joess_94 Posted August 2, 2007 Report Share Posted August 2, 2007 Hey. Please, be brutal. These are my first cards and set really, and I want honest feedback so I can improve, thanks! :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
King Posted August 2, 2007 Report Share Posted August 2, 2007 You may need to work on your wording a bit, like in "Reversal Of The Cosmos" it is more correct to say Attribute instead of type. Your ritual monster is good, but I might recomend to increase the number of stars to summon it. However, it is a very good set for your first time: 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
flyingdagger8 Posted August 2, 2007 Report Share Posted August 2, 2007 Order of the Angels. Is this spell card one turn or a field spell? I wouldn't say "gains 500 ATK power." I would say "gains 500 ATK points" and you also spelled "cannot" wrong in the card. Anyways love the pics and concept. I'd give you 8/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kocrow17 Posted August 2, 2007 Report Share Posted August 2, 2007 Nice cards. I used the same pics for my angels: http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/showthread.php?tid=2417Just note that they were made using the old card maker and I haven't updated them yet. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Supreme Gamesmaster Posted August 2, 2007 Report Share Posted August 2, 2007 No monster can be two types at once. Also, "The Cursed One" and "Angel of the Light - Dawn" need to be less powerful. And "Evil," "Angel" and "Demon" aren't types (replace them with "Fiend," "Fairy" and "Fiend," respectively). For "Order of the Angels," just say DARK instead of DARK type. Otherwise, the cards are reasonable. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Giga Bowser X Posted August 3, 2007 Report Share Posted August 3, 2007 The Cursed one should really have 8 or 9 stars instead of 7. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
joess_94 Posted August 3, 2007 Author Report Share Posted August 3, 2007 NOTE: Okay, I fixed all of them! now what d'ya think? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JyShin Posted August 3, 2007 Report Share Posted August 3, 2007 Very nice images, I like how they all compliment each other. Also, the theme is interesting, however, most of the monsters are very strong, consider putting in slightly weaker monsters to balance it out too, like an authentic booster/deck. Overall, pretty good! Also, refer to real cards on grammar, since they seem to use specific wordings. Good job! Also, your monster "The Cursed One" and ritual "The Forbidden Ritual" don't have corresponding tribute levels. One says sacrifice monsters to add up to 7 and the other says 8. JyShin Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
joess_94 Posted August 3, 2007 Author Report Share Posted August 3, 2007 Okay, thanks! I fixed that, so, ay more critique? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest FSX Posted August 3, 2007 Report Share Posted August 3, 2007 Very nice. The cards would not be out of place in a official set. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wicket Posted August 3, 2007 Report Share Posted August 3, 2007 And "Evil' date='" "Angel" and "Demon" aren't types [/quote'] So? We had this argument before. You can make your cards with any type. You don't have to make cards with the actual card-types. Everybody does that. We have no complaints, even though this topic has been thrown around, and your type hasn't succeeded. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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