Jamop CardMaker Posted August 5, 2008 Report Share Posted August 5, 2008 Here they are... Rate/Hate Them... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Void Old Posted August 6, 2008 Report Share Posted August 6, 2008 Hyurwekywi: Put the effect 1 line below the Fusion Material, not on the same line. Second sentence should be "This card gains 300 ATK for each Beast-Type monster you control or in your hand." The picture would be nice with a background. ^_^ Knight Dragon of Hyt: OCG is solid. ^_^ Needs a background though. Team of Ocelot: Don't capitalize the O in of in the card name, since it's a minor word like the and isn't at the front of the name. OCG fix: If you activate this card, you cannot Summon other monsters this turn. Special Summon 3 "Ocelot Tokens" (Beast-Type/DARK/Level 3/ATK 1000/DEF 1000). Picture is a little real-life-like and I'd make it so that these can't be Tributed to power it down a bit. This could be a deadly swarmer even so. Ocelot: OCG fix: All face-up non-Beast-Type monsters on the field lose 200 DEF during each of your Standby Phases. Picture needs a background. ;) Op: his/her=their, and this is massively overpowered. Yata-Garasu was the main reason the banned list was made and it's much less powerful than this. Oraca: OCG fix: FLIP: This card gains 1500 DEF.Remember, increase is outdated now. The picture is a little to real-life-like. Tiger: OCG fix: All non-Beast-Type monsters lose 200 DEF during each of your Standby Phases. This card gains 300 ATK for each "Hyt" monster you control or in your hand. Picture is too real-life-like again, sorry. :? Trapped: Non Warrior-Type monster=non-Warrior-Type monster. I like it. ^_^ Remember, Set ID should be _ _ _ _-EN_ _ _ Fill the blanks with letters in the first set of blanks and numbers in the last. Don't say 1st Edition, because the card maker makes it 1ST EDITION. And LIMITED EDITION cards need a gold sticker. Here: [img=http://i34.tinypic.com/21jr9mh.jpg] Put that on your card with an image editor or leave your circulations blank. Fix the above and they'll be GREAT! Right now they get 7/10 Keep making cards, I'll be keeping an eye on them. ^_^ I hope I helped. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragon God Posted August 6, 2008 Report Share Posted August 6, 2008 OCG errors.6.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SeiyamaruSisco Posted August 6, 2008 Report Share Posted August 6, 2008 lots of errors, 6/10, pics need backgrounds. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted August 6, 2008 Report Share Posted August 6, 2008 Pics could be betterEffects kinda plain-ishIdea is ... ok.7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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