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ultimate black luster soldier


Riccardo Hoeksma

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2 tribute + inf atk The word overpowered come to mind and I am ok with ormal, but not more powerful that blue eyes you cant make limited editions and OCG or official card grammer

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4/10. It`s not absolutely terrible, though a lot of work is needed. Don`t worry though, I have advice. :)

 

#1: Card is slightly unoriginal since it is based off Black Luster Soldier. You may want to make your own, original monster.

 

#2: "worrior" s/b "Warrior"

 

#3: Capitalization errors

 

#4: ∞ attack is usually not a good idea as it makes the card outrageously overpowered. 3500 sounds a bit better.

 

#5: "Limited Edision" s/b "Limited Edition"

 

I hope you found this helpful. :)

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