Spellcasters of the future. (Now updated)

[shogunboy]

 

After making 50 cards full of IMBA, OCG errors, and general picture quality issues, I decided to go look into 4chan for some better picture, and luckly found this picture yesterday. I took the time look into the OCG/Grammer guide with card creation guidelines on how to make a proper card. I heard members on the forums here are somewhat harsh in OCG and picture department for grading, so I knew I can't just post a card without being heavily criticized. Hope my time wasn't a waste for you guys. I will be taking my time to do more and revising my old spellcasters (warrior types mostly). The last source the image is from is 4chan, and the people on 4chan never mention the name. The artist will remain anonymous until I can find the name due to a rule I didn't look at until now. I apologize if I was suppose to put an artist name, even though I did have a disclaimer on the card saying that image is not my ownership.

Edit: I will take any suggestions, as Multi effect cards are not natural for me to make yet, but I will still continue to improve my skill as a card maker.

Card Effect

Tuner + 1 or more Non-Turner monster

In Battle Phase, if opponent activates a spell or trap card to negate this monster's attack, once per turn, this card negates the effect of the card.

 

Edit 2: Cards are moved to a new thread, but that doesn't matter.

[Guest Welche]

good for a newb, as in, you only have 2 posts!

[shogunboy]

I saw that people are usually harsh for cards that are blury, OCG errors, and just the idea. I mean, I seen quite a few Naruto cards that are horrible. How I decided to make the card was from a dream I was in 5D for some reason. Odd isn't it?

[Saturn of Elemia]

Not too bad. Why is there such a large gap in the text? For such a short effect, the text would not be that small. Image is cute. OCG is off. It could go:

 

1 Tuner monster + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters

This card's attack cannot be negated by the effect of a Spell or Trap Card.

 

The effect is short and basic. For future cards, try to make it more elaborate and exciting. :D

 

Really good for a new member. Keep up the good work.

 

9.5/10 8)

[shogunboy]

I usually leave the long effect text to my friend who does realistic cards. After reading the official OCG/grammer sticky, I knew I should start out simple just enough so I don't over do it. My effect cards will be still worked on, as my last 50 cards are not show worthly for this forum. I could have gone with a certain tuner monster, but the picture is pending. Well, I am off reviving and reviewing cards that have not gotten attention yet.

[Saturn of Elemia]

Make sure NOT to revive threads that are over a week old or you will get in SERIOUS trouble. 8)

[shogunboy]

I usually revive the first two pages as a start, but I just hate others being ignored just because of their mistakes. Some may have the desire to create cards, but just need help. I will avoid the deep pages, since time is vital.

 

Edit: Update 1 and 2 are now online offically. I apolgize if the magic card is a bit blurry, but the art was perfect to become a spell card.

[shogunboy]

A bump on update three is going to be on soon.