Mutant Monster RAEG-HAPYP Posted August 1, 2008 Report Share Posted August 1, 2008 I watch Naruto a lot online and I actually look it up so I should have no problems with this. If I forgot someone PM me. [spoiler=OC's]Higora UchihaGender: MaleAge: 25Rank: Jonin/SaninBio: Orochimaru was no longer classified as a sanin due to his crimes(and his obesssion with little boys) so Higora took his place. He knows both Chidori and Rasengan Cenda HyugaGender: MaleRank: Jonin/Rogue Ninja/AkatsukiBio: Beliving he's the best Hyuga, he tried to kill his clan but failed. KamazuraGender: MaleRank: Jonin/Rouge ninjaBio: the Leader of a gang who terrorised the Village Hidden in the Flames. [spoiler=Made up Jutsu]Black Demon BladeUser: HigoraRank: S Fire Style: Fire ShurikenUser: Higora, Sasuke, KakashiRank: C Ice Style: Ice SwordUser: ???Rank: B Ninja Art: Shadow SwordUser: HigoraRank: B Ninja Art: Summoning Jutsu(Dragons)User: Higora, Sasuke, NarutoRank: B Ninja Art: Secret Revival JutsuUser: ???Rank: s Ninja Art: Revival Clone JutsuUser: higoraRank: s Lighting BarrageUser: HigoraRank: s Water Style: Water ShurikenUser: Kisame, KakashiRank: b Gentle Fist Style: Deadly Sound StrikeUser: cendaRank: ??? Gentle Fist Style: Deadly Lighting StrikeUser: CendaRank: ??? Blazing ChidoriUser: Naruto, HigoraRank: s Shadow RasenganUser: Higora, NarutoRank: s Ninja Art: Demonic PossessionUser: CendaRank: Forbidden Fire Style: Fire Dragon JutsuUser: Higora, Naruto, Sasuke, Cenda, Itachi, Kakashi and all Chunin and Jonin in the Hidden Flame VillageRank: B [spoiler=new Places]Land of ShadowsVillage Hidden in the flamesLand of LightVillage hidden in the Ice [spoiler=small changes]Naruto learns Chidori(poor sasuke XD) 4th Hokage, Garra's Dad, Hayate is still alive Orochimaru is no longer a sanin(He killed so many people, he dosn't derserve to be) Episode 1 Higora: Huh? Me? Sanin? Hokage: Yes. Orochimaru is a wanted shinobi in too many contries. We have to replace him. Higora: Well then... I haven't been here in a while. I'll go for a walk Meanwhile... Kisame: @$ With Higora back it's not safe here. Even both of us combined, we'd be no match. Itachi: We need to hold back for now. Kisame: Understood Back at the Leaf Village... Naruto: OW What was that for? Kakashi: For making me pay for all that Ramen Naruto It's wasn't enough Kakashi: You ate 20 bowls... Higora: You haven't change at all huh Naruto? Naruto turns around... Naruto: Higora sensei Kakashi: You have to call him Master now Naruto: Why? Kakashi: Because he's now a Sanin Naruto(:shock:) WHA?!! Higora: It's ok Kakashi. Then... Anbu: Lord Hokage wants to see you at once At the Hokage's office Higora: I see..The Hidden Flame Village...So we have to stop Kamazura and his gang? 4th Hokage: Yes but somthign concerns me. One member of his gang...goes by Kisa. Higora: Kisa...It couldn't be... 4th Hokage: Naruto, Sasuke, Hinata, Neji. You 4 along with Kakashi and Higora will go. Hinata; Um..ok Higora: Let's do this Later... Higora: Where's Kakashi Sasuke: He's always late Kakashi: Sorry to keep you wating Higora:(Was the Hokage drunk when he made him a Jonin) Kakashi: Let's go Higora: I'm team leader They head out of the Leaf VIllage for the Land of Flames Kisame: Let's follow them Itachi: Right Meanwhile...Higora and the others stop to take a break but Naruto and everyone else excpet Higora are too busy waiting fot Kakashi to take his mask off than eat. Later... Bandit 1: Hey you!! Give us all your money Bandit 2: Or else Higora: Well Well...I get to have a little fun before we go. Bandit 1: ENOUGH!!! Higora: Water Style: Water Dragon Justu A water dragon(duh) knocked out the 2 bandits Naruto: Why did you use a Jutsu Higora: Because their Kamazura's men. They continue their way to the Hidden Flame Village when... Higora: Stop Sasuke: Why Higora goes quiet... Kakahsi: GET DOWN!! Kisame: I'll cut you to ribbons Higora: Fire Style: Dragon Flame Jutsu The jutsu hit Kisame dead on