Arekku_Koro Posted August 3, 2008 Report Share Posted August 3, 2008 [align=center] Novas------- "When this card is Summoned you may place 1 Magma Counter on 1 Face-Up Spell Card. During your next Standby Phase, destroy all Face-Up Spell Cards with Magma Counter's on them." "When this card is Summoned, you can place 1 Magma Counter on 1 Face-up Monster Card on your opponent's side of the field. During your next Standby Phase, destroy all Face-up Monster Cards with Magma Counter('s) on them." "When this card is Summoned, you can place 1 Magma Counter on 1 Face-down Spell or Trap card on your opponent's side of the field. During your next Standby Phase, destroy all Face-down Spell or Trap Cards that have Magma Counter('s) on them." "When this card is Summoned, you can place 1 Super-Nova Counter on 1 Face-up Monster. During your next Standby Phase, destroy all Monster's with Super-Nova Counters on them, and inflict damage to your opponent equal to the ATK of the destroyed monster." Nova cards work with an odd principle of heat. What these cards do, pretty much, is microwave the card. By that I mean, these cards speed up the molecules of other cards, causing them to overheat and explode. Magma counters mark the start of this procedure. Since it takes time, the burning is not complete until the next turn. I used Correct OCG, I believe. I know I proofread it about 5 times, lol. I'll probably make more Nova's. I would have applied a holo, but I deemed it unnescacary for this card, seeing as how it is just a taste of this new archetype. Besides, it's just a rare. As for the pic, I created the background myself, and I got the render at Animerenders. Unions------Once per turn, you can equip this card to a face-up "Yomi Ship" monster card you control, or unequip it, and Special Summon this card in face-up Attack Position. While equipped to a monster by this effect, when that monster destroys a monster by it's card effect and sends it to the Graveyard, inflict damage to your opponent equal to the ATK of the destroyed monster. Once per turn, you can equip this card to a Warrior-type Monster you control, OR unequip it to Special Summon this card in face-up Attack Position. While equipped to a monster by this card's effect, that monster gains ATK equal to the ATK of this card. Once per turn, during your Main Phase, if you control this monster on the field, you can equip it to any Monster you control as an Equip Spell Card OR unequip the Union equipment and Special Summon this card in face-up Attack Position. While equipped to a monster by this card's effect, when that Monster destroys a card as a result of battle, increase your Life-Ponts by 500. Once per turn, during your Main Phase, if you control this card on the field, you can equip it to one of your Warrior-type Monsters as an Equip Spell Card, OR unequip the Union equipment and Special Summon this card in face-up Attack Position. When equipped to a monster by this card's effect, that monster gains 600 ATK. If the equipped monster is EARTH-type, it gains 800 ATK. Once per turn, you can equip this card to a face-up Dragon-Type monster you control, or unequip it, and Special Summon this card in face-up Attack Position. While equipped to a monster by this effect, you can Draw 1 Extra Card for each Dragon-Type Monster you control. Kuruba's Cards--------------When this card is Summoned, you may add 1 Equip Spell-Card from your Graveyard to your hand. When this card is Summoned, you may send 1 Spell-Card from your hand to the Graveyard. You may than add 1 Equip-Spell card from your deck to your hand. You must then shuffle your deck. Misc.-----When this card destroys a Monster as a result of battle, that card is sent to your Graveyard.[/align] [spoiler=Preview of Chp.1] Gale, Chapter 1: The Wind Echoes with Devious Intent! As the man with the ring commands, a Hero Takes Flight! A man with dark, silvery hair skidded down a mountainside, approaching a small village. "Which one of you is Gale Balmont?" The man said, eyeing the town's frightened inhabitants, who all gathered in Town Square to protest the Arrival of this seemingly Dangerous man. "Like Heck we'll tell you!" One of the villagers yelled out from the crowd. "I assume that is commoner slang for "Yes, We will kinfly hand him over." The man retorted. "If their is additional meaning in that phrase, it will be bad news for you." "I can take you in a fight!" The ealderly villager cryed, eager to protect this Gabe fellow. The Man threw a rectangular card to the ground, and the crowd gasped. "D-Soil, Activate" The man said. And out from the space where he threw the card came a young woman Identical to the card's picture. "Nova Witch, Burn him down!" The man commanded. The young girl from the card drew her Staff, and it's gem sparkled red. "I'm right here!" A small boy said. "I'm Gale Balmont!" He cryed, triumphantly. "Good, I suppose their is no intent for me to kill this elder."The man said. "Duel Soil, Release!" He sad, as the girl evaporated into the card. The man picked it up, and smirked. "I assume you'll come quitely" He said. "You assumed wrong, regal." The boy said, quietly. