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Feel free to make a character bio. Any who give a character bio get 1 Reputation, leave comments about the story and I'll throw in 10 points.

 

[spoiler=Chapter One] To the present day the pyrimids of Egypt stand tall. Acheologist have studyd most of the pyrimids and discovered the ancient secrets of the mighty Pharaoh's. Many believe there is not much left to know about Egypt's history but today marks the beginning of a new discovery.

 

Tren and his friend are Reo are in the down town area. The sun sets and the sky turns into magnificent colors of red and orange. As Tren and Reo head home they notice 2 cards at the end of the side walk.

 

Tren: "Hey check it out cards!" Tren runs to the end of the side walk and pics up the card. "There's no name, no effect. What gives why are these cards blank?"

 

Reo takes one of the blank cards and examines it. "That's odd, maybe someone was trying to counterfeits cards and dropped these." Reo scratched his head and placed the card in his pocket. He smiles and looks a Tren. "Hey I know its getting late but looking at these cards makes me want to duel."

 

Tren puts the card in his pocket as well and opens his deck box. "Good thing I have my duel disk in my back pack. Okay your on, don't forget how I always kick your butt!" Tren puts on his Duel Disk and shuffles his deck.

 

Reo puts on his Duel Disk and shuffles his deck. The sky becomes a deeper redish orange and the sun sets lower. "Alright Tren get ready for the but kickn' of a life time."

 

Tren: "yeah what ever now lets get started!"

 

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Tren takes first draw. "I play Queen's Knight in attack mode (ATK/1500 DEF/1600 LIGHT Warrior). I'll end my turn with 2 face-down cards." Tren looked completely confident in his ability to beat Reo. Birds flew in the sky above as the sun set lower and the sky became a deeper red.

 

Reo thought about Tren's move as he drew his card. "The old Queen's Knight card huh, well this should be a classic game." Reo played a card. "I'll summon Cyber Knight in attack mode (ATK/1800 DEF/950 DARK Machine). Cyber Knight attack Queen's Knight with Knight Cyber Slash!!" Reo's monster headed for Tren's monster but didn't worry a bit about the attack.

 

Tren: "Really not the brightest move on Earth but hey your still new to the game. I activate my Trap: Gardna Shield Defense!" Here's how the effect works:

"When a monster on your side of the field is selected as an attack target, negate the attack and remove from play the attack target. The next card you draw is removed from play."

 

Reo: "You just lost your monster and the next card you draw. That seems like a pretty dumb move if you ask me." Reo looks at his cards but sees nothing of use. "I guess I end my turn."

 

Tren: "I draw, now this card is removed from play (Jack's Knight ATK/1900 DEF/1000 LIGHT Warrior). I activate the Spell Card Royal Greed. (Effect: Draw 2 cards. These card are removed from play during the end of your turn.). Now lets see what we have here I summon King's Knight in attack mode (ATK/1600 DEF/1400 LIGHT Warrior Effect Monster) and D.D Polymerization (Effect: When this card is removed from play, during your next turn if you have monster removed from play that are listed as Fusion Material monsters you may Fusion Summon the appropriate Fusion Monster from the Extra Deck (Fusion Deck) during your Standby Phase.).

 

Reo(thinking): "Wonder what cards he drew? He looks happy about his hand."

 

Tren: "Get ready for a royal beat down. Your going to be the first to feel the power of my Knight of Aces! Now I activate my face-down trap: King's Power Blade (Effect: Increase the ATK of all monster with "King's Knight", "Queen's Knight, or "Jack's Knight in the card name by 600 points until the end of your turn.) King's Knight is now at 2200 ATK. ATTACK REO'S CYBER KNIGHT NOW!!"

 

King's Knight attack a destroys Reo's monster.

 

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Reo: "Nice move but you still loose your monster and the other card you have." Reo thinks that Tren is now weak and defensless but Tren still has a ace in the hole.

 

Tren (Thinking): "Everything is perfect, next turn I'll blow Reo away with my super new card."

 

To be continued...

 

 

[spoiler=Chapter Two]

 

The sun is gone and Tren and Reo's duel continues with Tren ahead by 300 Life Points.

 

Reo: "I draw and play, Luster Knight (ATK/2000 DEF/1500 EARTH Warrior Effect: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned when there are no cards on your side of the field.). Now I activate the Spell Card, Thousand Sword's (Effect: Inflict damage to your opponent equal to the number of Warrior-Type monsters on your side of the field x 500.) now you take 500 damage."

 

Tren: "Heh that's nothing I cant Handel."

 

Reo: "LUSTER KNIGHT ATTACK!" The Knight holds up his mighty blade and charges straight towards Tren. The attack successful Tren looses 2000 Life Points. "Now that's what I call direct damage! I'll end my turn now."

 

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Tren draws his card. "I activate the effect of D.D Polymerization, now I can fuse King's Knight, Queen's Knight, and Jack's Knight to create the almighty Arcana Knight Joker (ATK/3800 DEF/2500 LIGHT Fusion Warrior Effect!" The Arcana Knight stood ready to take down Reo's monster. "ATTACK REO'S MONSTER NOW!!!

 

Reo: "Aw CARP!!!" Reo takes 1800 damage, the smoke clears and Tren stands tall with a smirk on his face. "Man your good, you should go pro or something like Yugi or Kaiba."

