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[.:Abarai Renji:.]

This is my very first fan fic so i hope you like it.

 

 

 

[align=center]Chapter 1:The Heroes Collide.

 

6 months has passed since the most powerful device in the whole universe, The Omnitrix, was sent to the planet Earth. Since that day, the ultimate weapon, the only thing capable of restoring peace to the universe, or bringing it to it´s knees begging for mercy, was lost. Now, destiny has placed it in the hands of one of the most unthinkable persons to have such powers to command, but in the same time, perhaps, was the only ideal choice.

 

And his name, is Ben Tennyson.

 

 

 

Radio Announcer:´´Good morning New York City, this is Calvin Brooks speaking to you live from the NY News Center today on this beautiful, sunny day. Yes, you heard it good folks, this sunny day in the month of June. And believe when i say it´s hot today, 30 degrees of sunlight and a stunning 19.5 degrees in the shade! This is definently not a day to be stuck in a car all day, so i hope you all are wearing light clothing and have your AC´s up and running, cause here is some great music coming your w... ``

 

Ben:[turns off the radio] ´´Yea right, like they know how it feels to be stuck in a car all day. ``

 

Gwen:´´Well, it wasn´t MY idea to turn into Grey Matter and wreck the air conditioner was it? ``

 

Ben:´´Hey, knock it off Gwen! I was just trying to make this ride endurable! I didn´t know that the air conditioner was THAT complicated! ``

 

Max:´´Will you two stop argueing with each other already? We´re only half-way there. ``

 

Gwen:´´Tell Ben to stop it, he started it!``

 

Ben:´´Did not! ``

 

Gwen:´´Did too! ``

 

Max:´´I don´t care who started it, I´m the one who stops it! ``

 

Gwen and Ben:´´Sorry grandpa. ``

 

It has been a long, dull journey for the Tennysons, but soon they would arrive in New York, where they would spend the rest of their vacation before school started. Ben has been looking forward to this all the way there, because this would mean a golden chance for him to participate in the great Sumo Slammer Convention which has recently arrived to New York.

 

Ben:´´Are we there yet? ``

 

Max:´´Almost there Ben. When we get to the top of that hill, we should be able to see the city. ``

 

And as promised, when they got to the top, they were all able to see the cities stretching for miles and miles over.

 

Ben:´´Wow! I didn´t know that it was this big! ``

 

Max:´´Well, now you know it! It´s been a long time, hasn´t it? ``

 

Ben:´´Yeah! I could use a break. My feet hurts of all the alien butt-kicking! ``

 

Suddenly, all the traffic stopped, and everyone started screaming and pointing up at a nearby construction site.

 

Ben:´´Hey, what gives?! ``

 

Ben and Max got out of the Rustbucket and looked at the construction site. There were two men hanging helplessly from a couple of chains.

 

Max:´´Looks like they need help. Think you can fix it? ``

 

Ben:´´No problem! Time to go Stinkfly! ``

 

Ben spinned at the Omnitrix a bit and then smashed down a big button at the center. Then, in a big green flash, he transformed into Stinkfly.

 

Ben/Stinkfly:´´Let´s do this! ``

 

And with those words, he buzzed off as fast as he could. He knew that if he didn´t hurry, those men would be done for it. As he was getting closer to the construction site, he failed to notice that something was closing up on him. And suddenly, something flew right past him at a tremendous speed, almost spinning him out of control.

 

Ben/Stinkfly:´´Whoa! What was that?! ``

 

As he regained control of himself, he saw what looked like a 15-year old boy flying towards the two men.

 

????:´´Are you guys okay? ``

 

Man nr1:´´Oh thank god Element, you came just in time!! ``

 

Element:´´ It looks like you could need some help. ``

 

Man nr1:´´You could say that! We were just doing some finishing touches on the roof when one of the support beams suddenly snapped! ``

Man nr2:´´But lucky for us, we were able to grab onto these chains, but they have somehow snared themselves around our hands, and we can´t get loose! ``

 

Element:´´Alrigth, i´ll see if i can melt the chains. Both of you hold onto eachother and cover your eyes! ``

 

The two builders did what he told them and held onto eachother. Then, the boy aimed his hand against the chains. Then suddenly, fire streamed from his hands and the chains started to melt. When the chains broke, he quickly catched the two men before they even started to fall. On their way down, the men thanked the boy over and over again for saving them. The only one who wasn´t thankful was of course Ben.

 

Ben/Stinkfly:´´Hmpf, who does he think he is?! I´ve could have done that twice as fast! ``

 

He didn´t approve that this ´´Element `` guy just came in and stole HIS opportunity to have some fame and fortune for once. As he flew back to Gwen and Max, a loud beeping noise was heard. The Omnitrix was ticking out. Soon he would just be regular Ben again. He barely landed in front of the Rustbucket before he changed back to his normal state.

 

Max:´´Well, did you save them? ``

 

Ben:´´Didn´t you guys see. Some guy called Element stole my grand entrance to New York City! ``

 

Max:´´Element? That sounds familiar... ``

 

Ben:´´I don´t care! He stole my chance of being hero! ``

 

????:´´Hero? ``

 

Ben almost jumped out of his skin when he heard that. Someone was behind him. He turned around and saw Element right behind him.