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RestLess-BoTics Posted August 3, 2008 Report Share Posted August 3, 2008 A simple, yet effective card.Excellent job. :) -Glasstin Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doom™ Posted August 3, 2008 Report Share Posted August 3, 2008 You need Comma ( ", " ) after "Summoned" It's not may, it's "can" You need space after Pyro. Otherwise, not bad. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Arekku_Koro Posted August 3, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 3, 2008 Thank You. I will remember those things, as I am going to continue making these cards. I'ts to late to do it over, lol. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Arekku_Koro Posted August 3, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 3, 2008 bump. And I fixed OCG. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted August 3, 2008 Report Share Posted August 3, 2008 Great card, 8.5/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Arekku_Koro Posted August 3, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 3, 2008 Thanks. You, sir, know your cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucas Maximus Posted August 3, 2008 Report Share Posted August 3, 2008 face-up not Face-Up. Other than that, this looks pretty good. It's basic, but effective. Nice pic, too. ;) G'job, Arekku. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shonenhikada Posted August 3, 2008 Report Share Posted August 3, 2008 The card effect is kinda meehish like how many people play continuous spells these days. -------------------------------------------------------------------Something is coming...( ROD) Hint "I shall protect the pharaoh if it's the last thing i do" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Arekku_Koro Posted August 3, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 3, 2008 Thank you both. I am making 2 more as we speak. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MILSS Posted August 3, 2008 Report Share Posted August 3, 2008 Cool card!8) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted August 3, 2008 Report Share Posted August 3, 2008 Whys the 1st one magma and the other 2 nova? =S Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bury the year Posted August 3, 2008 Report Share Posted August 3, 2008 Too many caps, and you don't need a new sub-type. 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Digital.Simplicity. Posted August 3, 2008 Report Share Posted August 3, 2008 awesome 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Arekku_Koro Posted August 4, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 4, 2008 Thanks. I got rid of the subtype, and the OCG is correct. I used the official thread. I changed the purpose of the thread... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saturn of Elemia Posted August 4, 2008 Report Share Posted August 4, 2008 Little powerful, but I like the idea. The images are beautiful. OCG errors have been mentioned. 9.9/10. Amazing job! 8) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Arekku_Koro Posted August 4, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 4, 2008 Wow. Thanks! That means alot coming from you, Saturn-san. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Arekku_Koro Posted August 4, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 4, 2008 Sorry to Double Post, but I added quite a bit. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mutant Monster RAEG-HAPYP Posted August 4, 2008 Report Share Posted August 4, 2008 OMG these are awesome. FINNALY some good cards today 20/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliminateHRN Posted August 4, 2008 Report Share Posted August 4, 2008 They are cool. Nice pics though a few errors (they are pointed out already though). 9/10 for the errors. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Arekku_Koro Posted August 4, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 4, 2008 Thank you both. I'm making more as we speak. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Arekku_Koro Posted August 4, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 4, 2008 Sorry to DP, but added 2 cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyhe Posted August 5, 2008 Report Share Posted August 5, 2008 astounding cards!must see your fanfic soon... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Arekku_Koro Posted August 5, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 5, 2008 Thanks. I saw your comments, lol. The next "Chapter" will be done, once I make more cards, :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Arekku_Koro Posted August 7, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 7, 2008 bump. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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