LostHope123 Posted August 4, 2008 Report Share Posted August 4, 2008 It looks too powerful, but it is a ritual card, and you DO have to pay 4000 life points to summon it. So, I don't really recommend basing your deck strategy on it. If it actually WAS a card, it would only be used as a last resort, if you have the life points. Anyways, this is Shizuma from Strawberry Panic. I found the picture on yahoo images, and I can't find the picture again. So, who's it is, I don't know. I'm not taking credit for it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The D Man Posted August 4, 2008 Report Share Posted August 4, 2008 bad 2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LostHope123 Posted August 4, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 4, 2008 I was just testing things out. I didn't know what to put on it, so I asked my friend to help. I used his idea. Not mine. I probably should add that to the main post...I'm not very creative. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sars Posted August 4, 2008 Report Share Posted August 4, 2008 Its good for a starter. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
moneypony Posted August 4, 2008 Report Share Posted August 4, 2008 bad 1/10 but it's your first card so it won't count but its not too overpowered,just change the multiplyer to 300 or 200 because with x500 the max is 6000 with 300x-3,600 200x-2,400 and without the 4,000 LP effect then it is a bit balanced card because you would need to tribute an Egyptian god card just to make a 3,600 or 2,400 ATK monster. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pikachu Posted August 5, 2008 Report Share Posted August 5, 2008 way too overpowered, even with the life point giveaway thingbut....blurry pic, and nice try Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zigzix Posted August 5, 2008 Report Share Posted August 5, 2008 3/10 it shouldnt really be a lvl 1 and it shouldnt be a human either try not to make up types Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zain_reddevil Posted August 5, 2008 Report Share Posted August 5, 2008 really bad card, bad picture - too blurry, overpowered, bad ocg, dont make up types...so a 3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
QueenIsAGreatBand Posted August 5, 2008 Report Share Posted August 5, 2008 Not bad for being your 1st try (compared to my 1st wich was upstraight awful ('^_^) ). 6.5/10 Things to improve:More stars, 3 or 4 would be nice.Find a better pic, try Google or Flickr.Don't use fake types. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TurboTom Posted August 10, 2008 Report Share Posted August 10, 2008 A few grammer problems there, and Queenisagreatband is right, it needs more stars, and also take out the "Sacrifice 4000 Life Points" part, as in the beggining of the duel, you only have 4000 Life Points, so by summoning that card, you would automaticly lose. However, keep trying ur best with this, and if i was u, if u have any REAL yugioh cards in ur house somehwhere, use that for not only ideas, but also to see what type of grammer ur sopposed to use. Normally i'd give u a 3/10, but since i really, really, really like Ritual cards, its gonna be 4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
staticrevenger Posted August 10, 2008 Report Share Posted August 10, 2008 4/10 it needs improvement but on the right track Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted August 11, 2008 Report Share Posted August 11, 2008 Pic could be better and the type probably should be Spellcaster. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted August 11, 2008 Report Share Posted August 11, 2008 The pic is blurry. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cortana365 Posted August 11, 2008 Report Share Posted August 11, 2008 Nice attempt. Don't you hate those idiots who tell you not to use fake types? Talk about creative Nazism. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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