equal to the monster that was just destoy,” Nathan/Lee: 3000Guard 1/guard 2: 7500 Nathan: “ hey, why did you do that.” Guard1: “ O you was very luck you see if Gilford the dark Legend get destroy I have to play a quick spell card or we would lose this duel.“ .” guard2: “I set one card face down your turn.” Lee: “ I draw, now I summon Mataza the Zapper (1300/800) and attack you directly.” Guard2: “ wait I activate my face down card mirror froce.” Lee: “ Dam.” Guard1: "I set a card face down and summon the fire dragon (2600/0) level 4 monster in attack Position, now I attack your dragon salyer.” Nathan/Lee: 2900Guard 1/guard 2: 7500 Nathan: “ now you activate my face down card fury of god which means You see By sending two cards form my hand to the graveyard, I can summon 3 god tokens.” Guard1: I activate my face down card anti-trap which means now that card is negate and you can still play trap cards now plus i end my turn.” Nathan: “ I draw and set one ard face down your turn.” Guard2: I set one card face down your.” Lee: “ I draw and end my turn.” Guard1: I summon dark catI (2500/0) and attack your life point directly my it effect.” Nathan: “ wait you activate my face down card call of the god and so I pay 2000 life point also we discard are hand to summon The Winged Dragon of Ra (0/0), Slifer the Sky Dragon (X000/X000, Obelisk the Tormentor (4000/4000.” Nathan/Lee: 900Guard 1/guard 2: 7500 Gaurd2: I activate my trap card remove of the god so now The Winged Dragon of Ra, Slifer the Sky Dragon, Obelisk the Tormentor are remove form play o and the plus side I am allow to summon the killer dragon (20000/20000).” Guard 1: “ your turn.” “So, the duel is about to come to a powerful end but with no monster, spells, or trap on the field or no cards in hand and, face down a 20000 attack pont monster is this the end of lee and Nathan found out next time.” next Episode 8- An unexpected challengeIII [spoiler=Episode 8- An unexpected challengeIII]Nathan: “ My draw.” Lee: “ what are we going to, we are out matched.” Nathan: “ don’t know but we must try and now I set a card face down your trun.” Guard2: Ha, you are about t be defend so now Killer dragon attack them directly.” Lee: “ Nathan we lose.” Nathan: “ no we defend for now and so I activate my face down card the rainbow sheild, so now you can’t attack until are three main phase.” Guard2: “ ha, you think and I set a card, end my turn.” Lee: “ I draw and I set a monster cad face down plus I set two cards face down your turn.” Guard1: “ now, their something we forgot to tell, you see my is second effect once per turn we can destoy any monster so killer dragon, effect blast. Set one card your turn.” Guard2: “ soon or late you will be defend has you only have 30 cards altogether in your deck and we have 40.” Nathan: “ I draw and set a card face down also I summon light beast (0/0).” Guard2: “ I play the quick play spell card call of the killers which means that for every monster I destoy you can’t set or place monsters or use trap cards.” Nathan: “ Now light beast attack their killer dragon.” Guard1: “ you lose.” Nathan: “ nope my it effect your killer dragon is gone.” Guard1 & 2: “ what.” Nathan: “ I end my turn.” Guard2: “I draw o did you think you got rid of our dragon.” Nathan/lee: “ what we destoy it.” Guard2: no because I use the effect of killer baby dragon witch is in my hand and that means my discarding this card I can bring back our killer dragon.” Nathan/lee: “ No.” Guard2: “ so I summon killer dragon (20000/20000) form my graveyard in attack Position o and I attack your light beast.” Lee: “ wait I activate my face down card negate attack.” Guard2: “you won’t last for every and I finish by set two cards face down your turn.” Nathan: “ I summon draw counter (2000/0) in attack position o and by it effect you see when this is card is normal summon, we both pay 500 life points to draw six cards and I end my turn.” Nathan/Lee: 300Guard 1/guard 2: 7000 Guard1: I draw and now killer dragon attack their life points.” Lee: “ wait I activate my face down Enchanted Javelin.” Nathan/Lee: 300Guard 1/guard 2: 7000 Guard1: wait I activate killers dragon third effect, you see my discarding tiw cards from my hand it netag and destoy your Enchated Javelin but I have to end my turn.” Lee: “ I draw and activate the dpell card Swords of revealing light then I set a monster card face down your turn.” Guard2: “ I draw and summon the Wingbeat of the giant Dragon (200/0) ) in attack Position. Then I use it effect which means that it equip to killer dragon and gives in an extra 2000 attack points (22000/20000) then I set a card your turn.” Nathan: “ I draw and set two cards face down your turn.” Guard1: “ I draw and end my turn.” Lee: “ I draw and set another rmonster cad face down plus set two cards face down your turn.” Guard2: “ I end my turn.” Nathan: “ Dam the Swords of Revealing light is gone but o well, I summon anti-dragon#2 (0/0). I activate it effect