 

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Tren: "Naaa I just duel for fun. I'm not into being a big star or anything. Now I place one card face-down and end my turn.

 

Reo looks at Tren's monster. "That sure is a mighty powerful card he has. No worries I can take it down with this, I SUMMON MY RANDOM EXPLOSIVE (ATK/0 DEF/0 FIRE Machine Effect: Flip a coin 3 times if the greater result is heads destroy 1 card on your opponent's field. If the greater result is tales take 1000 damage.).

 

Tren: "Your taking a big risk, I mean if the flip is in my favor you take 1000 damage and next turn my Knight wipes you out clean."

 

Reo: "Yeah I know but that's the fun of taking a risk. Coin Flip go!!!" The first Flip is heads, the second tales and the final flip was-"Wha--Tren look behind you!"

 

Tren: "What the heck who--" Tren looked at the man and jumped back. The card holograms shut down and the man stepped into the street light.

 

????: I'm sorry if I startled you. My name is Dr. Wayne, Is an archaeologist who studies Egypt."

 

Tren: "So uhhh what do you want? Wait arent you my fathers friend he always talks about?"

 

Dr.Wayne: "Yes, I'm afraid I have bad new. You see...your father was crushed by massive boulders when he activated a trap."

 

Tren looked at Dr. Wayne for a long time. He felt as if his whole world had fallen apart. The moon out in the open of the night sky a small breeze passed by. Tren walks away from the doctor and goes home, Reo walks away and so does Reo.

 

Reo: "Hmmmm" Reo flips his coin one last time. "Man its tales, good thing the duel never finished."

 

Tren Sits in his room alone. "Damn, first mom and now you. You said this new pyramid might be dangerous, the Pyramid of Legendary Knights." Tren lays down and tries to sleep. He looks out the window and looks at the moon.

 

To be continued...

 

 

[spoiler=Chapter Three]Tren is still up in his room. Its only been 1 hour sence he heard the words. The words that he pains to think about. He looks out side and feels his soul slipping away into the Moon lite night sky.

 

Tren goes down stairs and looks at the kitchen table. "This is the first place...I ever dueled. He gave me the Knight Cards and we dueled. Its all clouded memories now, after mom died you helped me get through it. Now what? How do I get through this, your not here." Tren hoped on the couch as the thoughts of his father being gone made him loose his balence. "Im in to much pain to yell, I'm in too much pain to sleep, I'm just enduring the pain. Its consuming me my body is weak. I feel as if I lost my will to live. Iv lost meaning and purpose in this world. I have no one and nothing, just my cards that will forever remind me of you."

 

????: Not all is lost. "Deep voice broke the silence Tren was trying to enjoy. The cloaked figure entered the room and seemed to be looking at Tren. The cloaked figure stood across from Tren. A table standing between them, Tren looked hard to see the dark clocked man. Tren was not the least bit scared but more confused.

 

Tren: "I must be seeing things (Or just going crazy). Who are you?" Tren stood up in a strong position as if he where telling the man to not mess with him. He clenched his fist tight and spoke again. "Who are you." his voice in a was dry and deeper.

 

????: "You have meaning, existence, you will find out soon. It will all be clear to you. Everything happens for a reason, you are the hero that will be born tomorrow. The one who will learn his destiny, the Knight who will cut through the darkness." The cloaked person stepped back and slipped into the shadows, vanishing.

 

Tren: "I need some sleep." Tren went back to his room tired, confused, sad, he couldn't properly grasp an understanding of all the emotions he had. He really couldn't understand anything. The words of the clocked man still running like a mad bull in his head. "A Knight." Tren tried to think of his father but the still kept thinking about the word "Knight". Tren laid down a went to sleep, his dreams filled of memories of his father. He tossed and turned in his bed. "Dad, don't die." He repeated the same words in his sleep all night.

 

The next day...

 

 

Reo biked his way to Tren's house to see how he was doing. He pulled up to Tren's house and looked up to see Tren looking out the window. "Maybe I should just go."

 

Tren opens the door and invites his friend in. "Well, you wanna come in?" In the house Tren and Reo enjoy some cold cereal. The only sound that can be heard is the sound of the spoons tapping against the bowls and the low crunch sound of the cereal. The boys don't look at each other the whole time and just eat.

 

Tren: "If you don't mind I need to do something. So--"

 

Reo: "Yeah, I'll leave." Reo leave looking back at Tren, realizing just how changed he has become in one night. "I'm sorry Tren." Reo gets on his bike and rides away, Tren looking at the sky as the suns shines bright.

 

Tren: "Today I have been reborn a Knight. I am no longer who I was yesterday, although this is the beginning of my change. I at the start of my new journey, A Knight.

 

 

To be continued...

 

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Poor Tren. Reminds me of the Baudelaires. You didn't really do that moment justice, I think.

 

Write in novel format. Novel format >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> script format.

 

The spelling and flow need work.

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Ryko or a new character?

 

Ryko, but i'm also thinking of a few new Characters all split From Ryko

 

EDIT: a Little Heads up, Ryko had a Change of attire that Gained him some New Powers, and His decklist is Changed a little, i made a new card, and He is Now Married to a Legendary Spirit inside the New Robe Ryko's Wearing, Named Yurei, Ryko now carries the Ability to Create Dust that Manipulates people Depending on the color and Transform into almost any animal

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