Higora: Long time no see...Kisame Hoshigaki Kisame: Finally. I get to fight one of the Sanin Higora: Kakashi you and the others go on. I'll catch up later Kakashi: Ok Naruto: Sensei you better live Higora: I will Kakashi: Let's go He and the others leave while Higora takes on Kisame Higora: You ready? Kisame: I'll cut you to ribbons. Higora: I thought you knew better than to challege me. Kisame: We'll see. Higora: Sharingan!! Kisame: Well now...The Sharingan and I hear you're the only member ever to fully master it. We shall see Higora: LET'S GO Higora and Kisame: Water Style: Giant Vortex Jutsu 2 Huge waves crash into each other Kisame: WHAT?! Higora: Heh Heh Kisame: GRRR!!! This'll be harder than I thought. TAKE THIS: Water Style: Water Shuriken Numerous Shuriken made of Water come at a fast pace Higora: Heh All the Shuriken hit a tree Kisame: He's faster than I thought Higora: Ninja Art: Summoning Jutsu!!! A huge Dragon emerges Judasa: What the...It's been a long time Higora Higora: See you Judasa: TLEPORTATION!!! Both vanished Kisame: Gah... Meanwhile... Naruto: Man this place is far Sasuke: You wanted to take this loser... What they don't know is that Kamazura has a connection with the infamous Orochimaru and possibly Itachi as well. They also being watched... Kabuto: Heh Heh How will this mission turn out? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silencerleader Posted August 1, 2008 Report Share Posted August 1, 2008 WOOT!! I didn't fall asleep!!It's all right. Kabuto was LOL-ish. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mutant Monster RAEG-HAPYP Posted August 1, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 1, 2008 Ok thanks. I'll give your rep as soon as I take care of these n00bs Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mutant Monster RAEG-HAPYP Posted August 2, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 2, 2008 BUMP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DrizzNip Posted August 2, 2008 Report Share Posted August 2, 2008 this was awsome thanks for posting it up. it dident bor me at all ill rate it 9.5/10. thanks again. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Seth Graystone Posted August 2, 2008 Report Share Posted August 2, 2008 It's cool. Is this based off of the RPG, or is the RPG based off of this? Either way, 9.5/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mutant Monster RAEG-HAPYP Posted August 2, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 2, 2008 It's cool. Is this based off of the RPG' date=' or is the RPG based off of this? Either way, 9.5/10.[/quote'] RPG is based off this. Here's epsidoe 2 but's kind of short Episode 2 Kisame: He got away Zabuza: Good. If he didn't you'd die. Kisame: We must redeem the 7 Nnja Swordsman of the Mist Zabuza: Let's go Kisame: Right Meanwhile... Naruto: Finally break They took a break...again Higora: Well another break? Kakashi: You know... Higora: Yes if Kisame was here...Itachi must me here too. Naruto: Hinata why are you all red Hinata: Oh...it's nothing... Sasuke: Higora-sensei, why does she Higora: She has a crush on him Sasuke: :shock: :shock: :shock: :shock: :shock: Kakashi: Let's go After 5 bathroom breaks, Naruto playing dead, Sasuke getting attack by more girls, they arrrive in the Hidden Flame Village Naruto: Finally we're here Neji: So were do we go. Kabuto: Surprise Kabuto and 20 other men appear an there ready to fight Higora: Hmph...you guys ready to fight? Kakashi: This'll be fun Naruto: I won't lose BELIVE IT Sasuke: Hmph Hinata(This is my chance to impress Naruto) Higora: Kakahsi and I will take Kabuto. You 4 handle the rest Kabuto: This'll be amusing...TAKE THIS!!! Uses his Chakra Scalpel but... Higora: Heh Kabuto: What I misses Then, higora knocks Kabuto in the sky, and lands 6 more blows at a fast place before slamming him to the ground with a kick Higora: Lighting Barrage Kabuto: URK!!! Using his powers he mostly healed Higora: Gah he's good TO BE CONTINUED Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ChronosCrowler Posted August 2, 2008 Report Share Posted August 2, 2008 Came as requested: lol! Cool! Naruto! FanFiction with Made up jutsus! It's very unique to see somethingg like this and i enjoyed the 1 st chapter btw!