which means your killer dragon is destoy.” Guard1: “ not so fast I activate my face down card unmaite blast, which means that all your monster and, all spell. Trap are destoy.” Nathan: “ my two cards are not thanks to another effect of anti-dragon. I end my turn.” Guard1: “ now killer dragon attack is anti-dragon.” Nathan: “ wait I activate my trap card two way fight which means that your killer dragon attack is aim right at me.” Guard1: “ ha.” Nathan: “ Ha, nooo *just before Nathan craps, he wisped something to lee* Lee: “ Nathan, no.” Guard1/guard2: “ Ha, looks like it two on one o and it till my brother turn.” Guard1: “ I end.” Lee: “ I draw and summon Swift Gaia the Fierce Knight (2300/2100) in attack Position o and since that the only card in my hand I don’t need to Tribute.” I end my turn.”Guard2: “ I draw and now let end this killer dragon attack him direly.”Lee: “ wait I activate Nathan face down card Killer blast.”Guard1/gaurd2: “ what, ths can’t be how did that get in their.”Lee: “ now, he what does, you see my Tribute my Swift Gaia the Fierce Knight I can destoy your killer dragon and we both take life point equal t it attack.”Nathan/Lee: 0Guard 1/guard 2: 0 Guard1/guard2: “ why did you do tha it a draw.” Lee: “ the second effect is that I gain life point equal the Tribute montser.” Nathan/Lee: 2300Guard 1/guard 2: 0 Lee: “ we won but lee thinks * if you did ntot draw tha card Nathan then we would lose.” Guard1/Guard2: “ he do coming with us.” * Depth ran over.* Depth: “ hey, what you soing.” Guard1/Guard2: “ we beter get out of here.” *guards ran off* Depth: “ Hey, what happened here.” Lee: “ we was duelling these guards but sadly Nathan use one of he card to take the full damage of the monster but if he did not do that we would of lose.” Depth: “ Come on we better get in to he medic.” Lee: “ you can, I got to put Nathan cards back into hsis room.” Depth: “ Ok, see you.” * lee and Depth went there different ways. But at the top of the coast line near the dark red drom.” Mary: “ Ha, I think I better take a look at Nathans cards.” Next epoide- the return of the new Jaden Yuki. [spoiler=Episode 9-the return of the new Jaden Yuki] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jamief Posted July 30, 2008 Report Share Posted July 30, 2008 i don't think it is very good you can't even spell duel properly Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
school988 Posted July 30, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 30, 2008 I konw but i have imporved it a bit but soon, yu-gi-oh return of the Egyptian God movie will be coming out and, has more Episodes come out it willl get alot more fun and, you get to see jaden three years on and he has new elemental Hero cards in this deck and is a lot stronger then when you last see him in yu-gi-oh gx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sam Litch Posted July 30, 2008 Report Share Posted July 30, 2008 to be honest I don't like the fact that fan fics rely on the Yugioh characters...anyway I think duels are interesting, it would be great if you support more the plot. I'll be expecting for the return of the Egyptian gods. Keep it up pal. You can check my fan fic too I need some comments and rates plz, its named Omega Series. Check it out. Greets and farewell. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
school988 Posted July 30, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 30, 2008 don't worry the return of the Egyptian gods movie will be coming out on here, soon and, yours is good to. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Supreme Gamesmaster Posted July 30, 2008 Report Share Posted July 30, 2008 WTF? Obelisk in the first chapter? This fic is horrible. It's in script format, and the grammar is so bad it's barely legible. Worse, what little I could make of the plot was like GX, but worse, which is saying something. Please, please improve on this nightmare of a fic before you get back here. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
school988 Posted July 30, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 30, 2008 yes, he his in the first chapter and yes you get the plot later on if you do not already get the plot and it is in scrip format but, it better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Supreme Gamesmaster Posted July 30, 2008 Report Share Posted July 30, 2008 Novel format >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Script format. But even so, the grammar and plot are so horrible I can barely read this. Please, please, PLEASE improve this. It's absolutely horrendous. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
school988 Posted July 31, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 31, 2008 Episode 5 & 6 are out now and turst me it good." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sebaqueti Posted July 31, 2008 Report Share Posted July 31, 2008 Where to find yu gi-oh cards? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
