Arekku_Koro Posted August 5, 2008 Report Share Posted August 5, 2008 [b][align=center]Gale, Chapter 1: The Wind Echoes with Devious Intent! As the man with the ring commands, a Hero Takes Flight!~ Opening Theme: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=W1tQdZbnbAs A man with dark, silvery hair skidded down a mountainside, approaching a small village. "Which one of you is Gale Balmont?" The man said, eyeing the town's frightened inhabitants, who all gathered in Town Square to protest the Arrival of this seemingly Dangerous man. "Like Heck we'll tell you!" One of the villagers yelled out from the crowd. "I assume that is commoner slang for "Yes, We will kinfly hand him over." The man retorted. "If their is additional meaning in that phrase, it will be bad news for you." "I can take you in a fight!" The ealderly villager cryed, eager to protect this Gabe fellow. The Man threw a rectangular card to the ground, and the crowd gasped. "D-Soil, Activate" The man said. And out from the space where he threw the card came a young woman Identical to the card's picture. [img]http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r81/masaru1/NovaWitch-1.jpg[/img] "Nova Witch, Burn him down!" The man commanded. The young girl from the card drew her Staff, and it's gem sparkled red. "I'm right here!" A small boy said. "I'm Gale Balmont!" He cryed, triumphantly. "Good, I suppose their is no intent for me to kill this elder."The man said. "Duel Soil, Release!" He sad, as the girl evaporated into the card. The man picked it up, and smirked. "I assume you'll come quitely" He said. "You assumed wrong, regal." The boy said, quietly. "What was that?" The man said, placing his hand over his deck-pocket. "Nothing." Gale said. "If you don't want to go, beat me in a duel." The man said, from the blue. ArekkuNote: Sounds Devious, does it not? "WHa--What are you talking about?"Gale said. "You have cards, do you not?" The man asked. "Ya, well...... It's strange for someone like you to ask for a duel. You don't look like the duelist type." "You.... You need to watch your mouth." The man said, obviously angered. "Look, I'll duel you. Just like I dueled that Biker a month ago." Gale Smirked. "And I'll win, two." He said. "Alright. Let's start." The two drew Five cards, and Gale made his move. "I draw." Gale said. "I summon Yomi Ship! In Attack Mode!" [img]http://images.wikia.com/yugioh/images/d/df/YomiShipPGD-EN-C.jpg[/img] "And I set one card!" He said. "Turn End!" "I summon Nova Geisha!" The man replied, eager to show his rival his place.. [img]http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r81/masaru1/NovaGeisha.jpg[/img] "I use his effect to place 1 Magma Counter on your Yomi Ship." The man said. "Magma Counter?" Gale said. "Whatever." "I draw!" Gale said. "I summon Captain of Yomi-Kuroneko!" Gale cryed. [img]http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r81/masaru1/CaptainofYomi-Kuroneko.png[/img] "Kuroneko, Equip yourself to Yomi Ship!" Gale said, triumphantly. "Turn End!" "Due to my Nova Geisha's effect, All cards with Magma counters are destroyed!" "My Yomi Ship!" Gale cryed out, distraught at his cards destrucion. "I sacrifice Nova Geisha to Tribute Summon Nova Priestess in ATK mode!" [img]http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r81/masaru1/NovaPriestess.png[/img] "I place the Magma counter on your Face-Down!" The man said, enraged at Gale. His eyes where glowing a vibrant green. "Crap...Now I only have one turn to use my Face-Down...." Gale sighed. He knew if he got to worked up, he would never win. Gale closed his eyes. When they opened, they were a bright, vibrant blue. "What the heck...?" The man said, in awe of Gale's changing eyes. "Alter Drive!" Gale Cried Out, his card glowing on the ground. "His Yomi Ship.... It's come back from the graveyard???" The man asked, confused and scared. " Magnificant 7, Number 3." Gale said, robotically. "Gale, the Union." Ending Theme: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=P7kOK5iWaJM ArekkuNote: To be continued, if this is well liked. [/b][/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Καsτοr Posted August 5, 2008 Report Share Posted August 5, 2008 Nice, can't wait to see more of the duel. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gogeta™ Posted August 5, 2008 Report Share Posted August 5, 2008 Good story, well orginized, this is a 10/10 Fan Fic. Also good work on the cards the Captain of Yomi-Kuroneko pic is well done. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Arekku_Koro Posted August 5, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 5, 2008 Thank you both. And if you think that was organized, wait tell my next "chapter". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Καsτοr Posted August 5, 2008 Report Share Posted August 5, 2008 Yay for next Chapter! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyhe Posted August 5, 2008 Report Share Posted August 5, 2008 good fanfic,though I must point out the flaws seen -Nova Geisha could easily destroy Yomi Ship-When a monster equipped with an Union monster were to be destroyed, the union monster takes the hit Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Arekku_Koro Posted August 5, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 5, 2008 good fanfic' date='though I must point out the flaws seen -Nova Geisha could easily destroy Yomi Ship-When a monster equipped with an Union monster were to be destroyed, the union monster takes the hit[/quote'] That's Because "The Man" is extremely flashy, and wants to be entertained mpre than he wants to win. And I wasn't aware of that, lol. But thank you very much for reading. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bury the year Posted August 12, 2008 Report Share Posted August 12, 2008 Good plot. However, middle-alignment + frequent line breaks = major visual headache. Fix one or the other, please.EDIT: Didn't realize how old this was, but it was at the bottom at the page, so, it's okay, right? :? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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