^_^ And I like your new character higora he's uber fantastic! eheheh! but why replace orocimaru! you can add other sanins but not replace them lol! ^_^ well anyway very nice fanfic! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skyfi Posted August 2, 2008 Report Share Posted August 2, 2008 Really Entertaining And Same As Silencer Said Lol 9.4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mutant Monster RAEG-HAPYP Posted August 2, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 2, 2008 Came as requested: lol! Cool! Naruto! FanFiction with Made up jutsus! It's very unique to see somethingg like this and i enjoyed the 1 st chapter btw!^_^ And I like your new character higora he's uber fantastic! eheheh! but why replace orocimaru! you can add other sanins but not replace them lol! ^_^ well anyway very nice fanfic! Orochimaru has a obsession with boys(Sasuke) and he's crasy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted August 4, 2008 Report Share Posted August 4, 2008 Very funny and cool! 9.5/10! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mutant Monster RAEG-HAPYP Posted August 4, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 4, 2008 Episode 3: Power!! Black Demon Blade Clone 1: Nar Clone 2: U Clone 3: to Naruto: Uzumaki Barrage Loser: AHHH Neji: 2 Palms Loser: AHH Neji: 4 Palms Loser: URK!!! Neji: 8 palms Loser: WAAH Neji: 16 Palms Loser: GAH!!! Neji: 32 Palms Loser: AHHH Neji: 8 trigrams 64 palms Loser: ARRRRRRRRRRRRRRRGGGGGHHHHH Sasuke: Fire Style: Fireball jutsu A massive fireball was used to beat more losers 10 losers: AHH!!!! Hinata: Take this Loser: Urgh Hinata: Take that Loser: OW!! Naruto: That's all of them. Let's go help Higora-sensei and Kakashi-sensei They arrive to see the battle between Kabuto Kamazura: Well. Now we have some fun. Higora: You...I'll take you down. Kamazura: I'll kill one of those brats first!!! He pulls out a kunai and heads for naruto Hinata: Naruto... Higora manages to protect him Higora: I won't allow you to kill them Black chakra appears in his right hand Higora: There Leaf Shinobi. I'll protect them with my life Kamazura: TAKE THIS He runs toward him with a kunai Higora: BLACK DEMON BLADE Kamazura: AHHH!!!! Kamazura was blown 100 feet away Naruto: My turn. Shadow Clone Jutsu Chakra starts buliding up in his right hand Kabuto: DIE NARUTO!!! Naruto: RASENGAN!!! Kabuto: WHAT THE...?? ARRGGHH Kabuto: Was blown 100 feet as well Higora: We did it. Let's go home... Later... Sakura: Hey Naruto. How was the mission Naruto: We did it 4th Hokage: Good. Your dismissed Naruto: Hey dad can we go get ramen later Sakura: DAD?! Higora: You didn't know that Lord Hokage was Naruto's dad? Sakura(Perfect I can use this info to make Sasuke all mine Heh heh) 4th Hokage: Sure Naruto: See you Later... Hinata: Um..Naruto... Naruto: Yeah? Hinata: You were amazing on the last mission Naruto: You're were good too. Maybe we can get ramen or somthing together Hinata(Blushes) W..What?[spoiler=Hinata's current though] Kiba: Hey Hinata: I have to go. See you Naruto Sasuke: Ever notice she blushes in front of Naruto Sakura: Yeah....Don't tell me... Kakashi: Let's go train Naruto: Wait for me guys!!! Meanwhile... Kisame: They got away Zabuza: No matter. We'll find the Kisame: Heh Heh. In the hidden Flame village Kabuto: Urgh we'll be out for a while. You played a good crime boss Orochimaru: Yes...soon Naruto and Sasuke...will be on the quest for power Back at leaf Sakura: Hey back off I'm a teamate of Naruto Ino: SO? Sakura: He's Lord Hokage's son Ino: *faceplam* Sasuke: You think letting her do this was to much? Naruto: Nope Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Marisa Kirisame-ze Posted August 4, 2008 Report Share Posted August 4, 2008 lol nice one! ^^ ~Ninjakid1 :3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Arekku_Koro Posted August 4, 2008 Report Share Posted August 4, 2008 It was pretty funny. I think you should go back and fix some grammar errors, but good for the most part. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