 

Element:´´Oh, I´m sorry, did i scare you? Where are my manners? As the protector of this city, I, Element, welcome you to New York City! ``

 

Max:´´Hi, I´m Max Tennyson. And these are my grand-children, Gwen and Ben. ``

 

Element:´´A pleasure to meet you! ``

 

As he was talking to them, he couldn´t fail to see The Omnitrix around Ben´s wrist.

 

Element:´´I´m sorry to have to leave in a hurry, but a hero can´t rest! By the way, Ben, nice watch. ``

 

And with that, he flew away.

 

Gwen:´´Oooh! He´s so handsome! ``

 

Ben:´´Blah, girls! ```

 

To be continued...[/align]

[Gogeta™]

Good long chapter, no much discription, spelling is okay, and when you put words on quotation marks it should look like this " ", this is a good 3/10. Keep trying and check out other Fan Fics to get the idea of writing style and orginization.

[Guest Supreme Gamesmaster]

Not that bad. I warn you, though, we all know Element's evil. That plotline's been used waaay too much for it to be a surprise now. Write in novel format, as novel format >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> script format. Use shift when pressing an apostrophe, and only hit once. Compare: ’ ’blahblah‘ ‘ to "blahblah." The story could turn out well, though. You've got the character personalities down cold, so I expect a highly realistic, if not wholly original, experience. Keep it up; the fanficwriting force is strong with you.

[.:Abarai Renji:.]

I´m back! Chapter 2 will be up and running soon, i hope...

[.:Abarai Renji:.]

Yay! Chapter 2 is up and running! In this chapter, I will tell you about the background of Element. Enjoy!

 

 

[align=center]Chapter 2: The history of Element.

As he was flying away from Ben and the others, Element just kept thinking about that strange device around his wrist. He knew he had seen it before, but he could just not put his finger on where he had seen it. But right now, he had other things to do. It was getting late. He should head home for now. As he was getting home, his thoughts returned to this young boy. Who was he? What did he mean with “Being a Hero”? And what was the device around his wrist? He hoped to get an answer to these questions, in time. Back at his apartment, everything was, as usual, a big mess. His old clothes were thrown on the floor, unclean and reeking with a mixed smell of sweat and ashes. There were pizza boxes all over the place, even in his bed! And the bathroom… Well, I´m not going to tell you just how filthy and stinking it is. THAT, my noble readers, I will leave to your imagination. But for now, enough about his bathroom! As he was sitting on the side of his bed, he picked up an old photo from his side table. In the photo, there was a woman, probably 30-35 years old, and a 40-50-year old man. These two were Element´s (or Tracy, which is his regular name) parents. They both died when he was 10 years old.

 

Tracy:" "sighs" If you only were here, if you only could see me now…"

 

This was the regular life of Tracy Pitcher, regular university student and superhero. His powers, however, was not given to him at birth. He had the misfortune of being caught by the infamous league of scientists that worked for a project known as Project: B.I.O (Bio-genetic Intelligence Officers). Their purpose was to create physically, mentally, and perhaps, even super-powered bio-warriors to aid the Military Forces of the U.S.A. And Tracy was one of the unlucky ones by being chosen to act as a test rabbit for the super-power projects. He was the only one to survive it, and the only one who managed to escape. During his time in the facility, every day he endured searing pain and gruesome treatment, as he was given the ability to manipulate and create fire, water, earth, air, lightning and ice. Then, after 2 months of pain and suffering, the procedure was complete. At this point, the researchers released him from his containment tube and decided to "play" with their new weapon. It turned out to be a fatal decision. Like a beast set loose, Tracy destroyed everything in his path with his new powers, and blasted the research facility to cinders. After that, he learned to take care of himself, but unlike others that experienced the same kind of loneliness, he learned to trust others who wanted to help him.

 

These were almost the only memories he had left of his past; the day he was kidnapped by the scientists of Project: B.I.O, the 2 months of pain and torture, and the day he escaped. But faith smiled upon him, as he was able to be accepted into the Washington University, one of the finest schools in America, and having achieved the title Hero of the U.S.A.

 

Tracy looked at the photo for several minutes, until he put it back at the side table, went to the kitchen, and grabbed a slice of pizza from the fridge, not caring of how long it have been there (since his powers rendered him immune to almost all diseases known to men), and jumped onto the sofa. As he was eating the pizza, his thoughts once again returned to Ben and his "watch". Until he finally thought that he had found a reasonable solution to it, his phone rang. He jumped out of the sofa and grabbed the phone.

 

Tracy: "Hello?"

 

The Police Officer: "Element? Thank God I’ve found you! We have a hostage situation at the Central Bank, come quickly!"

 

Tracy: "Alright, I´m on my way!"

 

He threw the phone back at place and rushed out of the door, down the stairs and out of the apartment.

 

Tracy: " "sighs" Never a dull moment".

 

To be continued…[/align]