Dark Angel Kimor Posted August 2, 2008 Report Share Posted August 2, 2008 here it is: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bringer Of The Apocalypse Posted August 2, 2008 Report Share Posted August 2, 2008 Cool pic but make it have an effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luna Lovegood Posted August 2, 2008 Report Share Posted August 2, 2008 I like it. But krop the pic so no bordet, TRy effect.7.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
csaman3 Posted August 2, 2008 Report Share Posted August 2, 2008 Good card like Funk*Lord said crop the pictureAdd some OCG ( Official Card Grammer ) like Apocalypse said and change the fusion names from " Dragon 1 " and " Dragon 2 " to something elselet me be the first to introduce you to the YCMif you need anything, just PM ( Private Message ) me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
moneypony Posted August 2, 2008 Report Share Posted August 2, 2008 crop the picture so it won't have a border,quite good for a first card but try giving it a effect because most people don't want to fuse 2 monsters just to make a powerful fusion-vanilla monster.8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Angel Kimor Posted August 2, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 2, 2008 l added the fusion materials. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mutant Monster RAEG-HAPYP Posted August 2, 2008 Report Share Posted August 2, 2008 Very good for your first cards. 8.1/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Angel Kimor Posted August 2, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 2, 2008 thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ERIC_B Posted August 2, 2008 Report Share Posted August 2, 2008 not bad. i really like what u did with the pics. 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-DG- Posted August 2, 2008 Report Share Posted August 2, 2008 They're okay.not the greatest but pretty good(YCM dude is my little bro) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted August 2, 2008 Report Share Posted August 2, 2008 OCG errors. Pics could be better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-DG- Posted August 2, 2008 Report Share Posted August 2, 2008 he is my bro.I try to help him with the OCG when i can. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-DG- Posted August 2, 2008 Report Share Posted August 2, 2008 here is an edited version of your card,little bro:Url:http://img229.imageshack.us/img229/9615/124008zp3.jpguse this one before it: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silas Angel Posted August 2, 2008 Report Share Posted August 2, 2008 yea.. obvious ocg/grammar issues.. and the pics are just gerat! ^_^ you have potential Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-DG- Posted August 2, 2008 Report Share Posted August 2, 2008 .................... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
57Matt57 Posted August 2, 2008 Report Share Posted August 2, 2008 i see obvious OCG errors on the fusiuon material cards. Great pics though Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DGoser Posted August 2, 2008 Report Share Posted August 2, 2008 The Fusion Material Monsters have decent effects considering their purpose. Spirit Dragon 1 is a tad overpowered, but I don't have any immediate ideas for changing that. Maybe add a Gellenduo self-destruct effect or something similar. The Fusion Monster's effect should read "This card cannot attack your opponent directly except by Tributing 1 Dragon-Type Monster you control. This card is unaffected by Spell and Trap cards." Also, that second effect of the Fusion Monster makes it way too overpowered- you can't have a beatstick that can't be destroyed by Monster removal. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted August 3, 2008 Report Share Posted August 3, 2008 First pic is bad, the others are overused.Effects too simple.7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lazer Yoshi Posted August 3, 2008 Report Share Posted August 3, 2008 Just work on OCG, otherwise really good for someone new!!! To get you started, Ill give you a 10/10 for effort :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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