evil D Posted August 4, 2008 Report Share Posted August 4, 2008 Wow, that is AWESOME, 9.7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silencerleader Posted August 5, 2008 Report Share Posted August 5, 2008 Some little grammar errors, but enjoyable overall. ^_^*thumb up* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mutant Monster RAEG-HAPYP Posted August 5, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 5, 2008 Episode 4 Naruto: Team Changes? 4th Hokage: yes In a few days as a trial, we'll change teams and see how it'll go Later... Naruto: So why Team Change? Sasuke: Probaly issues. I hope we can get Sakura off the team. She scares me. So does Ino Naruto: They scare me too...Where did you get that book? Sasuke: I stole it from Kakashi-sensei At Kakashi's hosue... Kakashi: OMFG Where did my book go? ......... Sasuke: I'm bored... Ino: Mind Transfer Jutsu Sasuke: What the... She used her jutsu to take control of Sasuke's mind Sasuke(Ino): I'm going with Ino. She's so smart and pretty Naruto: WTF?! A few minutes later... Sasuke: What the... Ino comes out of nowhere and grab him Ino: I didn't know you felf that way Sasuke Sasuke: Oh @#$% She takes him somwhere else Naruto: Bye Sasuke. I knew you well.... Outside of the village, Higora and Kakashi stop a suspicious person ???: Heh Heh. It's been a long time you to Kakahsi: Byakugan... Higora: That means... The ??? reveals his face Higora: Cenda...Cenda Hyuga... Cenda: Bye He leaves Kakashi: He's fast Higora: let's go Kakashi: Right... They take off ...... Naruto: Sasuke? Sasuke: Naruto, If I end up with Ino or Sakura or both...kill me Naruto: Huh? Ino: Sasuke? Sasuke: OMFG WHY ME?! Ino: Naruto Move!!! Naruto: Transform!!! He transform into a nude verison of Sasuke. Ino turns red and faints Sasuke: Good job... Naruto: hey we have to see the changes now... Sasuke: Let's go... At the Hokage's home Naruto: Dad are they done Kiba: Huh Dad? Sasuke(Idiots it's so obvious) Naruto: You didn't know I'm his son? Kiba: ... 4th Hokage: Here are the listings Squad 7NarutoSasukeHinata Squad 8SakuraInoShikamaru Squad 9ChojiKibaShino Sasuke and Naruto: Phew Hinata(Blushes) yes Naruto: Sasuke look at team 8 They both look Naruto and Sasuke: YOU GOTTA BE KIDDING!! Naruto: I expect a trip to the hospital very soon... Sakura and Ino: NOOO!!! Shikamaru: What a drag Choji: I'm hungry... 4th Hokage: There you go. You're all dismissed They all leave except for Naruto Naruto: Hey Dad, why did you put Sakura and Ino on the same team. They'll beat each other up 4th Hokage: Yes but remember, you and Sasuke were rivals but become friends. Even though they'll be injury... Naruto: Fine... The next day... Naruto: Man where is Kakashi-sensei? Sasuke: Probaly looking for his book Naruto: You still have it Sasuke: Yep... Hinata: He's comming... Sasuke hides the book Naruto: It's about time Ka... Kakashi: Sasuke is that... Sasuke: No Kakashi: Ok... Naruto: Hey were's Higora Kakashi: He's busy Meanwhile... Cenda: They'll be going on a mission soon Itachi: That's when we strike Cenda: Yes... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mutant Monster RAEG-HAPYP Posted August 6, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 6, 2008 BUMP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Protoman Posted August 6, 2008 Report Share Posted August 6, 2008 this is really good keep up the good work Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silencerleader Posted August 7, 2008 Report Share Posted August 7, 2008 He transform into a nude verison of Sasuke. Ino turns red and faintsLOLzIt's pretty good/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mutant Monster RAEG-HAPYP Posted August 7, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 7, 2008 Episode 5 Cenda: Let's do this Itachi: I'll stay here... Cenda: OK... Meanwhile... Naruto: Kakashi-sensei is not here...Sasuke...is that... Sasuke: Yep his book Hinata; Someone's comming Naruto: Finally Kaka... It wasn't Kakashi... Cenda: Hard to belive a kid has the Nine Tailed Fox Naruto: What?! Cenda: Naruto...you're comming with us like it or not Sasuke: Take this...Fire Style: Fireball jutsu The fireball engulfed the area he was in Sasuke: Heh Cenda: Nice try He appread in front of Sasuke Cenda: Gentle Fist Style: Deadly Sound Strike Justu!! Sasuke: Gah!!! He was blown into a wall Naruto: Sasuke!!! Cenda: Gentle Fist!! Naruto: What the... Cenda: Gentle Fist Style: Deadly Lighting Strike Justu Naruto: Argh!!! He starts coughing up Blood Hinata: Naruto... Sasuke: C..Can't move Cenda: Gentle Fist Style: 8 Trigrams 64 Naruto was hit 64 times(duh) Naruto: urgh... Cenda hits him a few more times Sasuke: Enough!!!!!!!!!! Chakra starts buliding in his right hand Sasuke: CHIDORI!!!!!!!!!! Cenda grabs him and throws him Cenda: Take this!!! Higora: Water Style: Water Shark Bomb Justu Cenda W...wha... Higora: I finally found you. Cenda: No point staying then...bye higora: he left...oh well..first thing is naruto... Hinata: How is he? Higora: He's on the verge of death. I have to get him to the hospital fast he takes naruto to the hosptial Later... Hinata: So...how's he doing? Higora: He woke up a while ago... He leads her to naruto's room... Sakura: Higora-sensei Higora: So you here to see him too? Sasuke: yep They enter Hinata(what am I gonna say. OMFG...) Naruto: Oh hi Hinata.... She reliases that she's right next to naruto's bed Hinata(blushes) N..Naruto...I'm glad that you're ok. If anything happend to you..I'd... Naruto: GO on Hinata faints Sasuke: You got be kidding.... Sakura: Hey kakashi-sensei isn't answering his radio Higora: He's probaly listening to music again... (author's note: XD) Higora: Anyway...Naruto...you were lucky Naruto: Huh Tsunade: You were very close to death Naruto(When did grandma Tsunade get here..oh well) what do you mean? Higora: If Tsunade wasn't here, you'd would have died... Meanwhile:... Orochimaru: We wait for our change to strike kabuto: understood .... Higora: I'll let you kids have some alone time Naruto: Man I can't train...I can't go on any missions...this sucks... Sasuke: At least you didn't die... Naruto: I'm hungry Sakura: where did he go? Sasuke: Oh @#$% He's fast Sakura: I guess he's been training a lot to get jonin level speed. Sasuke: Where did Hinata go? Sakura: She must have gone after Naruto Sasuke: Of course...she does have a crush on him after all... Sakura: Really? Sasuke(It's so obvious...) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silencerleader Posted August 7, 2008 Report Share Posted August 7, 2008 Cenda: Gentle Fist!!(author's note: XD)ROFL *HAHAHAHA*LOL/10Some errors like sll instead of all. XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
evil D Posted August 9, 2008 Report Share Posted August 9, 2008 Kakashi listening to music, lol 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ryukei Posted August 10, 2008 Report Share Posted August 10, 2008 One thing I don't get. I realize this is a fanfict, but you have mixed up past and future completely. Naruto didn't know Rasengan at this time. Zabuza is already dead also. I only read the first three. They are good. But that confused me personally. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mutant Monster RAEG-HAPYP Posted August 10, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 10, 2008 Oh Hi. I'll get ep 6 when I get back from NJ which I'll return tommrow Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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