school988 Posted August 1, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 1, 2008 i am making the cards but for now enjoy Episode 7 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
school988 Posted August 8, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 8, 2008 Episode 8 is out now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jamief Posted August 8, 2008 Report Share Posted August 8, 2008 i think you should jut stop making them, nobody likes them so give up, go practice alot and come back, ~Jamief~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Umbra Posted August 8, 2008 Report Share Posted August 8, 2008 I am very tempted to lock this thread, for the sole reason that it doesn't contain a fanfic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Supreme Gamesmaster Posted August 9, 2008 Report Share Posted August 9, 2008 It doesn't contain a fanfic? I know it sucks, but is this plagiarized material or something? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Umbra Posted August 9, 2008 Report Share Posted August 9, 2008 I don't consider these randomly gathered words and sentences a fanfic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Supreme Gamesmaster Posted August 9, 2008 Report Share Posted August 9, 2008 Good point. Now I'm seeing the words Slifer the Sky Dragon, 5000 Lines, 80 Life Points, and Red. None of those mean a good fanfic. If, as Umbra so duly pointed out, it can even be considered a fanfic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
school988 Posted August 9, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 9, 2008 I know, but, i am fixing it and yes the go cards are in it, and the duels are good and the qiute that you want, is going to be in the movie, then after that that qoute will be used. this is my fanfic of what happens three years after yu-gi-oh gx and so, it a fanfic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DrizzNip Posted August 9, 2008 Report Share Posted August 9, 2008 it was okey to me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Supreme Gamesmaster Posted August 9, 2008 Report Share Posted August 9, 2008 The duels aren't good, so get that thought out of your head. Just start over after you realize that we're essentially saying you fail. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
school988 Posted August 11, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 11, 2008 tough what u all thin, how i imporving and all becvuase it near the same had gx and yes this is a fanfic but a new style one jus like yu-gi-oh and yu-gi-oh gx, o and you think tha the god cards are not good but there are. So this is a fanfic but not the one you think of it lest say a tv thing. o and the phase use in it gives it a stroy. i am keep making these but you know, this si to you not a fanfic but it is but anew type of one so, if u don't like then so what. it like a tv show and that plus the duels are fun o one more thing the movie that i am writing is so good . so go screw yourslef becuase, thi s is a fanfic and il look at others, it may not be the same but it different ti them ones. I am read ad trying to improve.o and why is it not a fanfic o and how come it not a fanfic and what need to be done to get it a fanfic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Supreme Gamesmaster Posted August 11, 2008 Report Share Posted August 11, 2008 To be a fanfic, it has to•Have a valid plotline (FAILED)•Be based on an existing franchise (SUCCEEDED)•Be legible as a novel would be (FAILED) Our main problem is that your grammar is horrible. You barely know how to spell, let alone write a story. Just how old are you, school988? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
school988 Posted August 13, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 13, 2008 ok, ubt if i do remake their will b some people form he other yu-gioh n it and near he edn your found out whyand the god movie i am making is still going to come out when i fish writing it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jamief Posted August 15, 2008 Report Share Posted August 15, 2008 how old are you, youre grammar is shocking. stop updating, LRN2grammar, then come back Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Supreme Gamesmaster Posted August 15, 2008 Report Share Posted August 15, 2008 ok' date=' ubt if i do remake their will b some people form he other yu-gioh n it and near he edn your found out why[hr']and the god movie i am making is still going to come out when i fish writing it ... What the hell is that supposed to mean? That grammar is so atrocious I can't even read the sentence. The most I can pick out is "i do remake," which you should probably not do due to the sheer unoriginality of the plot, and that you're going to "fish for the good movie," which makes absolutely no sense in itself. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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